Armed Forces Quest: Terrorist Attack!

Player Rating2.71/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 243 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

Quickly Soldier! Battle Stations you are going to have to make the right choices here, or your life could be taken!

Player Comments

This isn't exactly a storygame. There is no story to it, and virtually no defined characters or backstories. Who am I? Who am I fighting? Who are my comrades? Where is the battlefield located? I have so many unanswered questions for this story, and perhaps I may never get an answer to them. This storygame is far too short and extremely linear: you either pick the right option and get to advance, or pick the wrong option and get slapped in the face with an End Game link.

The writing itself wasn't any better, either. It was basic, choppy and mediocre at best. The average page length was horrendously short, mere sentences per page instead of paragraphs. Nothing was fully explained and the only reward I get for "winning" was some kind of badge that I wouldn't put on my profile or signature anywhere. Instead of having the of satisfaction of finishing a good story, I get nothing.

1/8. This is far from complete. I'm surprised it managed to stay published for this long.
-- MrMustachio on 2/16/2017 10:18:08 AM with a score of 0
So short nice plot but lame length and really, really easy!! Good job but I'd like to see it remade better.
-- Kestrelzoo on 12/2/2016 10:05:56 AM with a score of 0
Way too short, and there are a thousand stories similar to this.
Keep trying :)
-- MinnieKing on 12/1/2016 1:06:52 AM with a score of 0
It was fun??
-- Crazycraft316 on 8/24/2016 9:18:55 PM with a score of 200
this guy spells like a preschooler. let me guess, is he a 4 yr old
-- lars on 6/27/2016 8:51:43 PM with a score of 0
Why is this like this?
-- MilSpec1775 on 5/6/2016 9:46:07 AM with a score of 100
It was way too short. It was a fine game idea however.
-- lolitup4 on 2/29/2016 12:35:37 PM with a score of 200
Extremely short. I probably would've enjoyed this game more if it was longer. I also would love to see variables come into play. I think it's a great start, but I would love to see more work done on this game and it could be great.
-- AllThatIsGold on 1/7/2016 6:06:40 PM with a score of 0
Quite short, but it isn't the most horrible storygame I have played. It wasn't too bad, apart from the grammar and short sentences, it wasn't bad but not too fantastic either.
-- Shadowulf on 12/13/2015 4:18:25 PM with a score of 0
...I can see why this is two stars...Multiple grammar issues, kind of short, and other...things.
-- Avalon on 11/5/2015 12:47:40 AM with a score of 0
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