The 28th Hunger Games

When you join the careers there is an end link, why is that? Still keeping my original rating
1/8

worst ever

Game sucked so much ass it could be called the 26th Ass-Eating Games.

I liked it but one problem where am I supposted to lick to get to the next part?

It seemed to easy for a level five.

Well this is one of the stories I found odd.

There was little in the way of explanation or introduction so I assume you went with the 'everyone knows hunger games' but then also skipped any character development or training etc. that might draw a player into the story.

So again I made an assumption 'the author is skipping those bits as all they want to write is a survival in the arena story'. But then each page was only a sentence, there was no elaboration and the game ended after a few pages no matter the choices.

There also appear to be messed up links as the gender of 'Jordan' swapped a few times.

Add in some background and char development, put more then one or two sentences on each page and make it longer and your ratings might go up.

This game sucks and is like 3 sentences long. What???

Strange structure for a story game. Instead of immediately ending the game, give us a chance to click the "go back" button.

And instead of skipping an EXTREMELY important training, and the MORE IMPORTANT character development, include that in the story please.

The concept is good but it was a bit bizarrely constructed. Text like "Jordan was not expected to survive, for she was blind" sounds a bit like something that could have come out of the King James Bible and the descriptions are way too brief: I've read the books and seen the films and was still baffled by what was going on. The Hunger Games are a terrific topic for good writing but unfortunately this wasn't.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to short and boring