Stuck at Montgomery Mall

Poor man's version of The Wal*Mart Game. A good try, at least, and I am glad to say that your storytelling has improved to an extent, and your use of items and variables, while a bit flawed, was a nice touch.

However, there are still grammar, storytelling, and spelling errors in many different places, and it seems as if you took most of your ideas directly from the Wal*Mart game.

On the plus side, a few lines did induce some chuckling. For example, "Other purposes include: knocking out terrorists." made me snicker.

You can't even get to Macy's There is no way to Win.

It's literally just a copy of the Wal*Mart game..

Wow.

Why is it on the Horror section? It is just a lame copy of The Walmart Game.

Really boring...failed copy of the Walmart Game

A few grammar and spelling errors in this story. It could certainly have more detail, but I understand this is one of the complex design structures, and well done for making it as well as you have.

Very similar to the Wal*mart game. There were quite a few bugs and grammar errors that you should probably fix.

I don't know for sure, but it looks like there's no way to win because of the bugs in this game. This game is also riddled with bad grammar, and the game in general is a bit too similar to "The Wal*Mart Game" for me to dismiss it as a coincidence.

I hate this game, and I am sure many people feel the same way. So I am going to tell you all the secret to winning here:

DO NOT go into the mechanics room before using the perfume at Salvation Army, otherwise you lose the perfume and am stuck in the game with no way to get out except by dying.

These dead end games are horrible. Please, edit it so that we can't go into the mechanics room before getting the terrorist outfit.