Player Comments on TWD: Zombie Apocalypse

Mick, huh? Hmmm, where have I heard that name before... Oh he's a cop, too? Oh, he's looking for his family? Oh, he met up with this black dude named Morgan and his son, and went with them to retrieve guns and ammo before heading toward Atlanta? And let me guess, in the sequel he runs into a group of survivors in the city and leaves one behind, who ends up chopping off his own hand? "Turn left or right." *Turns left* "You've reached a dead end." How?? How have I reached a dead end? Did I not go the way you wanted me to? Oops, sorry...*plays the tiniest violin while skipping down the left side of the street*

You took this straight from AMC's TV series adaptation of The Walking Dead. It was basically the same as the first episode right up to the point where you find your family. Oh it's a one-way street alright--at least the game is, anyway. And then at one point when you fire a gun and you're forced to choose which direction to run in(which, either way, is a choice so simple it's retarded), you don't bother telling the player which direction the herd was coming from? And it's not even that long, I'd say 2. Since it's your first interactive story, I wouldn't feel so blatantly insulted, but you lose points for lack of creativity.

I liked that it had items to use, had not played one of these that had an inventory.

I was confused at first but it was alright.

Not a lot of actual choices

This game is just a copy of the walking dead, not even just heavily inspired by it.

I guess it was fine. The fact that this was written back in 2013 and predicted 2020 as the f***ed-up year was funny to me.

Swell game had fun

There's a trick that if you grab the sniper and leave without shooting anything, you go with Morgan, grab the knife, then use your sniper, you will be sent back with bolth of the weapons, which you can use to have all the weapons in the story

it was fun, but i wish there was more after the family is found

I really liked this.

I mean, 2020 did suck. So, definitely points to the author there.

Hmm, where have I seen this before???
It has some spelling and grammer mistakes and is basically the same story as the first few episodes of The Walking Dead, but overall not horrible.

It was ok but would be better if you could do something in the city and find them arriving in there

Much like the show

some spelling mistakes (ex. says quite instead of quiet), not very detailed, also vocabulary could use some work. but pretty good story.

It was short but nice, a reminder of the first few episode of the show.

Wow copied walking dead from amc

I found them!
Please make it longer

I like it okay, but did you intentionally make this different from the show? Because it was all on Rick, but you never mentioned him. BTW, I'm creating my own Walking Dead stories based on the best-selling telltale's The Walking Dead, with Lee, Clementine (me) and Kenny.

Loved the rythm and content.was a bit short though and just a few spelling errors.otherwise great potential, like needs scenes to use guns

I don't like how the creator pretty much copied the exact story of the first comic. I think it would be better if he could make up his own story. Maybe play as one of the other characters before they met Rick aka Mick.And there were quite a few spalling mistakes as well. I just think this guys limiting his imagination by following a story that was already created.

I won.

I liked how it stayed relatively close to the show and how you got to interact with it well.

Did everything right. (i watched the series actually)
This was an alright storygame.

I like the use of photos but the game was a little too straight-forward, though well written. All the guns I used at the police station didn't see any action and every time I used the sniper rifle it sent me back to the same page. It was a good game but I would have preferred to see more characters :)

"the virus, which originated in Asia"

Hmm, a tad racist are we?

I think it was the best one out of all of them :)

This was fun- I loved the life and death situations

This is incredibly short if you are smart and there are a lot of typos

I found my family? Yay!!

You should be able to use the sniper other than sniping on the roof.

Too linear to be entertaining.

This should be a fan fic! It's based entirely on The Walking Dead. Mick is actually Rick Grimes, the protagonist of the walking dead. Anyway, nice job. It was a good spin-off on the walking dead.

I didn't get to use any of my fancy new guns 0.o

it was good but really i had no say what went on

Not a bad game but there's just so many zombie survival games on this site, you either need to have to really explore the emotions of your characters and make us care about them, or have something particularly unique about the story to make it stand out. The whole, zombie virus spreads, you need to find your family and kill a few zombies along the way thing has been done 100 times before.

Really easy. Didn't really enjoy it that much, but some parts were good.

(sorry for my english)I recommend you to improve on everything. This isn't a bad game, it's an excellent first game. You have used pictures to show the environment instead of describing it. It is very cheap. You writing felt lacking and the game was linear. There was no real use of items, since everytime you told people when to use them. For better use of items, i suggest you to read Vengeance in Modern Adventure. For the good points, it felt like a real emergency, not just a zombie killing rampage. The pictures were cool, but you used too many. I hope you will keep it up, just describe, ditch pictures, and make it nonlinear and you'll do great. 4/8

It has potential, it's just that you actually need to give the readers the info as to weighing your options. For example, "What happens if I fire this gun? Can I evade the zombie? Can I just pistol-whip it instead? Etc."

mediocre game,

I liked the amount of pictures you threw in, what i dislike is both the length of the game and lack of details in the pages, some pages were just 2 sentences, i would had tryed to give the player more of an idea of what and how.

4/8

Not a bad game. Good number of choices, but it still fell a bit flat for me. Bonus points for adding a katana though. :D

you spelled Rick wrong. Also this is not a scifi adventure you can put this as fan fiction otherwise you are just plagiarizing the show if you dont say its just a fan fiction

The writing was good, I liked the way the story flowed.

I want to use sniper to the remaining zombie, but it just gets me back upstairs.. so no choice but the gun...

I didn't use any of the other guns, though, and it didn't affect the story....

The pictures were a nice touch, but the game was rather short and linear. still not too bad overall.

You spelled 'Rick' wrong, you spelled 'quiet' wrong, police stations don't have samurai swords, and long before I finished the game, I grew weary from being bombarded with countless superfluous reminders that I can go back in case I inexplicably failed to click on the gun the first time.

Not bad at all. There are a few snags with the Item Use (such as the Sniper Rifle taking you to the upstairs page no matter where you are), but overall a fun game :)