Player Comments on Choose Your Own Agar.io

2/8

It's a simple enough premise.
I've played Agar.io before and actually do enjoy it, but I don't think that's a game that can be properly emulated to storygame format, and that isn't your fault. It's a quick response game, and playing a storygame version just can't compare to the real deal.
The writing was short and simple, which I suppose works.
You didn't overdo it which was okay, I suppose.
Overall it was just meh (not in a bad way) but it just didn't draw me in.

The reader should have a sense of what is to come upon choosing a choice. This game needs to be a little more fleshed out, but I appreciated that the author understood what interactive fiction means and made the game not so linear. Still, the branches that are already present should be a little expanded upon; the endings feel a little abrupt.

Well, I only have one thing to say- Agar.io took over YouTube and the Internet, and now it has reached CYStia.
Your grammar is odd at times, but not so horrid it draws me away from the story.
I would've preferred some more explanations on the concept of Agar.io. You can't expect everyone to know exactly what the game is about. For those who do NOT know, Agar.io is a game where you become a cell, and the goal is to eat tiny cells and kill other players to grow in size (and to grow your rank on the server leaderboard).
For such an open topic, I would've expected a longer story. Maybe some options as to what direction you want to go to?
For now, Choose Your Own Agar.io gets a 3/8.

6/8
This described a classic game of Agar.io

DOGE ENDINGS RULE!

uhh im new to this website so subscribe to that one alien from rhythm heaven megamix.

its fun

I really enjoyed it

I really enjoyed it

I liked it. I couldn't find the secret ending but I used up more of the time I have on this game that I might not make my goal today so... ever onwards!

5/10 would play again

Even though I have played Agar.io, I see no reason to make a game about it. Even though it was funny sometimes. The endings are good, but all the other pages have just ONE Sentence. Good effort, but could be majorly improved.

You could, you could play this. But why? why would you do that?

It's a nice game, I liked the clan thing.
I got to one of the good endings, but didn't quite make it to the best one, apparently. Might try for it later.
6/8

i just couldnt say iy was better than reeses

bitch ass hoe

I really love playing this
It's short enough to go trough a lot of the choices
While still having fun.

Nice storyline,but as others have said the game invokes reaction time,not a slow pace clicking game.

Sorry if that last part messed up my love for this.

Nice

Haha funny! Make it longer and more challenging!!

What?

Hi, big fan

A Cute Little Story To Pass The Time.

this is amazing. agar.io is amazing and this captured that awesomeness in story form.

I tried everything, there is no really good ending other than the Om Nom Nom ending.

Ummm... What just happened?

this is cute.... got me a few hardy chuckles yet was not linear like i thought it would be not bad... sorry but also learn to pick out better words you used gobble about 3 maby 6 times an it was short story so it matters. im a claner tho hee hee..... my clan tags :*\/*:

"With the death of KillaX comes the downfall of the K-X clan. You eat everyone around you; most of them just give up and suicide. The server eventually goes into sudden death, but everybody still gives up. You are left the king, with 56,000 mass.


You took down a clan single-handedly. Good job. This ending gets an 8/8. It's the sixth ending, by the way.


But wait.


This ending may have gotten an 8/8, but it isn't the best ending. There is one more, super-secret ending. See if you can find it. (It really is there, I'm not just being a troll.)


Once you get that, you can really say you beat the game."

I'll say, so... how to get the secret ending? ;)

To beat the monster I had to become the monster. Cries self to sleep at loss of his humanity.

I liked it

Felt just like I was playing the game

How you get spoopy secret ending, ya?

I can't find the secret secret ending where is it >.< ???

Beat the game

It was a very nice petite story, I spent tons of time as it was relatable. The choices didn't make much meaning to me, but the endings you had were really good. Humor, non linearity. If that's what you want then read this story game.

DAMN DANIEL I had real fun doing this xD so much laughing and creativity put in this! keep up and make some more!

XD its so cool!

CHOOSE DOGE FUNNY AS HELL

Very fun

I like it. It amused me, and as far as I could see, there wasn't any grammar, spelling, punctuation (etc.) errors.

This is just beautiful xD

i like doge memes.

It's cute and realistic

It was very fun. It had a different way of doing things and the author explained the story well.

YES I GOT THE DICK ENDING

I got the Traitor ending. Huh, guess i got the secret ending and didn't knew.

I got the "Who's Side Are You On?" ending. Oh, man. But still not gained my secret ending. Let's get it now.

Got the Betrayer ending. Just one more ending!

Got the Clan Control ending. 2 more to finish completely the story!

Wow, got the Heroic ending. I really like this story. I really do.

Got the Om Nom Nom ending. But 8/8 isn't enough. I will find the secret ending!

Got the fifth ending. I will call it the Bait ending.

Good! Got the Doge ending. Will be replaying the story.

good

How do you find the secret ending?

Eat your children.
This is karma, you sick, sick bastard.
Haha I got some laughs from that...

im solo good

XD Good but needs more length

lol i like this server

This was great fun. I'm going to go play Agar.io

I created a doge clan :)

COOL

i like it

good game

Meh... but also <i>meh</i>

I used to play agar.io all the time, then I found chooseyourstory.com. This was a moderately good game and because I enjoy agar.io, you get a 7/10.

Good job.

this is annoying when you die at the number 40899

Lol gr8 story

NIce

It was a good bit of fun! ^-^
This makes me wanna go join a clan on Agar.io
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OuO

It has a few spelling errors and isn’t that funny, but you managed to turn Agar.io into a choose your own adventure, and a fun one at that. I would recommend it. Rating: 5.

So good

Had my laughs out of it, but it wasn't too enjoyable in my opinion. Good try though.

I really like that one. It was fun.

This is like the only way I'll ever get #1 in argar.io

Only enjoyed by connoisseurs of Agar.io

It's a storygame about Agar.io so it couldn't have had a plot. I think it was OK.

To awesomeness1242:

After one month of having this game published, I've read it, and... you're right. It is kind of bland. And agar.io doesn't really work in CYS, either. I've moved on to other things now, but I really do appreciate your comment.

This is an awesome game! I really enjoyed it, it was hilarious. By the way, I chose "Doge" and got ending 7/8!

Doge is always the best in agar.io <3

I have to admit that I was curious what you planned on doing with the blob game.

Such doge ending. Much good. So satisfy.

Just because the Doge ending is mighty sweg, I don't see a reason to rate this game 7/8.

It's more of a 3/8