The Knight of Gold

A few grammar errors but the main plot line was good. A pleasant read. I was surprised that the protagonist declared him/herself the new ruler in one ending. A bit presumptive and unexplained (surely there are other candidates, right?).
Overall well-written.

nice very cool until the beer killed me

Short but not bad as far as spelling and grammar goes. It's also got some choices that have consequences, and while the twist you can discover isn't difficult to find and not the most surprising in the universe, it was pretty good.
This story mops the floor with the majority of 2k word noobs first story type games. Good job.

I dub thee Sir or Madam T_Maymay, don't get too craycray now as the young'ns say.