The Boy Who Died From Eating All His Vegetables

Ha! I actually really enjoyed it! :D

The idea, while lolrandom, was really creative and had me laughing. It was a good, original idea and I would definitely want to read more from the author!

I was hesitant, because it seemed really random, like one of those games that try to be funny but fail, but there was a fair amount of detail I guess and it felt well fleshed out in my opinion.

It's not the longest storygame, but I guess it's not easy to make a 100 page storygame about a boy dieing from eating vegetables. Despite not having a huge number of pages, there were more then a few sentences on each page.

I can understand that this story is too strange for some people, but I enjoyed it :D

5/8.

I liked this, well written and different. It seems you might have chosen a more exciting premise for a story this well written but I guess it's semi-autobiographical or at least inspired by real events as some of the best stories are. You have a knack for writing but I think the endings could have been better and it's unfortunate that, as in real life, there is no way to get out of eating your vegetables in the end.

Not expected ending, but loved it!!

Sad :,(

That was kind of funny.

I think that this philosophical novel was a very nice choice for my students to read about gastronomic events. 5/8 because my student didn't really like the death of Willy and they didn't like cauliflower too. You are the reason the gene pool needs a lifeguard. Good luck with your life.

Willy Atkins was my son. How could you do this to him? I loved that boy, and you sliced him to BITS! Curse you. Curse you for the rest of your days!

food

it was cool and gory

it was pretty bland and short, it would be more interesting if there were more variables/outcomes.