What if you died but didn't really die
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"march in the swamp"
"Make sure not to blink"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
im gonna change the name im using and this game is way too short i mean seriously why did the trampoline break anyways? it just doesn't make sense it also doesn't make sense that there even WAS a trampoline there in the first place and stuff and yeah and why was there a wolf there?
-- anonymous on 12/8/2014 11:48:49 AM with a score of 0
I despise anyone who puts an emoticon in any formal piece of writing. Take some pride in your work, boy.
on 11/8/2014 4:25:36 PM with a score of 0
it had almost no effort put into it
-- damon on 10/31/2014 9:39:32 PM with a score of 0
Two games in one day? Put in a little more effort! "Look, a random cliff!" XD
It could definitely use a few more paragraphs, but it was mildly entertaining for such a short game :)
on 10/30/2014 1:59:42 PM with a score of 0
To be honest, I'm not sure what I've just read. It looked a bit like a story, but it only had like four pages and eight sentences. There also wasn't that much of a plot, character development, pacing or any other characteristics of a story. And the little bits that there were, were way too random. I think I'm just going to classify this as 'semi-story'.
I've given your game a 2/8, because it did have some choices and something of a plot. However, it wasn't a good story.
Good luck writing!
on 10/30/2014 9:34:12 AM with a score of 0
on 10/30/2014 5:09:07 AM with a score of 0
Is that the end?
Um I'm kind of confused....?
on 10/30/2014 12:55:13 AM with a score of 0
on 10/30/2014 12:42:51 AM with a score of 0
Hmm...okay. A bit odd, but it's nice to see some consistency in the backstory. Still, very short and low in quality.
on 10/29/2014 6:05:09 PM with a score of 0
Are you from Kenya cause Kenya not?
on 10/29/2014 5:31:30 PM with a score of 0
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