First Dates Can Be Tricky

I actually really enjoyed this storygame, and it held a lot more than expected from the story length. I think that with some more story behind this, it could certainly be one of the better storygames that can be found here.
Very little errors can be found in grammar and spelling, which shows the fort the author put into their storygame.

I really like how the author provided such a fulfilling story with only a small amount of words, which is very impressive to me. On one of that paths, it reveals that there's a whole other story, so that could also be provided to increase the length.

Another thing I enjoyed was how there's different paths available, so it's not linear like some stories that are twice as long but not even as good. Hopefully in the future the author can either add to this or create a whole new storygame altogether, which I would not hesitate to read.

5/8

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Insanely good 10/10

Pretty good even though its kinda short

pretty good.

ok

Oh my god…. Well it was funny,….

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The writing style was old-fashioned, but descriptive.