The Time Chair

I'm unpublishing this because it's not really a CYOA. All wrong choices lead nowhere. Fix this up (particularly your spelling and grammar) and add some other branches and then republish it.

The "wrong" choices force you to go back and pick the other path.

Short and not enough options but good concept and story line

Add more possible endings; even though my first game is pretty short, there are a bunch of ways it could end, and that got me some higher ratings.

A story that could be good, with a lot of mistakes fixed, and choices fleshed out. Creepy and Ginger were never propperly identified. How did we meet Creepy, and how did Ginger become our sworn enemy?

You need to add a lot more to this before it can be good. the biggest part i hated (other than the linear storyline) was the fact that you can only make two choices. i suggest you make this way more complex. Anything that deal with traveling in time is ALWAYS too complicated to understand the entire story until the very end.

this was not a choose your own adventure story. this was a very short story with a very large number of mistakes in it.

You know, for a game about ignoring the constraints of chronological time, it is awfully linear. FAIL!!!

Not the best story I've done.