College Romance
A
love & dating
storygame by
Amaliel
Player Rating
3.44/8
"#715
overall
, #33 for
2001
"
Based on
1498 ratings
since 12/14/2004
Played 36,476 times (finished 2,171)
Story Difficulty
2/8
"Walk in the park"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
5/8
"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
Tags
Romance
Serious
In this game you play April, a pretty co-ed who has been dumped by her boyfriend. Now she is ready to find new guy and your going to help her!
Player Comments
I noticed many grammatical errors in your book, and some dialogues which you added in weren't exactly necessary. I noticed that whenever you turned down a guy, there would be a brief paragraph about April cribbing about Eric dumping her, and that basically is the end of the game. I would change that if I were you, since that makes the game short and uninteresting as we would want another candidate to date. Like, when April was crying underneath the tree, another man could have comforted her, and then they could have fallen in love and you would have another ending. You see?
This game was somewhat amusing to me, and I liked it. Just work on your grammar, add more intricate details, and the plot wasn't really that strong nor did you develop your characters that much, so I would work on that if I were you.
I see that you put some effort in this, so well done. This certainly isn't the worst nor the best, but if you put more time and sweat into this game, it can certainly be better.
3/8.
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DiniTheWizard
on 11/10/2017 1:37:10 PM with a score of 0
good
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— kayla on 5/28/2022 3:21:21 PM with a score of 0
well it was fine not rly good but not bad either good work tho
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— vantae on 4/30/2022 2:55:02 AM with a score of 0
Eh, decent, descriptive, but lots of grammer errors ._.
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SwagBread
on 1/15/2022 12:41:06 AM with a score of 0
Fun, but a little too short. Nice game though.
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— Mira on 1/8/2022 12:23:25 PM with a score of 0
Its so short
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Willie
on 9/15/2021 9:11:56 PM with a score of 0
Okay, this is good but seriously short. Maybe if you lengthened it I would've rated?
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— BlueJayGamer on 2/18/2021 1:24:24 PM with a score of 0
I knew dat was coming :D
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— oh mah gosh on 2/1/2021 12:59:33 PM with a score of 0
I like it but...it could use some work.please
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— Shannon on 1/4/2021 2:36:09 PM with a score of 0
Grammatical errors. But, OK. It was short. Wish it was longer. Time flied by pretty fast.
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anneisin
on 12/15/2020 6:48:56 PM with a score of 0
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