College Romance

I noticed many grammatical errors in your book, and some dialogues which you added in weren't exactly necessary. I noticed that whenever you turned down a guy, there would be a brief paragraph about April cribbing about Eric dumping her, and that basically is the end of the game. I would change that if I were you, since that makes the game short and uninteresting as we would want another candidate to date. Like, when April was crying underneath the tree, another man could have comforted her, and then they could have fallen in love and you would have another ending. You see?

This game was somewhat amusing to me, and I liked it. Just work on your grammar, add more intricate details, and the plot wasn't really that strong nor did you develop your characters that much, so I would work on that if I were you.

I see that you put some effort in this, so well done. This certainly isn't the worst nor the best, but if you put more time and sweat into this game, it can certainly be better.

3/8.

need to be longer

really bad, and what the hell happned with doug and eric
ugh STAY AWAY

It was a VERY quick game

And why do I drown in my sleep for marrying the love of my life?!!

This was probably the worst dating game, maybe even the worst "choose your story" game I have ever played. PERIOD. I hate the way it is set up.

it is a folcking shit for me

It's nice, I like the way that there are different guys in the game
nice job :)

this needs to more like beeter and longer

Literally 2 pages bro