The Soul Adventure of Grobyc Dior Fortree

Purge this out of here. PLEASE!

I think I'm just going to start commenting my rating and then briefly explaining why I rated it as I did.
1/8
Why?-I just didn't like it, plus there's quite a bit of errors.

To transverse yourself, you have to learn alchemy.
But can alchemy answer questions like:

Why is an Edokko named Grobyc? Nearly every character in this seems to have been named by drawing handfuls of Scrabble tiles.

What was the point of all that horrible SHOUTING poetry about the deer? I never even met a deer, just a girl that I got down from the wall "somehow" who told me way too much about alchemy.

Who is Master Viper, and why was I "somehow" "suddenly" transported to his alternate dimension for a few lines of cryptic dialogue?

What the heck does "transverse yourself" mean, anyway?

This is terrible and boring. The grammar just gets worse as you go along and there are so few choices. What's up with the completely useless alchemy page?

I think this story might be guilty of plagiarism with that alchemy page. I have to give it a 1/8 because of that, as well as a very poorly executed plot and grammar issues.

Spelling was bad, grammar was bad, plot was confusing and pretty-much non-existent.

... This is terrible...

I do want to weep. N jke. 1/8

This game has to many one choices!!!!!!!

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