Discovering Solinelia Island: Chapter 1

Player Rating3.77/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 63 ratings since 08/04/2014
played 304 times (finished 59)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

You have lived on Solinelia Island for your whole life, however you have been forbidden from leaving your village by your parents. Will you discover the hidden secrets of Solinelia Island?

This is Part One. If it receives enough encouragement, it will be continued.

Player Comments

I quite enjoyed this story. The beginning held a number of run on sentences and lack of spacing between dialogue, but by the middle of the story, you seemed to have fixed both of these problems. There were a small amount of spelling and grammar errors other than those mentioned, but not very many.

There could have been a lot more detail, especially about the fight with the dragon. The story in general seemed a little rushed. It also would have been nice to see some character development other than just winning the fight. The story almost seemed to play like a demo, rather than a part I to a story.

Overall, there were some funny moments and some good writing, but lots of flaws that I'm sure can be fixed. 5/8
-- Orange on 3/22/2017 12:31:58 AM
great thanks
-- rhiannon on 1/24/2017 5:52:31 AM
This was a great 'Part 1' of a story, it set the tone well and let you know what you should be expecting from later installments.

That being said, I really don't like broken up stories that have no conclusion, you feel like you are getting an idea of the world, characters and story then suddenly get told it is over until the next installment which may be soon or... never, which has happened all too often on CYS.

Overall a great start, but maybe when you have part 2 ready, join them up into a single story rather than two small separate segments.
-- FeanorOnForge on 10/21/2016 1:17:22 PM
Shut down as soon as it got real. :( come on, it's mean to leave people hanging like that.
-- Dmanxbox on 12/25/2015 2:26:26 PM
More please
-- Lzark on 8/9/2015 8:21:19 PM
Great
-- Farsah on 8/30/2014 2:06:17 AM
It was AWESOME! Make more!!!!!!
-- elaine on 8/20/2014 10:45:25 PM
*Shrugs* I enjoyed it more than most but less than some.
-- viking8779 on 8/5/2014 8:18:21 AM
A few spelling errors strewn about but it wasn't noticeably bad. Also it seems to be unfinished.
-- Serenemyth on 8/5/2014 4:43:17 AM
Made me laugh a tiny bit. Some spelling errors here and there but is was pretty decent. Keep working on this and put time and effort, then it should become a solid story.
-- GinzeeN on 7/15/2014 11:50:17 PM
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