College Romance

I noticed many grammatical errors in your book, and some dialogues which you added in weren't exactly necessary. I noticed that whenever you turned down a guy, there would be a brief paragraph about April cribbing about Eric dumping her, and that basically is the end of the game. I would change that if I were you, since that makes the game short and uninteresting as we would want another candidate to date. Like, when April was crying underneath the tree, another man could have comforted her, and then they could have fallen in love and you would have another ending. You see?

This game was somewhat amusing to me, and I liked it. Just work on your grammar, add more intricate details, and the plot wasn't really that strong nor did you develop your characters that much, so I would work on that if I were you.

I see that you put some effort in this, so well done. This certainly isn't the worst nor the best, but if you put more time and sweat into this game, it can certainly be better.

3/8.

good

well it was fine not rly good but not bad either good work tho

Eh, decent, descriptive, but lots of grammer errors ._.

Fun, but a little too short. Nice game though.

Its so short

Okay, this is good but seriously short. Maybe if you lengthened it I would've rated?

I knew dat was coming :D

I like it but...it could use some work.please

Grammatical errors. But, OK. It was short. Wish it was longer. Time flied by pretty fast.