First Dates Can Be Tricky

I actually really enjoyed this storygame, and it held a lot more than expected from the story length. I think that with some more story behind this, it could certainly be one of the better storygames that can be found here.
Very little errors can be found in grammar and spelling, which shows the fort the author put into their storygame.

I really like how the author provided such a fulfilling story with only a small amount of words, which is very impressive to me. On one of that paths, it reveals that there's a whole other story, so that could also be provided to increase the length.

Another thing I enjoyed was how there's different paths available, so it's not linear like some stories that are twice as long but not even as good. Hopefully in the future the author can either add to this or create a whole new storygame altogether, which I would not hesitate to read.

5/8

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The writing style was old-fashioned, but descriptive.

lovely game enjoied playing, would love a second one

There were lots of endings which I really enjoyed!

I literally died insaide when i made the wrong choice, so u did gud

Good but short

A must read primer for those seeking to survive in today's dog eat dog and blame the cat world, for it is a work adroitly aware of the fundamental flaws of Westerners named along the lines of Jyoti. Nothing good comes of such upper middle class, white women with special nomenclature, their petite innocence a mere mask for the blackest of souls that would spurn xenia for but a moment's satisfaction. The lack of continuity in the work only furthers the point, driving home the duplicitous nature of the documented.

very short and not very fun