Player Comments on What Magic Ability Would You Have?
Ok... that was a strange quiz.
There was far more in-depth than was perhaps necessary, even from the first page the options were massively longer and detailed that the single solitary sentence that made up the page, I think some serious editing could still have got the meanings across in half the words.
I found the choices insanely specific, for example on the hobbies page I couldn't find an option for my preferred hobbies (namely reading, writing and smoking) so I had to go with music, drawing and art as I did one of those three but didn't really do any of the others in the other choices. I ran into this problem repeatedly, even on the "what is your favorite color page" (oh, black isn't listed but "rust" is? Seriously? How many people love rust more than black?)
I was also a bit embarrassed that of the poems listed the only one I knew was Jaberwocky… this whole quiz was a lot more adult that the simple question "what magic ability would you have" seemed to require, it's like clicking on what you think is a casual 5 minute quiz to find a detailed philosophical exploration of the sub-conscious hidden within.
After working my way through everything, most disappointingly, what I got was literally "nothing". I didn't find the explanation "those who use nothing are extremely powerful" particularly convincing, in my experience "those who use nothing" are seriously lacking in the personal finances side.
On the plus side you are an extremely articulate and intelligent writer whose work seems free from the spelling errors and grammar mistakes that plague most of us. If this quiz was surprisingly in-depth it says good things about what your next story game is likely to be like: something deep and interesting. It is good to write stuff like this quiz to get used to the system, advanced editor, variables etc and I'm sure you'll put this experience to good use :) 3/8 for this story, perhaps a bit harsh but based on personal preference and for the reasons mentioned above it wasn't really my thing, though it did have many good features.
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Will11
on 2/17/2019 2:25:27 AM with a score of 75
Time travel,shape-shifting, rebirth
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— MacKenzie on 11/21/2024 6:30:45 PM with a score of 35
good
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— carman on 10/18/2024 3:59:14 PM with a score of 5
the void and i have a shadow from
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— dominick on 10/18/2024 3:53:46 PM with a score of 60
Thank you
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— G on 9/26/2024 10:49:18 PM with a score of 35
I got a tie in evrything or nothing. The hardest to get. I use everything to form nothing to somthing.
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— Petee on 9/15/2024 6:31:59 PM with a score of 55
I got the most powerful superpower!
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WhimsicalWanderer
on 9/10/2024 3:26:34 PM with a score of 45
To be honest, your writing was too small and was bunched up together.
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— Abigail on 8/16/2024 12:12:53 AM with a score of 70
Inaccurate.
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— Oof on 8/2/2024 10:39:38 AM with a score of 70
it was so personal for me that made me think about what i am truly am . nice one
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— sina on 7/28/2024 4:06:12 AM with a score of 20
Fun, gave me an answer that was pretty in tune with who I am/ who I see myself as
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— Alex on 7/25/2024 11:48:34 PM with a score of 5
I control all magic!!!
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Phoenixthe1st
on 7/13/2024 9:41:00 PM with a score of 45
i got everything and nothing... i just want to know what does the color and song lyrics have to do in this? i chose green and "I´m a conversation" - stronger than you
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— Amaro on 4/29/2024 12:24:34 AM with a score of 45
why is it so accurate? terrified me, not going to lie.
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— Emptier-now on 2/2/2024 11:31:15 AM with a score of 15
I was very happy about the out come u took a magic ability test and it was 82%and I was wanting to know about the test scores so this is where it lead me to ..
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— Tabetha henderson on 12/17/2023 11:20:14 AM with a score of 5
Well....it was something. I mean some of the specifics are really annoying and I don't know how some of the powers lie up but...ok then! Lol
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CaptainCool
on 9/11/2023 2:39:15 AM with a score of 20
Random button always takes me to the weird ones. But this was at least vaguely entertaining which was more than I expected, the questions were very random though.
My power turned out to be that I control either Everything or Nothing.
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Klockwerk
on 8/30/2023 12:47:28 PM with a score of 5
I can't say that I can tell if I am Everything or Nothing...
I am both descriptions in some way.
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n1ghtm4r3
on 8/8/2023 12:52:03 PM with a score of 75
I really like this quiz. It's fun, and there's different endings that kind of makes you want to get them all. I played through it twice and got two different endings (Time manipulation and all or nothing, if you're interested.) with my first and second favorite answers. All in all, this is a fun game/quiz/thing, and I will be trying to find more like this in the future.
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— justarandomperson on 6/25/2023 5:45:34 PM with a score of 35
I made this a long time ago. I remember I ended up almost finishing a different storygame before I left the site. I can't even remember the reason. There was so much wonderful feedback I got from the community on here about this quiz, and I honestly wish I had stuck around. If I ever find the time and energy, I'll come back. The people here seem so lovely.
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— H.C.Rose on 12/27/2022 12:15:13 AM with a score of 45
I control Nothing apparently. Guess it was to be expected.
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Celicni
on 6/11/2022 10:12:10 AM with a score of 60
I got a nothing.
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LightSaber15
on 5/11/2022 3:03:45 PM with a score of 35
I’m just saying this. Very nice.
I would’ve preferred more questions and more unique powers, like instead of “Time Manipulation” you could do “Karma” or something
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Virfef
on 4/11/2022 7:59:41 PM with a score of 15
I retook this and I got a different result than last time: Everything or Nothing. Reading through the descriptions, I'd definitely an Everything user so yay? :P
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GreekMythologyGeek
on 4/11/2022 3:15:13 PM with a score of 85
I don't like the definition of the nothin user. I'd prefer to be the guy who might have something, but are so utterly irrelevant to the plot that their name is mentioned once and never again.
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Yummyfood
on 3/28/2022 7:20:53 PM with a score of 100
Okay, so I got a tie, and the second question from that tie was about what I feared most. They were all very deep, and then, the very last option: 'Spiders.'
There was no way I was NOT choosing that
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GreekMythologyGeek
on 3/20/2022 1:50:30 AM with a score of 75
It’s.. Unique, personally I think it was intended to be a personality quiz sorta related thing. Anyways, I got the ability to control all powers and that’s somehow the rarest, and the description for that is, You didn’t have enough score points to get any other, It would be a little more creative if you made it like a unique one and not just a filler.
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PushOver
on 2/18/2022 6:34:36 PM with a score of 45
This was really interesting. I got the big time tie. :)
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Zombie_Surviver
on 8/25/2021 4:17:28 PM with a score of 95
Entertaining, not too long, not too short. Questions varied enough to hold interest. Not bad!
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Calli_loves_zombies
on 4/28/2021 4:10:52 PM with a score of 25
I got the somehow ending after reading both options I am likely to control anything mainly because I am chaotic and reckless
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Zarlox
on 4/14/2021 9:52:12 AM with a score of 90
WOWZERS i liked it because it legit got
E V E R Y T H I N G
right??????
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— Asher Scott on 1/28/2021 11:36:20 PM with a score of 5
Nothing crazy here, you get what it says on the package. It was done decently enough. Not much else.
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tmanaking
on 11/18/2020 11:20:01 PM with a score of 40
Never mind, I found a way to get Time Manipulation!
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writeyourstory
on 10/7/2020 9:23:06 AM with a score of 10
No matter how many times I retried it and how many different answers I picked, I got a tie!
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writeyourstory
on 10/7/2020 9:16:49 AM with a score of 35
This was confusing, but i am used to much more complicated things. where did you get this info as it seemed between bizzare and legit.
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— Cenhelm on 5/7/2020 4:28:59 PM with a score of 25
This Story actually made me reconsider my entire personality and life choices. Very enlightening.
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SanicTNT
on 5/6/2020 5:23:44 PM with a score of 45
It is certainly more detailed than I thought. It is okay.
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Ficsean_Chef
on 5/21/2019 2:23:50 PM with a score of 15
Wow....just...wow.. I have no words. Well except this, apparently I have gotten what most people would believe to be a "secret" outcome. I have one of two abilities, I have the power to control Everything, or I have the power to control Nothing. What was written on that page really...got to me... in a way that very, VERY, few have gotten. Bravo my good man/woman, please continue to bring enlightenment to people who read your stories, even if they are quizzes tests, or simply just questions. Keep up the good work.
-Wolf
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TheGamerWolf
on 4/30/2019 7:51:39 PM with a score of 35
I got to the end , but it just threw a "you got one of two possible outcomes" thing at me.
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InvictusXL
on 4/27/2019 6:25:20 AM with a score of 70
Cool, except my English isn’t that good and I dun understand some things.
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GeniusPancake
on 4/26/2019 5:00:41 AM with a score of 35
I liked the silly questions, and sure, it wasn't serious or anything, but it was still a very good quiz, even though it seems that no matter what you do you get the same answer. Very silly, and I liked that.
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Benajah765
on 3/3/2019 10:49:06 PM with a score of 30
So enjoyable! Luved it!
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— Kiki on 2/17/2019 4:27:41 PM with a score of 40
not bad it was quite fun i really liked it
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— thfcgjc on 2/16/2019 6:41:47 PM with a score of 35
It's great, but sometimes options are too different and people get messed up. Maybe you can make answers just a lil different? And ty for the quiz I had a fun time!
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— Elena on 2/16/2019 7:43:59 AM with a score of 45
thumbs down. the questions were silly and at the end i got two answers which made no sense. i am either nothing or everything. after reading the other reviews it appears that everyone got this answer
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jms70
on 2/15/2019 2:04:57 PM with a score of 45
I got Nothing.
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Lockirby2
on 2/14/2019 9:10:20 PM with a score of 100
I had a lot of fun doing this but am quite confused because I got an "All or Nothing," and after reading it I still can't quite figure out which one I am since I have characteristics of both.
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Algae
on 2/14/2019 7:18:37 PM with a score of 20
You got an eh on the NomNom scale!
Your writing is okay. I feel like the quiz was not too shabby, but at the same time it wasn't a stick of dynamite. Good try though
Conversion Chart:
yuk!=0-1 stars
eh!=1-1.9 stars
meh...=2-2.9 stars
nom=3-3.9 stars
nomnom=4-4.9
nomnomnom!=5-6
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Cake_Oi
on 2/11/2019 8:00:41 PM with a score of 50
I got the result for controlling Everything and Nothing, but the description for Nothing fits me better then the description for Everything. therefore, i control Nothing and i love how confusing the explanation is.
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— Elizabeth on 2/10/2019 2:36:24 PM with a score of 70
Obvious time put in to this great gob
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Nose119
on 2/9/2019 12:25:11 PM with a score of 115
Well......Good work.Try harder.
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— Ila on 2/7/2019 8:58:45 AM with a score of 60
it was pretty good
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— Garrett on 1/24/2019 3:52:50 PM with a score of 30
I am the master of all.
Or nothing.
Or both?
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Unpr1d1ct4ble
on 1/21/2019 1:04:38 PM with a score of 50
Time manipulation. Actually really cool quiz :D
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Seto
on 1/21/2019 9:18:35 AM with a score of 30
Time Manipulation...cool.
This was a nice little quiz.
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corgi213
on 1/17/2019 2:20:07 AM with a score of 45
Average. Okay and not okay but. It's okay.
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Nicolenicole26
on 1/16/2019 5:53:54 AM with a score of 40
I got "Nothing". The thing is... that's not surprising to me at all, I alm
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— DragonK4tz on 1/14/2019 6:35:47 PM with a score of 5
The result made sense to me as a controller of everything. I like to have options. It was very accurate to my personality and the way my brain works. Thank you for crafting this ^-^
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— Flygon on 1/14/2019 12:31:46 PM with a score of 75
This was really fun! It said I got the hardest result of either being everything or nothing, and i fit into both. But I really enjoyed this!
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— Onyx on 1/14/2019 11:14:04 AM with a score of 35
Quite fun. So apparently I either control everything or nothing lmao which is rare to get? Ok then aha
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_skye_
on 1/13/2019 10:06:30 AM with a score of 60
I don't know what to say but fun! I actually got all or nothing as my ability!
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Maddox_Laskowski
on 1/12/2019 1:12:58 PM with a score of 45
Well I don’t particularly take pleasure in personality quiz things, and this isn’t an exception, but since you said that this is for variable testing, good job I guess.
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Austinc
on 1/9/2019 9:58:05 AM with a score of 115
I'm just not seeing why this was published at all if it's just a variable test with a list of random, unrelated questions, but there seems to be a decent amount of effort put into it at least and the actual technical aspects of the writing are fine. I'd just much rather see the author attempt an actual story.
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Mizal
on 1/8/2019 7:41:34 PM with a score of 35
According to my result, I am a somehow who manipulates either everything or completely nothing at all. Although I must say, because of the detailed commentary regarding my result, I claim to know that I manipulate every magic. Love that my result is rare. Very accurate descriptions. Just lack...imagination? I mean I bet it could be better than this but for now it is pretty good. congrats!
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— LenNikto8 on 1/2/2019 3:03:26 AM with a score of 30
So according to the quiz I'm Shriek from Batman Beyond.(sound manipulation power) Eh I can live with that.
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— Wings Fan 85 on 1/1/2019 2:29:36 PM with a score of 35
Not bad as quizzes go.
But, if you're just trying to test variables, why publish? Just leave it in sneak peek or preview it yourself.
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simplesabley
on 1/1/2019 8:15:04 AM with a score of 10
cool
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essee
on 1/1/2019 3:39:54 AM with a score of 50
the funny thing is, I was listening to megalovania before and while I was playing this.
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— chicken, no explanation needed on 12/31/2018 9:02:04 PM with a score of 0
GOD DAMN IT SANS, GETTING ME HERE AS WELL!
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— chicken, no explanation needed on 12/31/2018 8:56:45 PM with a score of 20
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