Player Comments on Choose your Life

Well... that was terrible. Here's why:

PLOT: Well, this game is "choose your life" however, little choice is actually offered. The first few pages of the game are literally "You are a girl. You are tomboy", which doesn't exactly scream RP. You did include a few choices, but they were unrealistic. I clicked run away on the second choice, randomly found money, then became a rich scientist. Basically, your story left my brain yelling "WTF?"

ITEMS: Your use of items to say yes was just annoying. I understand toying around with items to get the mechanic, but if you're going to to do that it's generally better to just use actual items. If you're a young tomboy, why not include a slingshot or something like that to get into trouble or play or whatever it is you come up with? That would include an element of diversity without causing the reader to have to use items for no reason (which trust me, will make you drop in the ratings).

LENGTH: Well, really there wasn't any. Your pages were fairly short - I seem to recall seeing some with 3 lines apiece. The game wasn't long (in regards to page #) at all either, and the combination of the two makes it look like you don't put effort into your storygames regardless of how accurate that statement actually is.

Also, I didn't include this in my rating process because that would be wrong, but you should watch what you rate other stories. You give just about everything an 8, while otherwise the normal votes would be a 4.

2/8

I meant to press the top one sorry I bumped the wrong one while reading it 🙃

E 4 out of 10 haha
😆 hah

THIS Was AWFUKLKLLL IT DDINT EVEN MAKE SENSE NEER PLAYING VEVER AGAIN

THIS THANG SUCKS CUCUMBERS

it sucks ass

Very chaotic,i like it

This is the best game ever

i love this

boring

I changed my mind!!!!!!!

WHY IS THIS GAME SO SHORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Horrible game
Bad plot
Bad items
Bad in generallll

Jansen caldera Ankaras Canaanite brand

Can’t the tomboy swim?

better then homework

wtf this is so stupid

I just wish it was longer but other then that its actually good

its stupid

Nice

This game needs more options and more steps. How do you get from trouble maker to scientist? How do you become something other than tomboy or girl?

its okay except the you are a girl and it want give you a choice to pick a different gender then you became a tomboy and then its says a girl that acts like a tomboy i think you could do more with this and turn it into something great dont stop now make it a wonderful story

stay away from me...

i love itnot

funny and entertaining

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Good

this game sucks not fun at all chose another hobby please

There are only a few options and they all have stupid consequences.

this game is no fun. there are no real choices

This was not fun because there were not many choices.

Boring to the max

why can we only be a girl and act like a tomboy?!?!?!

It was a bit boring and you should add a bit more to it. This is my advice.

Very bad game. Literally nothing happens. It is one choice options and in the end I grew up to be a scientist. What because I stole money from a teacher? Worst game ever.

it sucks i think you should add pictures and have actual choses it is fine if you want to be bored i my rating is a 2

Short but fun ;-;

Really not much to do. I wanted more. I even went back and did the other options but there are very few options.

I like it

This game is lots of fun but it,s not the funest thing in the world.

Mysterious... and violent. The only good thing is that it has many endings.

this game left me at.....BORED TO DEATH

Look, this was stupid. If you are so bored, there's absoloutely nothing on the internet to do, then you can do this, but it's really bad. I'm sorry if i hurt your feelings, but I'm also ten, and i'm not this stupid.I mean, there were no choices, really. And then all the questions were meaningless. You had to choose some silly option.That's no fun. I've played Alter Ego, for free, and that means, the 'waiting' session adds up to ONE HOUR while the game play is less than that. But it's worth it. If you need some inspiration, play it. On google. But if you need some coding skills, check out CodeMasters.com- How to Code. BUT,you really need some grammar lessons. Maybe when you get A+ in English or Grammar, create one.
BUT have you EVER played ANY life simulation games before?
Bitlife? Life Chronicles? My Virtual Life? Elvenar?

Well, please do, and when you have improved in Grammar coding and have sustained inspiration and idea, please make one again. I would love to play it. Send the link to my email.


But your game is good. Not that bad. For boredom, okay.
Compared to other games? -O points-

I appreciate your effort in creating a game,and at Ten, we can't expect you to create a app. Haha!
But I don't think you tried till your limit. You didn't use the best of your abilities/ skills.

You didn't try much as you could.

you did it easy and simply, which i like. it's never nice to go too extravergant or too fancy.

it looks like it was a week's period of building, the game.

but imagine if you had put in more effort, spent more time, tried better,

you could have reached a post high as Call me Emperor Did!

But i like it.

improve and learn,
may you be sucesfull in your journey forth

badd well a little bit bad

ok this game sucked ): i really expected better

there has to be romance and sex

It was f***ing stupid.

this is so shitty like what if i was a boy or didnt want to be a tomboy and like there's barely any choices and its too short like wtf? ?????? congrats on being shitty on life??

I guess I liked it it was okay

It wasnt really real tbh if you know what i mean no offence.

And there were a lot of spelling mistakes.

You can only star life as a girl and it sucks.

this was a very very boring games it could have been better and had more options. you could have also made the games longer

this is fucking shit. like you dont evem have many choices, it doesn't do anything, its too FUCKING SHORT, like what if you're a boy? (though im a girl) THIS SUCKS

Wth , i was born a girl but i am not tomboy this was very shitty do not play

its....not the best....but not the worst either....

bad

i think this is kinda good probably oh and any body for 2018 cause i am

Yeesh i kill people apparently oh well what a sucky game

I think I like this game so much that I wanna keep playing.

This game is okay I would not play if you are a trouble maker though like me because you will end up having a short story and I became a scientist which is weird because I don't like science I like math,writing,and reading but it was kind of fun actually I don't recommend this game at all it was really boring of the three seconds that I actually played the game so ya that is my final opinion that this game sucks and I don't suggest it at all.

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AWSOPME

Did not get it

This game was pretty good

i liked this game even though it was some times confessing

Boring...And short...Make better or do whatever but it's NOT worth your 5 minutes.

I ran away, stole money, and became a scientist. In another version, i skipped school twice, and was suddenly a killer. Like, what?!

that was terrible. it could be better if you put more work into it.

Terrible

You are born a girl.
You are a girl. Congratulations!

LOL?

Its too short and it was a bit weird but still it was an interesting read.

This game did not allow you to choose your life. You had to be a troublemaker and somehow you steal money and that sets you on the past to be a scientist? Not likely. 1/8

This game is stupid. It makes no sense. Rethink your coding as well.

Didn't really have too many descisions and was too short and really confusing of to what was going on. And didn't really make me care about the character I was and everything. This needs a lot of work to be good. But I'm guessing English isn't your first language.

its okay i guess

Horrible don't do it

i was blown away

one mintune i am sneaking in schol the next the story over

It sucked

this game is a pice of shit its not a rpg its bad please take this down as it is fuking dreadfull

A "yes" item? First off, the use of items tells me that this is an advanced game. In an advanced game, there is no excuse for expecting the reader to remember their previous choices. You can use variables to make the game do that for them. Secondly, the endings don't reflect your choices in the least and actually suggest to me that this is nothing more than a troll game. I'm sorry, but I can't give this more than a 2.

This was the most boring game I have EVER played in my life!!!

short.... fuck off

Poor writing. Poor story. Very boring.

First, the "Goody goody" ending has a dead link.

The story was rubbish. The writing was very bad with minimal descriptions and it all centered around schools.

uhhh... how come i was a scientist because i was a trouble maker? that was really confusing... and short.

It has barely any choices

It was pretty much bullshit all the way. Even if you ARE ten or eleven years old, kids that age have written MUCH better content than your miserable pile of crap. If you had even half a brain, you would've been asking for guidance first, not writing like some idiot. Oops, slash that out. YOU ARE AN IDIOT.

Not very detailed. And how did I become a scientist by running away from home?

8/8

Because I became an assassin

Uhh... Well good try but if you're going to make a choose your life story you should probably give the option of whether they're a boy or a girl.

What kind of game is this? I didnt really understand what was going on at all

This wasn't really a choose your own...I think that if you were going to make it so simple and vague then you could at least have multiple gender choices and personality choices. Spelling and grammar weren't very good, storyline was just stupid...I didn't like it.

I'm not exactly sure how being a child terror and thief, while never attending a day of school would result in my becoming a scientist?
The concept is good, but I suggest checking out playalterego.com. That should give you a good idea of what you can achieve with this concept. Take that and create a more story/descriptive oriented game and you will have a great thing going! :D

I refer you to my random game, RANDOMNESS, to see what true random is all about.

Haha, honestly not bad. The use of items was odd, but it was there. Also, having five endings is cool. taking that at face value makes a game sound pretty good. If you are ten, as you say you are, than I think you did okay. I'm pretty sure you can do better though! Try giving us more depth. Smooth out some of the oddities, like using an item called "Yes" to continue was trifle unneeded. I'm sorry people are pooping on your game! Keep it up. You will only get better. :D

I didn't really understand what was going on. You said in the title that I'm supposed to choose my life but I don't even get to choose my gender or personality(Why am I a tomboy? Can't I be something else?) Also, very simple choices determined the rest of my life which isn't that realistic. You did use items and have different options which is good to see though.

2/8

I steal and become a scientist?

Well, I wasn't a big fan. I don't want to sound rude, but there were some things that really bothered me in this. First of all the "You are a tomboy". Yes, in real life you can't choose your gender, so I won't really mention that, but you can choose your personality. Not many choices, except for some stuff in school. And speaking of which, how does sneaking out of a assembly get me rich? And the item "yes". What's that for? Why is it an item? If you were going to make a new one, I would probably allow it to go further than your childhood, allow more choices and personal development, and have actual items. Again, not trying to be rude. Just some constructive criticism.

What? How did I end up a scientist? And why did there need to be pages with one link on them, which explained what a word meant? If I didn't save my two's and one's for garbage, this would get a lower score, but you could end up making it a good game if you try harder.
Don't give the reader a single year in life, and then give the person's life career. That's not how it works. If it worked the way you made it seem, I would be studying rocket science.

Somehow I ended up with 2 'Yeses'. It was a bit odd, but not intentionally terrible like a lot of the recent games have been. Keep at it =)

So the only choices you make in life are your behavior during your first days of school?
The pages are extremely short and I really don't understand why "Yes" is an item.
Overall I'd say you need to put far more time and effort into your game, and come up with a more exciting concept.

Some-one else play this.
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I enjoyed it 8/8 it was fun