filler episode

no just no

There are basic essentials in a story. One is good grammar. This story had none. I would sincerely recommend you delete this and make a MUCH better attempt at writing a story. This is by far the worst story I have read on this site so far. Try reading other stories for inspiration.

1/8

Hey. This thing was full of aids. But at least you tried :')

I'd like to throw this in a volcano, destroy the volcano, destroy the landform that the volcano was on, and burn the remains.

This is really, really awful. Not to be mean, but you have to be able to take constructive criticism.

This sucks.
Just kidding, this is true art.
A masterpiece, I would say.
But really, it's horse shit mixed with AIDs, leukemia, progeria and malaria.
And a side of dysentery. You can never go wrong with dysentery.

Free point. Useless otherwise.

Chooseyourstory:free point
Me: Yay, I guess?

Thanks for the point?

It does seem like you put a small amount of effort in, enough to make me think you could write and actual story that wouldn't be deleted if you weren't going for 'random and intentionally awful' for whatever reason.

.......ooookkey

Free point! (Other than that, this storygame only caused me to scratch my head in confusion.)