After the End

Better than expected!

Looking at the ratings, story length, and that this story is another zombie apocalypse survival story, I did not expect much from this storygame. While it doesn't really bring anything new, it was an enjoyable game to play.

The writing was done well enough, and I didn't notice anything that really distracted me from the story. It was paced fairly well, and seemed to move in a logical direction.

Some areas of this game felt a bit linear and returned me to a previous page before moving forward. As short as this story was, it could have benefited from more choices, branching, and story in general.

However, whatever shortcomings this story may have, I had fun playing it, and that is the whole point after all. With more added, it could have been pretty good.

Overall, a short, enjoyable story.

it ended quick but i kinda liked it

I got the best ending first try :D is there a sequel to this story? I'd like to read it

This is good

I loved it. The idea was amazing but it would have been better if you could use the ítems in your bedroom.

Hooray! I reached the good ending!

The description of the story makes it seem like it has at least a moderate amount of endings but it only has 3 death, master, and complex

I would rate it higher if things didn't end so abruptly.

SPOILER ALERT: Who's Master? Why is she stuttering.

A creepy story could follow this further; it's a good setup.

I have played several zombie story games on this site. I have read some that were excellent and some that were REALLY bad. This was enjoyable. The writing was done well, but I have to say I kind of was just getting started, and then it abruptly ended. Not much resolution or hope for the future. If that was your intention- to kind of leave us in the zombie emergency state at the conclusion of the story, I am curious as to the thought behind that. It feels as though you just got tired of putting more pages into it.
Nevertheless, well done! Solid middle rating.

i LOVED IT