Player Comments on College Romance
I noticed many grammatical errors in your book, and some dialogues which you added in weren't exactly necessary. I noticed that whenever you turned down a guy, there would be a brief paragraph about April cribbing about Eric dumping her, and that basically is the end of the game. I would change that if I were you, since that makes the game short and uninteresting as we would want another candidate to date. Like, when April was crying underneath the tree, another man could have comforted her, and then they could have fallen in love and you would have another ending. You see?
This game was somewhat amusing to me, and I liked it. Just work on your grammar, add more intricate details, and the plot wasn't really that strong nor did you develop your characters that much, so I would work on that if I were you.
I see that you put some effort in this, so well done. This certainly isn't the worst nor the best, but if you put more time and sweat into this game, it can certainly be better.
on 11/10/2017 1:37:10 PM with a score of 0
Okay, this is good but seriously short. Maybe if you lengthened it I would've rated?
-- BlueJayGamer on 2/18/2021 1:24:24 PM with a score of 0
I knew dat was coming :D
-- oh mah gosh on 2/1/2021 12:59:33 PM with a score of 0
I like it but...it could use some work.please
-- Shannon on 1/4/2021 2:36:09 PM with a score of 0
Grammatical errors. But, OK. It was short. Wish it was longer. Time flied by pretty fast.
on 12/15/2020 6:48:56 PM with a score of 0
THIS WAS SO STUPID AND BORING
-- Emma on 12/14/2020 11:19:12 AM with a score of 0
-- Enma on 11/28/2020 12:55:30 AM with a score of 0
Fun to read
on 8/18/2020 9:11:33 AM with a score of 0
its a bit boring but good in a way. wish it was longer
on 7/19/2020 10:53:25 PM with a score of 0
It lasted 30 seconds even when I chose carefully. It's okay, though.
on 4/22/2020 8:36:16 PM with a score of 0
good...for you to poop on, and then let it get ruined, in other words, stay far far, far, far, far, far away from this.
-- Emma on 4/14/2020 12:17:53 PM with a score of 0
It is sooo short and it was toooo easy this is crap
on 2/16/2020 4:09:06 PM with a score of 0
it was over sooo quickly and i was disappointed. it is definitely leading you towards a specific answer.
-- kayce on 12/19/2019 6:40:11 AM with a score of 0
Not enough story sorry make it longer any of the options is one then ur don’t sorry need to make the story longer and deeper, like go through a whole year of college like classes and study time and love and even sexual part too would be great
on 11/27/2019 12:28:27 AM with a score of 0
This game is absulute trash
on 10/6/2019 5:23:34 PM with a score of 0
Good for You to poop on
-- Rose on 9/23/2019 10:24:44 PM with a score of 0
Would've loved to live happily with Marc!! XD
-- Tara Lynn Nikoma on 8/28/2019 1:38:45 AM with a score of 0
Ummmm.... Very,very boring
-- Cookie fan on 8/25/2019 3:49:38 PM with a score of 0
It's really short, but enjoyable.
-- someone on 7/31/2019 9:25:03 PM with a score of 0
kinda fucking short lmao
-- Kaytee on 7/26/2019 8:29:48 PM with a score of 0
It was good, just really short....
on 6/30/2019 9:50:20 PM with a score of 0
my number is no
You need to let it go
Need to let it go
Need to let it go
-- my name is no on 6/9/2019 8:03:08 PM with a score of 0
on 6/6/2019 8:17:30 AM with a score of 0
I like how you and doug get revenge... Thats my fav part of dating
on 4/5/2019 12:57:00 PM with a score of 0
It was super short, it didn't have that much love and flirting in it. I hate the ending where you get drunk and die, and how when you say no you are depressed. Like just get over that dumb ass boy bitch! I don't really like this story. I'm sorry if I'm a little mean, but so when you make another story you will no to make it long and good
-- Lizzie on 3/23/2019 9:09:18 AM with a score of 0
-- Kiki on 2/16/2019 1:42:12 PM with a score of 0
it was super short..
on 2/3/2019 2:54:32 PM with a score of 0
Very short experience. Could use some detail or a descriptive scene.
-- Annie on 2/3/2019 11:09:47 AM with a score of 0
A bit short and not super engaging.
on 1/8/2019 10:13:02 PM with a score of 0
I really wanted to like this but it was a bit too short, and each path was only two options, there really was no depth in the story, and I finished this in less than a minute (every option)
I'm sorry, no offence to the author of course!
-- Genny on 8/26/2018 5:55:50 PM with a score of 0
Really short. Didn’t enjoy playing
-- Anon on 8/9/2018 8:21:08 PM with a score of 0
It is bored
-- Zahirah on 7/31/2018 3:49:12 AM with a score of 0
too quick and i really didnt fall inlove with the book or feel like a part of the book
-- kellie on 6/27/2018 6:01:27 PM with a score of 0
very short and not written well
-- Carlye on 6/20/2018 4:37:16 PM with a score of 0
I enjoyed it-- but; I believe there should be more of a story, and it should be longer.
on 6/18/2018 9:26:50 PM with a score of 0
on 5/18/2018 11:43:37 PM with a score of 0
-- taylor on 5/13/2018 3:03:05 PM with a score of 0
-- Amanda Moore on 4/27/2018 4:04:51 PM with a score of 0
it was okay
-- Amanda Moore on 4/26/2018 2:00:03 PM with a score of 0
I dont like it!!!
on 4/13/2018 12:30:00 PM with a score of 0
This was pretty short, but kinda cute. I would make this game a little less dramatic - I disliked the ending with Marc particularly. In fact, in real life, Marc is exactly the kind of guy I'd date. So maybe you should include a personality choice that will affect the outcome of dating each of the guys. Apart from that (and the spelling errors) this is very cute! Keep on writing
-- anonymous on 4/8/2018 6:41:19 AM with a score of 0
It is very good but it is super short.
-- Gigi on 4/2/2018 2:51:41 PM with a score of 0
Horrible. Short, no options, poorly written
-- Nicole on 2/26/2018 2:51:08 AM with a score of 0
Very brutal but I do love the ending with my best friend's brother
-- Person on 2/14/2018 6:16:36 PM with a score of 0
I don't like how its so so so so so so so so so so so so so so short
-- yaboijackob on 2/7/2018 6:17:11 PM with a score of 0
cute story for everyone! when I'm old enough I hope my best friend is my sister-in-law XD
-- narwhalsswimmin on 12/21/2017 10:26:23 PM with a score of 0
Loved it soooooooooooooooooo much! I got Jacob XD
-- swimminnarwhals on 10/27/2017 9:34:57 PM with a score of 0
-- llly on 9/25/2017 5:54:17 PM with a score of 0
on 8/27/2017 4:51:37 PM with a score of 0
Hahahaha Marc's ending for the main character is brutal, good game
-- Sam on 7/18/2017 5:11:30 AM with a score of 0
-- Tom on 6/19/2017 9:59:40 PM with a score of 0
Omg tiffany's brother is the way to go
-- Hannah on 5/25/2017 8:04:53 PM with a score of 0
It is lovely. I really recommend it.
Doug- The worst you can get
Marc- Better than Doug but not by much
Jacob- The best you can get!
-- Anonymous on 5/9/2017 2:07:29 PM with a score of 0
-- Nikami on 3/26/2017 6:59:32 PM with a score of 0
Amusing. 101 ways to die much? Lol. Too short!
on 2/27/2017 12:52:31 AM with a score of 0
Short but sweet.
on 2/6/2017 7:48:27 PM with a score of 0
I kept playing this game all night, to see if I would get different answers.
-- Bonbon193 on 1/24/2017 6:29:41 PM with a score of 0
Great story with Jacob , not with that Doug guy... At the end... But thanks for the good read..
-- Batgirl101 on 1/16/2017 8:45:14 PM with a score of 0
way too short... but still good!
-- koolkatkid on 1/3/2017 2:45:30 AM with a score of 0
Uuh.... that was...okay...I guess.
-- Chloe on 11/28/2016 12:36:02 AM with a score of 0
Trophy husband sounds like one helluva deal. Inverse must be equally sweet.
on 11/19/2016 5:40:03 PM with a score of 0
Everyone bitching and moaning about the trophy wife ending needs to step back. I'd be happy to be a high-value man's trophy wife. Nothing would please me more than to put out for an older man in exchange for trips to the spa and those artisan furniture shops. You're all a bunch of ungrateful fucks.
on 11/19/2016 5:07:02 PM with a score of 0
Raising my rating on this one, just because it's pissing off so many people with "sexism."
on 11/19/2016 5:02:02 PM with a score of 0
No, sorry but no. First of all, the "trophy wife" ending was ridiculously sexist. I like to think that I'm smart for my age and the fact that he's "smarter than me" and my character "prefers jocks" felt really insulting. You'd need to fix this quite a bit to make it fun and appealing to more audiences.
on 11/19/2016 4:14:20 PM with a score of 0
what the hell... so unrealistic
-- danielle on 10/22/2016 1:59:15 AM with a score of 0
I drowned in the toilet.
-- Tarbo134 on 10/20/2016 11:45:53 PM with a score of 0
Okay. I took the story twice (took me one minute, it's that short) and now I'm mad. I got a bad ending - I'm fine with that -but what tipped me off was how you wrote "you became less beautiful" and Doug became ugly. Why is a sign of failure ugliness? I remember, the first time I got it, I got a nice enough ending (well, I actually got a terrible one as a trophy wife, but I think you know what I am) it said I was "beautiful". So, are you suggesting that if I'm ugly, I'm not successful? And if I'm beautiful, that's a sign of success? Plus, I hate how the story is just about finding a guy - is there one ending where you end up alone but are still happy? Is the message that if you don't find a guy in college, there's no point to college? Disappointed.
on 10/9/2016 2:47:13 PM with a score of 0
I was actually a bit annoyed by this story. I hate the sexism in it - how I become a "trophy wife" and marry a guy "who's smarter than me" because I don't want to become trophy wife, I want to become as video game designer or a teacher, and most of all an author. I hated when you said "you don't understand half of what he's saying" because I probably would have understood it. I disliked the underlining message that a pretty girl - or any girl - cannot be as smart as a guy. It was also quite short. I'll take it again to see if there are any less sexist endings.
on 10/9/2016 2:40:47 PM with a score of 0
Alright I wish it was longer and there were more dating chooses
-- Keila on 9/30/2016 1:13:46 PM with a score of 0
It was really short...
-- Taylor on 9/9/2016 9:09:34 AM with a score of 0
Didnt like how there is only one good ending
on 8/4/2016 4:13:35 AM with a score of 0
WELL I BECAME THE TROPHY WIFE AND DIED WITH MY HEAD IN THE TOILET.great story
-- magic land on 7/19/2016 11:24:37 AM with a score of 0
Wow, this moved extremely too fast. I went to lunch and the next thing I know I'm married with three kids? I might not be an expert, but I think this skipped a few steps.
on 7/13/2016 8:32:13 PM with a score of 0
This is one of the worst things I have ever read. Give up on all of your dreams. This was bullshit.
-- Anonymous on 7/1/2016 3:23:33 PM with a score of 0
Losing your best friend, getting pregnant and becoming trailer trash, and drowning in the toilet. All within 3 clicks.
This is one of the better romance games on here.
on 6/12/2016 5:44:04 PM with a score of 0
dont go with doug go with tiffany!
-- rogue on 6/12/2016 4:55:29 PM with a score of 0
on 2/26/2016 6:54:09 PM with a score of 0
That's it?! Homework is more enjoyable than the story and I don't want to do the same thing for a while.
-- thelama16 on 2/23/2016 1:22:54 AM with a score of 0
on 9/8/2015 1:56:54 PM with a score of 0
"You realize that he is a bit too smart for you, you've always perferred jocks anyway"
Bwahaha is this written by a bitter highschool boy?
-- Anonymous on 7/23/2015 3:48:54 PM with a score of 0
Not terrible, but a bit boring and short.
-- Jordi P on 7/14/2015 11:42:50 AM with a score of 0
thats stupid ur stupid to make this really find a man fall at ur feet kiss get drunk drowned in towlet who would ever thought of a cruel and stupid thang as this!
-- trintiy on 6/18/2015 8:59:06 PM with a score of 0
Raise your hand if you are never going to drink
Hopefully you don't so you won't drown in the toilet
on 5/17/2015 9:31:50 AM with a score of 0
I DROWNED IN A TOILET. shiver. never going to drink
on 4/22/2015 9:41:37 PM with a score of 0
on 4/20/2015 1:56:36 PM with a score of 0
? sorry but bor-ing
on 4/18/2015 11:59:20 AM with a score of 0
Haha Lunch together = marriage and 3 children. Thank god life is so easy :D
on 3/10/2015 7:51:40 AM with a score of 0
Ehh . . ..
on 3/5/2015 8:30:15 PM with a score of 0
on 2/26/2015 6:41:53 PM with a score of 0
on 1/8/2015 8:20:11 PM with a score of 0
Um.... This is a bit confusing. Choose the wrong guy and you end up having a bad life? There has to be more than one good ending....... Sorry for being so abrupt but TRY MEH GAME PPL
on 11/28/2014 10:20:21 AM with a score of 0
It's good, but there should be more options. Every time you click no it's game over.
-- cat on 11/9/2014 6:41:45 PM with a score of 0
I finished it in 2 clicks...
-- Bored on 10/12/2014 4:35:03 AM with a score of 0
I played it again and i ended up with a blading and fat loser.
on 9/13/2014 11:31:10 PM with a score of 0
it is too brief and short.
on 9/13/2014 11:29:48 PM with a score of 0
It was terrible honestly. I chose to ignore one person, and I lose by best friend. Only is this unrealistic, but boring at the same time.
on 8/22/2014 10:03:32 PM with a score of 0
-- Denise on 8/1/2014 2:07:57 PM with a score of 0
The grammar could be better and this could be A LOT longer.
on 6/14/2014 8:18:05 AM with a score of 0
it's great i love it
-- maria on 4/14/2014 8:10:49 AM with a score of 0
It was a good story, but I lost once, and won once! xDD
-- Laurenq= on 4/9/2014 12:28:05 PM with a score of 0
Couldn't be stuffed reading. Clicked 3 times and the game ending... Don't know what just happened apart from being happy for life, and apparently I now have a vagina... :S
-- RK on 2/19/2014 10:01:41 AM with a score of 0
Lmao - love the potty ending :)
-- heyoh on 12/29/2013 9:23:44 PM with a score of 0
It was too short but it was ok
-- Gracie on 11/21/2013 3:57:44 PM with a score of 0
good but short
-- hi on 11/2/2013 2:23:14 PM with a score of 0
YOU DROWN WITH YOUR HEAD IN THE TOILET?! ARE YOU FRICKING SERIOUS!?
on 10/22/2013 6:50:37 PM with a score of 0
-- Juliet on 10/5/2013 3:34:31 PM with a score of 0
Good beginning, but very abrupt ending....
-- Lexi on 9/27/2013 4:29:55 PM with a score of 0
Was surprised with the ending XD
I lost my best friend with 3 times clicks =__=
I dunno, I just find it funny :D
Too short, maybe I must tell my kiddo (I mean my sister n brother) to play this.
on 9/9/2013 6:31:16 AM with a score of 0
Wow. Time flies. One day I'm meeting a guy and the next married with kids?
on 7/19/2013 11:34:03 AM with a score of 0
like only 3-5 pages
on 7/17/2013 5:21:16 AM with a score of 0
Just wish there was a happy ending with another guy other than your best friends older brother. Other than that, awesome! ^_^
on 7/14/2013 6:45:25 AM with a score of 0
Extremely short. No depth.
on 5/20/2013 11:02:22 PM with a score of 0
It was okay, i suppose.
on 4/29/2013 3:10:58 PM with a score of 0
Overly short and simple. It could have had some potential if developed though.
on 4/13/2013 5:40:12 AM with a score of 0
on 3/30/2013 7:45:22 AM with a score of 0
on 3/9/2013 12:39:23 AM with a score of 0
At least Dug had some ceed in his croch, as I raised four kids on alcohol. Yea! He's so cute.
on 2/13/2013 3:31:56 AM with a score of 0
That was easy. And indeed fast. I'd be much of a snob if I just ignore Jacob anyway. So I guess I didn't have that much of a choice.
on 2/10/2013 3:55:08 AM with a score of 0
To short, no developement.
-- bree on 2/4/2013 4:41:57 PM with a score of 0
Too short, a few choices and I'm done with the game. The writing was decent.
on 1/28/2013 7:05:26 AM with a score of 0
on 12/13/2012 4:46:19 PM with a score of 0
I believe i got a perfect ending first try? Very short. I honestly dont like how fast the story goes.
on 12/11/2012 10:40:02 PM with a score of 0
Your spelling was good, your grammar not so much, but in the end I rated it based on what I thought of the story, and I liked it! I thought the two endings with the wrong guys were funny and I liked the good ending with the right guy, mostly 'cos that's the guy I would've chosen anyway ^_^
on 11/13/2012 7:02:38 AM with a score of 0
OMG loved the ending i got. it was soooooo funny! this was a great strory
-- Karsten on 11/10/2012 7:00:41 PM with a score of 0
This was alright. It was a little short and unrealisitic, but I wish it would happen to me! I really liked it because of Jacob...hahaha why won't MY Jacob act like this? Anyways, back to being realisitic. The spelling and grammar was relitivly alright, and the plot was better than a few.
on 10/30/2012 1:29:58 PM with a score of 0
Well... that was short... and incredibly easy, even for a dating CYOA.
on 9/15/2012 2:48:14 AM with a score of 0
on 8/3/2012 1:54:26 PM with a score of 0
-- Muse. on 8/2/2012 7:18:08 AM with a score of 0
6/8 short but it's not terrible
on 5/25/2012 9:49:53 AM with a score of 0
not bad, kind of funny that I died over a toilet lol and there was a little choice with the romance, but i'd like some more dates and movement. (i like nerds and not jocks btw)
-- Heather on 4/17/2012 8:46:43 PM with a score of 0
I got the best choise first, from there it all went down hill.
on 2/8/2012 2:14:38 PM with a score of 0
Not as awefull as many of the comments would suggest. I gave it a five.
on 2/4/2012 11:48:14 AM with a score of 0
shit! worst bollocks ever
-- cool guy 666 on 11/18/2011 6:09:06 PM with a score of 0
it was ok.ill try other endings too
-- Shayri on 11/12/2011 11:30:54 PM with a score of 0
There is very little character or story development. Also, I didn't really feel like my choices influenced the outcome of the game enough. I met my friend's brother, we talked and hit it off, he asked me out and I said yes... they whole process took about 2 minutes. I believe with a little more effort there could be something here, but as it is this story is incredibly boring.
on 10/17/2011 2:13:59 AM with a score of 0
Short and uninteresting. Where's the romance?
on 9/23/2011 11:38:39 PM with a score of 0
learn to spell and use grammar NOOB!
-- Charming on 7/31/2011 12:24:39 AM with a score of 0
This was too short to be considered "A nice jog down the drive way" You didn't really take the time to develop the characters. I think if you had put more development into it it would have been a good game. Overall it was Okay...
on 6/29/2011 2:48:55 PM with a score of 0
A little blonde wuss? No thanks.
on 6/28/2011 9:59:34 AM with a score of 0
I like it, but it's SO short!
on 5/12/2011 6:49:18 PM with a score of 0
Nice, I got a good ending XD
on 4/14/2011 4:24:31 AM with a score of 0
The best part about CYOA games is that the reader can develop the character to fit their own personalities if they choose. You made it impossible to do that by stating that the main girl is a skinny blond who likes jocks.
-- kaz2y5 on 11/23/2010 1:09:42 AM with a score of 0
weird, drowning in the toilet? you also spelled propose wrong
on 11/7/2010 5:16:55 PM with a score of 0
-- Sydney on 8/8/2010 5:52:37 PM with a score of 0
-- WOW on 11/27/2008 5:38:41 AM with a score of 0
is there any way of getting a happy ending
on 8/24/2008 4:32:22 AM with a score of 0
A nice story, but too short. If you chose one link, that would continue the life. There just wasn't enough depth. If you made it longer, it would be great.
on 4/23/2008 7:04:12 PM with a score of 0
Mmmmm, it felt limited. The writing was okay, but I was a bit put off at how you could instantly proceed through dating and marriage with a simple Yes to go on one date, buy lunch, etc. Character development happened a bit too fast for me, but that may be a matter of taste.
on 4/5/2008 12:05:10 AM with a score of 0
Ugh! It was sort of good.
on 3/25/2008 4:32:05 PM with a score of 0
It was interesting
on 3/4/2008 5:58:31 PM with a score of 0
Uhh..not so good.
on 2/28/2007 6:14:10 PM with a score of 0
Well written, though I could be able to choose what I say.
on 1/7/2007 8:03:59 PM with a score of 0
This scores a C-.
on 1/6/2007 12:23:24 PM with a score of 0
It's a good game, and well written. I wouldn't really like either of the three guys (if I was a girl) though.
on 10/22/2006 3:25:52 AM with a score of 0
well written but short
on 10/12/2006 11:24:09 PM with a score of 0
Your writing is pretty good, but you keep switching b/w past and present tense, which is very irritating. The story is too short and linear. If you expanded it a bit, it would be better.
on 8/18/2006 12:53:58 AM with a score of 0
good romantic story. Could be better if it's longer.
-- mwan14 on 6/25/2006 5:32:51 PM with a score of 0
incredibly lame. sorry
-- me on 1/7/2006 11:28:58 PM with a score of 0
I had to play it three times to find the different endings, and the third one was Jacob! Cool game, it must have taken ages to do all the different endings!
-- Lara on 9/4/2005 6:19:49 AM with a score of 0
short but sweet
-- sean on 8/24/2005 11:48:40 AM with a score of 0
so short fun while it lasted
-- zack on 8/24/2005 8:27:56 AM with a score of 0
it is so nice to dump people and date other people.
-- laura on 8/1/2005 6:04:06 PM with a score of 0
It had (OMG I am about to not insult you too bad, sigh!) some good parts and some bad parts. Lets start with the niceness so I can get it out of my system: It was good quality, but frankly it was FAR too short. Overall 6/10 (Very good from me)
-- JJJ on 5/31/2005 9:58:45 PM with a score of 0
Woo hoo, I married Jacob and had three beautiful children. Fun game.
-- Mina on 4/19/2005 7:45:49 PM with a score of 0
To be completely honest, I think it'd be better without all those adjectives. If you described things less, it'd make the game less complicated. But, it was a fun game!!
-- panuki on 3/1/2005 9:58:07 PM with a score of 0
yay i hit it off with a hot guy... oh crap! lol. No good story, good writing. game too short and not interactive enough. Try again and your next one could be a winner.
-- march5th00 on 2/14/2005 8:16:49 PM with a score of 0
-- on 1/16/2005 8:37:03 PM with a score of 0
Sorry. It was pretty fun, but...
-- Fizz on 12/1/2004 7:58:46 PM with a score of 0
I loved it. it was easy but that's okay it was still a super good game.
-- Jaden on 7/6/2004 2:26:43 PM with a score of 0
-- Jasmine on 7/3/2004 4:06:02 PM with a score of 0
dont make it where the first option is always the right one. also make it a little more complex. but keep up the good work.
-- nate on 5/23/2004 11:57:52 PM with a score of 0