Volatile Times

A fantasy storygame by CrimsonMoon

Player Rating3.36/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 14 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"Trek through the forest"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably be between PG-13 and R.

Player Comments

Finish this! I give it 5/8.

— jack10345 on 9/7/2013 11:33:17 PM with a score of 0

Interesting, even if it's a demo. Your writing style is pleasing to my eyes, with no grammatical mistakes (unless you want an insomniac like me to actually focus).

I do find the choices a bit extreme atm, but maybe you'll open up more paths in due time...

— Swiftstryker on 8/16/2013 11:17:00 PM with a score of 0

Interesting concepts..... Can't wait fr finished product ;)

— Sloe on 8/16/2013 8:34:03 PM with a score of 0

5/8 due to it's unfinished state, however;
I like the story and your style of writing, but there appears to be only one storyline and a lot of choices that will just get you killed. You may be planning to put in a separate story that branches off later in the story, I don't know, but either way, I'd like to see this finished. :) Keep up the good work.

— BobbyParkhurst on 8/16/2013 1:25:00 PM with a score of 0

Make more choices, and don't make one choice that leads ahead, the other to insta-death.

— galobtter on 8/16/2013 10:24:42 AM with a score of 0

I'd have rated this a lot higher if it was actually FINISHED. For the last few pages there were no choices, and I was just clicking randomly...I know it's hard to wait, but most demos are never finished because most people simply do not have the patience to finish the storygame for which they've set up a wonderful beginning.

Please, finish this. 4/8.

— ck23838 on 8/16/2013 7:32:17 AM with a score of 0

Rather linear, not really a CYOA story. Good writing. I would prefer if you waited until you finished the entire story before publishing though.

— urnam0 on 8/16/2013 1:23:26 AM with a score of 0

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Volatile Times

Player Rating3.36/8

Story Difficulty3/8

Play Length3/8

Maturity Level6/8

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