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"Walk in the park"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
In this game you play April, a pretty co-ed who has been dumped by her boyfriend. Now she is ready to find new guy and your going to help her!
I noticed many grammatical errors in your book, and some dialogues which you added in weren't exactly necessary. I noticed that whenever you turned down a guy, there would be a brief paragraph about April cribbing about Eric dumping her, and that basically is the end of the game. I would change that if I were you, since that makes the game short and uninteresting as we would want another candidate to date. Like, when April was crying underneath the tree, another man could have comforted her, and then they could have fallen in love and you would have another ending. You see?
This game was somewhat amusing to me, and I liked it. Just work on your grammar, add more intricate details, and the plot wasn't really that strong nor did you develop your characters that much, so I would work on that if I were you.
I see that you put some effort in this, so well done. This certainly isn't the worst nor the best, but if you put more time and sweat into this game, it can certainly be better.
on 11/10/2017 1:37:10 PM with a score of 0
useless writing, boring, way too short, could be spicier
— WHOCARES on 6/15/2023 5:10:56 AM with a score of 0
it was kinda short and you missplelled some words. i dont really like it
— felina on 4/26/2023 6:25:46 PM with a score of 0
I got a good ending but how can you get so fat and that was bad ending this is good over alll
on 4/24/2023 3:57:00 AM with a score of 0
Short but awesome
— 111 on 4/21/2023 7:57:44 AM with a score of 0
It was a very interesting story with amazing twists and turns.
— Ariana on 3/15/2023 2:55:38 AM with a score of 0
— jayden on 2/27/2023 12:30:28 AM with a score of 0
Pretty good, but kinda short…
— SweetButPsycho on 12/21/2022 12:45:58 PM with a score of 0
While there are lots of choices, there end up only being three endings. I find it...mildly unrealistic that there are only three guys, and the moment the player meets the guy you can only choose to either stick with them forever or ditch them and cry. There should be more options that affect whether or not you end up with the guy.
on 12/8/2022 2:25:32 PM with a score of 0
— Bliss on 11/4/2022 9:44:38 PM with a score of 0
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