Princess Pretty - The Captain of the Queen's Guard -

There really isn't enough words to describe my fondness for this series, but I will certainly try my best to do so.

Touching. This was endearing, and it didn't sacrifice any of it's usual humor or charm to elicit that, especially towards the end. Just like the two previous games, the writing never fell flat in captivating me with it's wit and charm.

The new perspective that we are given as Floridel, as we see his story that explains his history with the Princess, and how their relationship came to be is done quite well. All of their interactions were just hilarious, and it made me even more fond for both Pretty and for Floridel, as it provided both characters with more depth.

It was fascinating to witness just how much their relationship changed, and how so much of it didn't. As confusing as that sounds, there's really no better way for it to be put into words by me :)

The Princess Pretty series never fails in consistency. The writing is always done so wonderfully, and each story leaves me with a sense of joy.

This entire series definitely gets the Thara seal of approval :D

I love the entire Princess Pretty series. It's heartfelt and entertaining despite - or perhaps even because of - it's innocent, almost child-like tone. Proof that storygames can still be excellent even on the light and fluffy end of the spectrum.

I very much enjoy your writing voice. It suits truly the tone of your story. You built the atmosphere with such a perfectly pleasant sense of humor.

Because it is a prequel we can't expect much in the form of choices but we still get a fun element of autonomy. I enjoyed the somewhat cartoonish style of characterization. It really worked in your favor.

Your work would have benefited from a bit more proofreading, several cases of "i" instead of "I," and a few other typos. They are hardly distracting from the story which overall reads neatly. Personally the length of this storygame is nice. Just long enough for depth, detail, and immersion but not long enough to wear out its gentle touch.

love it

it was pretty average...you should use pictures

Awesome

Passable story. No real tension thought so hard to like it a lot.

very interesting ending I like it

It was funny

so cool.