Player Comments on Gay and DepressedER!!!
help I went to hell bc my teacher killed me :(
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— Duh on 4/18/2024 1:54:54 PM with a score of 0
My date let me die after I saved him cool-
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— Tommy on 3/27/2024 10:05:47 AM with a score of 0
I am god now.
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— tom on 3/11/2024 2:22:51 PM with a score of 0
Too hard character so depresssed
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— T223 on 2/1/2024 4:21:21 AM with a score of 0
i told my german class i was gay, they didn't care so i killed myself.
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— logan on 11/23/2023 8:42:50 AM with a score of 0
Omg i love this so much i played it multiple times even though i know whats gonna happen. it's amazing!
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Liz56
on 11/13/2023 2:45:03 PM with a score of 0
11/10 relatable ^-^
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GhostCatt
on 9/24/2023 5:57:30 AM with a score of 0
It was so enlightening when I lost immediately for speaking german
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— COCKNBALLS on 7/13/2023 3:03:23 PM with a score of 0
A short story about how I fail to make everyone interested in me being gay and die.
Considering the longest path was 5 pages long, there was hardly room for any character development, if there were any characters who existed for more than a sentence at all. Therefore it was rather impossible to get invested in any of the characters.
A highlight would be the very concise background building. The choices on the first page very accurately suggest that the main character is a university student without extra words wasted, which is appreciated very much.
Alas, there were more faults to be seen in the two minute’s worth of reading than the good parts. For one, the story game was linear. There was already a great lack of length, and even with a story so short you decided to make some pages have only one choice. The variation of lengths between paths was also too great, with one of the paths at the start having only 3 pages and no choices at all.
Overall, this could have been a better story if its ending was not stuffed to the reader so soon. The background ideas of the story was interesting, but none of them were developed before the story ended.
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StoryTurtle
on 7/1/2023 9:04:16 AM with a score of 0
Lolfunnymuchmemesverygaylolbitcoingay
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— GayDoge on 5/30/2023 12:45:55 PM with a score of 0
It was gay, and I'm extremely homophobic.
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Suranna
on 5/2/2023 7:30:38 PM with a score of 0
the sister almost made me cry bro
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— bleh on 4/25/2023 10:49:11 AM with a score of 0
Some of the wording around coming out (i.e. "your career as a gay") is kind of awkward, but it is an interest concept and lives up to the title.
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Anthraxus
on 3/23/2023 6:05:00 PM with a score of 0
This was actually pretty funny. You even managed to make me feel secondhand embarrassment through text, which is pretty rare! Overall, SPAG was decent, with only a couple typos, and the actual content of the story was just as gay and depressing as advertised.
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WizzyCat
on 3/17/2023 2:54:33 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good. A bit short, but does a story like this need to be more drawn out than necessary? It was funny, gay, and on task. Good job.
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Yummyfood
on 3/16/2023 11:55:06 AM with a score of 0
I unironically found this to be completely hilarious. Extra points for this quote:
>and her tone gives you the distinct impression that if she hit you with a car, she'd drive away without a moment's hesitation.
So that's what my old nemesis ended up doing in her life...
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Celicni
on 3/13/2023 3:46:42 AM with a score of 0
That was actually pretty funny, got a few laughs out of me. Great job.
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TypewriterCat
on 3/12/2023 11:25:01 PM with a score of 0
It's definitely gay
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Sherbet
on 3/12/2023 10:53:41 PM with a score of 0
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