Player Comments on A Yearly Exam of Seasonfield High University

OH SHIT ANIME AS PICTURES HERE WE GO.

Cant say that Ron is a very good student here and should spend a lot more time studying Jesus Christ. This school seems super shit too I would have bombed the test just to get kicked the fuck out.

Even with the plot being simple and short you managed to mix both it and the mini game you included to be something in the akin of bully scholarship in that they both achieved their goal of being enjoyable games that combine two things to make what they are.

For spelling and grammar I didn't really find all that much but given that this story is old I doubt the author will change them anyway.

I honestly would definitely read other works by this author if they were to make more just with how intriguing I found the story.

The end links while super linear were what they are for what the game was in terms of mini games and other sorts.

Definitely something that was enjoyable to play.

I came to the School-Based games, expecting something different. I didn't know what to expect, but it wasn't this. I really enjoyed it! Sure, the grammar isn't the best, but the story was consistent, diverse, action packed, and hilarious (I joined the military at the end)!

This story is definitely worth reading, but maybe a revision to correct grammar and/or any other mistakes throughout it would make this far more popular of a story. I do recommend this to people looking for laughs, as this is definitely far more entertaining than any old exam. I enjoyed the images you used throughout the story as well, as they helped in the narrative to imaging certain characters and settings.

Although, most of the characters seemed to be plot devices rather than characters, with them all being thrown left and right, I did enjoy the characters you spent time developing. The choices were diverse, the story was long, and it kept me reading. These are the types of stories I came here to read, so thank you for the experience!

Interesting :)

I liked the premise of this story, a literal death quiz and one incorrect question meaning death for the unfortunate student. There was also a pretty good variety of pictures that were used in this. But there was some things that I found myself rather perplexed about as I read.

Things such as the motivations of certain characters, and factions and certain actions that they did. Also, there was some issues with grammar that was rather jarring. This story would've certainly benefited from more thorough proofreading.

The effort that was put into this is very apparent however. There's no shortage of choices and that gives this game some good replay value, as I never felt like the story was locking me into one path that I had to take. Even the beginning, many choices are offered in how to get past the exam.

So excellent job on providing many branching paths for the reader. There was one issue in which the teacher who should of been *spoiler* dead earlier, returns in the climax of the story. I found that rather odd to be honest, and that effected my immersion of the story quite a bit.

Those issues aside, this storygame was fun. The lack of polish is the only thing that unfortunately holds it back from being more enjoyable.

...damn. I would not have survived if I was doing that IRL. Thank god for the go back option.

I got two answers wrong at the end the first one google got wrong (I mean I did not know what the thing was and read googles answer wrong) and I guessed at the end but went back and chose the right answers.

Quite interesting

Creepy at times

I loved it

Good

Something a little disturbing...like it.

too short but a very intriguing storyline that could definitely be expanded

i like it!

It was really entertaining and certainly not what I was expecting! Well done~

Oh ha ha i got the exact same mcq's for my eighth grade chemistry class and you call that 12.5 standard basics

That was fun

Terrifying, but a great concept.

Extremely difficult to play due to the horrendous amount of grammatical errors. Storyline was not solid. Not worth the time. Sorry. :((

Meh it was a ok attempt

I won. I want to become a chemical engineer when i grow up. I didn't ever press the back button! woohooo!

MOM DAD!
I'M YOUR DAUGHTER! HOW DID YOU PASS THE TEST AND NOT TELL THAT I YOUR FREAKING DAUGHTER!

Not bad. Very outside the box. Sounds like something Sentinel would write.

i just answered all 6 questions correctly and got the "This is not the path the author wanted you to take " ending and the "Boring ass student" ending.

Considering I have never studied or learned chemistry before, I had to rebel. The storyline was interesting enough, but it just didn't engage me. Additionally, as I mentioned previously, I had no knowledge of chemisty and therefore had no decent chance of passing the test.

weelll....pretty easy( am i the only person who sees the irony here!? sheesh...) p.s hav u heard of google search!?

I guess it was okay.

I lIIIIIIIIke it

Nooooooooooooooobs United

Start by taking a test, end with controls over the school. I passed the test.

THERE'S A PICTURE OF CRONA ON THE FIRST PAGE EEEEEEE I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. Oh my glob, he's my favourite character. c:

This was a bit... WEIRD. Although I know this is from your dream...

Well, that was an interesting read. Considering that I got all of them right (except #1 because I missed the options at the bottom for multiple correct answers) on the first try despite never taking a chemistry class in my life, I'd almost say the test itself was too easy. The fact that there's a totally separate story that goes on if you refuse to engage the test itself was an unexpected bonus. Definitely one of the more interesting storygames on here, although I think it would be much more highly rated if it were in the quiz section, since this was basically just a super-over-developed quiz. (without additional fleshing out of the rebellion path).

That was great!

hate it

lets not do chemistry then...

Two thumbs up.

7/8 hilarious, witty and insightful. Not sure why it's 78, however. I loved the two bomb collar ending. Well done, sir!

Suddenly, I'm glad that my chemistry class was boring, because the alternative doesn't very appealing - although, that's one helluva way to motivate students to study.

I won through the test path, but I wonder if the game is winnable via rebellion?

Eeks!
Ps : hahaha Justin Bieber gosh you shouldve put Option to kill him and I'd give you 9/8 for that!

Disturbing, but entertaining. I won through the test path, none of that crazy rebellion stuff for me. :P

Seriously, ten students survived? Man, that teacher was soft.

I... have nothing against gay romance, but... wtf was that?

Like it, but it was too short.

This game needs to have a part 2.

It was, average. I didn't bother reading the whole thing as it seemed boring. But good for a first story

Psychopaths say "Meh"

Good

This game is underrated.

It was crazy. I like the plot line. It makes me wonder what I would do if my lecture hall professors chained me to a desk and wanted to kill me

I wasn't liking it, until I got to the part where we all go to the fashion place next door and get makeovers. Then I laughed my ass off.

Okaaayyy...

***MINOR SPOILER***

That was awesome. i laughed at the end there, with the cake.

***NORMAL BIT***

I didnt need a calculator. im in 8th grade. THen again people call me smart. Anyways i beat the game without too much hassle. Do more of these! 6/8

ITS HARD!

uhh... no comment

Coming from a Biochem major, I thought this was funny... and also extremely easy (calculator and periodic table not needed-- Granted I have a major advantage to average individual) I wish it were a bit longer though.

ok

5/8. One full point for the hobo who agreed to work for change! Fun and humorous, but this seems somewhat reminiscent of my school. I liked it.

Um, Okaay? what?

2 lenghty!

Pretty good game, a few spelling errors but it didn't take away from the story like some other games I could mention...
Bo approves.

It was a good game.

My ending was cheesy!

It was decent length, with some sort of ideas going on, but the plot was incoherent, and the pics made it even more confusing. Also: "I know that this story needs gammer and spelling corrections." Then fix them before you post. It felt like it was rushed to publication before it was really ready. I think I might enjoy it if it were more polished.

Huh? Man, that was random. Good writing, but random! I didn't really understand what was going on!

the point of the "Death Test" was confusing. But even though i don't know anything about chemistry, i still got a couple right. i was VERY surprised!

Not bad, just some seemed hard to understand. I enjoyed the story, and the idea. I was just confused with the idea that once I joined the JB Republic that the story ended after I drafted 6th graders into the JB Republic. I thought it would have went on longer, but overall. I enjoyed it! Just work a little harder on your spelling.

I had to pee and died, two and a half times

Very good effort for a first game but you've got a lot of problems. Primarily, it always irks me when someone posts "there are a lot of spelling errors and grammatical errors" on the description page. If that's the case, why don't you fix them? In fact, why weren't you writing with a spellchecker in the first place? Beyond that though, you had two other problems. Clarity. You didn't do a great job of introducing the situation, it was often times difficult to understand exactly where I was or what I was doing or why. At one point you were talking about a special book but then I never heard mention of that again. There were a bunch of poorly introduced factions and groups and it was obviously unrealistic. The final problem was continuity. I killed Mr. Teacher in the beginning but then later on, I have to duel him? Why did the teachers attack the military alliance? It was all way too co