Player Comments on Captured!

Oh my gosh that was AWESOME even though I failed after smashing my friend in the head with a stun baton. Make more in this series plz.
-- Games4u on 5/15/2020 12:11:37 PM with a score of 0
Great story, I ended up sort-of winning (but I had to stay in a cell). I would recommend it.

7/8
-- 325boy on 5/6/2020 4:59:17 PM with a score of 0
It was a thoughtful game that managed to tell a story in few words. I had a great time realizing the twist at the end.
-- MobiBlue on 6/6/2019 6:32:46 PM with a score of 0
Nice experience. Could use more suspense.
-- Annie C on 2/3/2019 11:05:02 AM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed it. Very detailed and well written. Wish I could create my own just like this one. The story is engaging and you feel like your in every scene going through the struggle.
-- Eli on 1/2/2019 2:55:31 PM with a score of 0
there is more?
-- Vashnik on 1/1/2019 7:51:34 PM with a score of 0
Noice
-- Marneptunez on 12/20/2018 3:59:17 PM with a score of 0
Nice style of writing. Kinda linear and the choices didn't have a logic row but it was not much of a big deal at the reader. Why didn't you explain it properly at the description anyway? It was vey good as it it was.
-- ToughPenelope on 9/22/2018 10:27:27 AM with a score of 0
I didn't like the choice I had to make to survive, but I like the writing style
-- Anactaka on 7/24/2018 10:58:37 PM with a score of 0
one of those rare games that strikes a balance between fun and short.
-- Comply on 12/16/2017 7:36:26 PM with a score of 0
cool
-- NoahAndreaRaul on 11/27/2017 9:11:02 AM with a score of 0
This was amazing!
-- Wizard Rider on 3/10/2017 4:45:42 AM with a score of 0
Could've been better,longer and more complex!
-- hristoskof on 1/29/2017 3:51:32 PM with a score of 0
This was a pretty good story overall but a little short
-- CeruleanFlare on 12/14/2016 9:21:35 AM with a score of 0
I like the game but it seems to be a little vague on the looks. I think it was a little bit too short as well considering that it took me two minutes to die...
-- RebornWolf on 11/29/2016 1:39:29 PM with a score of 0
Pretty easy to tell which button to press, but a good short story
-- GigaKnight on 11/1/2016 9:24:35 AM with a score of 0
Interesting and well-written, but a little repetitive and a storyline that doesn't linger with you.
-- RobinMask on 6/8/2016 3:19:52 PM with a score of 0
Enjoyable, short but the Author mentioned that. I liked it 6/8
-- JinDary on 4/14/2016 11:19:11 AM with a score of 0
Gaddammit, I messed up and got stun batoned.
-- Jimmysutton on 3/31/2016 12:12:22 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed it. It had a real Orwellian Feel, good writing and wasn't too short. Great work.
-- Steve24833 on 12/24/2015 6:22:46 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good story! I had a feeling it was all just an illusion so I ended up killing my character off to withhold the information from the interrogators
-- tman008 on 11/22/2015 7:42:01 PM with a score of 0
Quick & fun to retry for every choice. Nice little scenario story!
-- Kyu on 11/16/2015 5:58:59 PM with a score of 0
This was an interesting story, but I wish the backstory was explained better. I was confused as to why there was a war and what the "Cells" were and why nobody had a name. Maybe if there was more character development and backstory I'd rate it higher. 5/8.
-- MidnightPhoenix on 8/24/2015 8:00:57 PM with a score of 0
That was really, really good. Keep going like that, and you'll have some great stories.
-- BrightFire on 8/16/2015 9:44:59 AM with a score of 0
Honestly, I could have done with a little more backstory. I was so confused the entire time. Other than that, it was an interesting idea.
-- Logical_Lady on 3/16/2015 10:55:02 PM with a score of 0
A well written short-story-game but possibly could have been developed into a longer story. Very enjoyable.
-- Will11 on 3/9/2015 7:10:20 AM with a score of 0
Great concept and story! I liked it.
-- Penworth on 2/21/2015 11:49:31 AM with a score of 0
Kinda divergent like
-- djman3420 on 7/18/2014 1:05:34 AM with a score of 0
Call me paranoid but I had a sinking feeling the whole time it was the drugs that were causing me to go to the illusion prison
-- Walker on 7/13/2014 4:51:26 AM with a score of 0
Not bad.
-- Kira on 7/1/2014 5:00:22 AM with a score of 0
Very good. I liked the ending, it had me guessing throughout the whole game. The first hint to the ending was in the cell with the girl, when you see twhat the door is on the other side of the cell from when you first woke. 7/8
-- PortalSpartan on 6/22/2014 8:26:54 PM with a score of 0
The grammar is ok. The plot of the story is interesting but the choices were weak and everything was rather obvious.
-- Madbrad200 on 6/16/2014 3:21:20 PM with a score of 0
Great story! I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Is there a sequel in the works?
-- Warhammerfan on 6/11/2014 2:42:49 AM with a score of 0
"This is amazing! I totally fell for it.
-- HugsGoodbye on 5/29/2014 2:01:15 PM with a score of 0
It was a really nice story, and I loved it. It is now one of my favorite games on this website, and I do recommend people to play this one if they haven't already. I liked the storyline, and the adventures that we go on. For some people, all of the illusions and suddenly waking up in the chair when you just were in another room, can get a little confusing. But the story has a good twist and was really enjoyable for me.
-- Rockdude11 on 2/28/2014 5:51:58 PM with a score of 0
A little odd. As I was not expecting to start in an interrogation chair on the first page.
-- GentleWinterBreeze on 2/21/2014 7:57:34 AM with a score of 0
Not a bad game, just feels short.
-- vinru on 2/11/2014 11:19:50 PM with a score of 0
This Game is Totally Twisted and gone Between Delusion And Reality, A Truly Interesting Game :D
-- RabbitSeason on 1/15/2014 5:26:04 AM with a score of 0
too short and there are no choices
-- aguen on 6/20/2013 11:49:52 AM with a score of 0
I like the idea that all of the "reality" actually just illusion. But I kind of hope that there's different ending. But I love the ending. Sad ending is rare.
-- Mike on 6/1/2013 2:19:20 PM with a score of 0
Some good stuff going on here. I like how the antagonists were all identified by their voices. I didn't like how limited the choices really were. A secondary plot line would have made the game a little better.
-- Mynoris on 2/24/2013 4:04:26 AM with a score of 0
man that was a great ending. it makes you really start to think toward the end.
-- AlliDoIsWin1995 on 2/21/2013 1:40:45 PM with a score of 0
The story was engaging. I just wish the story was longer and the end gave more of the conclusion than a interrogation drug induced hallucination.
-- MedinaBoy1 on 10/19/2012 11:18:13 PM with a score of 0
What a twist! Sure as heck wasn't expecting that ending :D
-- Fuzzy on 9/25/2012 8:08:11 AM with a score of 0
smoke and mirrors. nice story here :)
-- alienalpha on 8/22/2012 12:39:44 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good!^_^ Unique premise, could've been a bit longer, and a bit more history would've been nice, but all and all this rocked! Quite a twist, I loved the atmosphere.
-- ChaiHai on 8/18/2012 4:35:50 AM with a score of 0
Ahh, bad; nope its tremendous!
-- RobustSporadic on 6/26/2012 11:01:08 PM with a score of 0
Wow, an illusion created by drugs
-- K on 5/24/2012 12:24:59 AM with a score of 0
Although linear, the way that the plot is set up sustained my interest in this short, but entertaining game.
-- estelwen on 5/10/2012 10:38:40 AM with a score of 0
wish there was a point to this story.
-- CovElite on 3/9/2012 1:55:33 PM with a score of 0
The real endings are kinda iffy.
-- Swiftstryker on 2/29/2012 8:59:45 PM with a score of 0
Pretty fun. The opposite of my game
-- betaband on 2/23/2012 11:14:17 PM with a score of 0
WOW!!! That was sooo cool! Awesome ending.
-- Dauntless on 12/25/2011 9:28:40 PM with a score of 0
He tricked me!
-- Fleurnoir on 11/7/2011 10:50:36 PM with a score of 0
pretty good. had a well thought of ending. i liked this one
-- DarkentityOni on 10/29/2011 11:37:50 PM with a score of 0
your good i really didnt see that end coming though!
-- mythicdragon on 8/4/2011 1:29:16 AM with a score of 0
This was short but very well done thank you for creating it :)
-- Jake on 8/1/2011 3:00:17 PM with a score of 0
Success! I finally earned the good ending! I've played sooo many times; I thought there was no way to win! I love how you wrote it. It makes for a wonderfully entertaining read. Thumbs up. :D
-- WriterOfBooks on 7/16/2011 8:28:14 PM with a score of 0
Wow, it's a very well-written story! I love the suprise ending I earned :D
-- WriterOfBooks on 7/16/2011 8:20:39 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed reading this, but if I hadn't gotten the "you die" ending first, I wouldn't have known what to pick when I went back and got the best ending. I would have liked a bit more character development, but, overall, I did enjoy the storygame.
-- jkulibert2 on 7/2/2011 6:01:27 PM with a score of 0
Twas brilliant. Is there a second one, like a sequel? 'Cause that'd be even better! :)
-- Scatty on 5/2/2011 11:49:26 AM with a score of 0
What a wonderful story.
-- Moony_Ramos on 5/1/2011 10:39:37 PM with a score of 0
Bo Approves
-- ThisisBo on 5/1/2011 8:51:19 PM with a score of 0
Ok...I liked your other story better but this one still has its moments. I don't particularly like the way it ended, it seems like there's not really a great way out of the scenario, but it was still interesting. You seem to have a talent for writing these kinds of stories. Keep up the good work!
-- DRBickham on 4/24/2011 11:55:30 PM with a score of 0
great game
-- Killer999 on 3/30/2011 12:11:36 PM with a score of 0
i didn't relize how linear this story was, still pretty good though.
-- ugilick on 3/7/2011 11:02:19 PM with a score of 0
I must say, i rather like it. most of the good stories are very long, but this one is a good length. its a releif from what i have seen all to often, to much story, not nearly enough game. It's definitly worth another run through.
-- ugilick on 3/2/2011 11:03:57 PM with a score of 0
Its ok but could have been longer . Theirs also to many choices which lead to the same outcome , which is rather misleading . I also didn't think you gave the user enough information to make the choice, and so was more like guess work
-- bradhal on 3/1/2011 12:38:00 PM with a score of 0
This was a really great game, and I liked it. Good job :)
-- Zikara on 2/21/2011 1:17:33 PM with a score of 0
cool and fun
-- chris on 2/17/2011 6:31:51 PM with a score of 0
This gae is really good! However it's very hard for you to die or fail in this game. However it has more than one ending. It's really good and I recommend giving it a try!
-- anonymous on 1/18/2011 12:01:04 AM with a score of 0
good... really good (ok)
-- ? on 1/17/2011 4:45:07 PM with a score of 0
Very cool. A little linear in parts but nice story. I wish I wouldn't have read the comments before playing because it sort-of killed the surprise.
-- JoeDude on 1/11/2011 1:39:23 AM with a score of 0
I liked it. Simple and fun.
-- tom on 12/16/2010 4:34:41 AM with a score of 0
Very good story, realy enjoyed it! :)
-- Nbody on 12/10/2010 10:16:32 AM with a score of 0
it was cool. i like the illusion twist. the last part just didn't sound right, but i unfortunetely trusted the girl. oh well
-- fergie14233 on 11/1/2010 9:00:34 PM with a score of 0
its ok
-- natalie on 10/17/2010 2:11:25 PM with a score of 0
Man... the hillucinations are very tricky...
-- me on 9/13/2010 12:05:16 PM with a score of 0
I won first try.
-- bumnumber1 on 8/29/2010 10:16:57 PM with a score of 0
Cool game.
-- xDante on 8/29/2010 1:33:35 AM with a score of 0
sweet!!! i won!
-- HiddenRing3 on 8/25/2010 11:13:22 PM with a score of 0
Paul, you've done it again. Amazing story.
-- Jeff on 8/9/2010 5:44:44 PM with a score of 0
That was a great story. I actually liked how you didn't give a lot of background information- it made it even more mysterious.
-- SoarHighBeFree on 6/15/2010 2:56:53 AM with a score of 0
nice.
-- hummingbird3 on 2/27/2010 11:15:07 AM with a score of 0
Cool story! Great job, keep it up;-}
-- rohitrocka on 2/5/2010 10:04:40 AM with a score of 0
awesome game :D
-- Cooldude on 1/2/2010 9:59:40 PM with a score of 0
Very interesting, highly enjoyable game. More background would be good, but for what it is, it's excellent. Short enough for its limited plot to remain interesting. Nice!
-- Trzcina on 12/29/2009 11:11:01 PM with a score of 0
It was ok...
-- Bushy on 8/26/2009 8:06:42 AM with a score of 0
It was good! I definitely want to play it again. :)
-- MsDuck on 4/30/2009 2:51:41 AM with a score of 0
It is so good I actually read it a second time
-- rockindude2 on 3/21/2009 4:41:42 PM with a score of 0
This game was AWESOME!!!!!!
-- rockindude2 on 3/20/2009 10:30:58 PM with a score of 0
it was good!! One of my favorites.
-- demonstar31 on 2/14/2009 6:04:42 PM with a score of 0
very good make a sequal
-- bob on 11/12/2008 11:39:04 AM with a score of 0
Ha! I won that time! ^____^ Yep, definately a fun story. Nice job!
-- Songbird on 10/16/2008 10:49:21 PM with a score of 0
Well, I lost. XD
But I liked it alot! Not too much text and plenty of excitement. I think I'll go play again.
-- Songbird on 10/16/2008 10:45:06 PM with a score of 0
"A short story to grant a few minutes diversion"... this game delivers that and much more! This game was written simply and well, just the thing for a busy weeknight.
-- Badger on 10/16/2008 10:14:35 PM with a score of 0
great story, pure joy.
-- Waynewood on 8/11/2008 8:11:02 PM with a score of 0
great story but reminds me to much of world war I and world war II other wise terrific
-- sportsfreak_24 on 8/5/2008 3:47:24 PM with a score of 0
I love how well written it is, but suggesting that the woman is a government spy takes the challenge out.
-- Melike on 8/2/2008 3:54:09 AM with a score of 0
its fun but you could probably only play once
-- Ashley on 4/29/2008 8:17:21 PM with a score of 0
One of the best I've read
-- banjoman92 on 3/4/2008 6:07:00 PM with a score of 0
Heh, that was fun.
-- SilverMan on 3/3/2008 9:25:07 PM with a score of 0
Pretty Good
-- bobmcbob on 1/18/2008 4:01:27 PM with a score of 0
Quick and enjoyable. The fact there is no background story doesn't matter at all, quite a feat.
Great work.
-- Miccy2000 on 12/26/2007 2:07:27 AM with a score of 0
good job. i raised my rating because it's a good short story.
-- deadly_sinner66 on 11/23/2007 2:13:38 AM with a score of 0
Very cool story. I like how you avoided using any names anywhere in the story, referring to each individual by the sound of their voice. This is definately one of the better stories I've read on this site.
-- donteatpoop on 11/6/2007 7:55:46 PM with a score of 0
it's pretty good TSM. It was a bit short, it lacked a lot of the detail i'm used to having from you, and it was incredibly linear. I was surprised at times by my lack of options. I also ruined the ending each time I died. Still, it's a short / good read for people looking for that.
-- march5th00 on 11/1/2007 12:49:37 PM with a score of 0
Great game man! Great short story. Good luck!
-- DarthVader_13 on 10/28/2007 3:34:46 AM with a score of 0
One of those 'Am I awake or not' dilemmas. Tsmpaul does it again, This is easily a 6/8
-- Rommel on 10/27/2007 7:41:08 AM with a score of 0
A good storyline.
-- weedy on 10/14/2007 10:35:33 PM with a score of 0
good tsmpaul. if you've ever played syphon filter for the PS1 and 2, your escapes were ver y similair to those and they kicked ass. i gave you 6/8. greateffort.
-- deadly_sinner66 on 10/14/2007 2:21:39 PM with a score of 0
Nice story, and therefore it was fairly linear, but whatever.
-- Anubis on 10/11/2007 10:28:46 PM with a score of 0
It is above average writing, like usual from you. It is nowhere near as good as your other storygames, but I feel pretty stupid criticizing this as it is still better than the majority of storygames on this website. I'm sorry if this sounds mean, but I think it is your worst you have published, but still, above average, and you should be congratulated for that.

Good writing, good concept, although I didn't like the open-ending. I s'pose you had to cut it down a bit for the whole 100 pages thing, but still, well done.
-- October on 10/11/2007 7:02:09 AM with a score of 0
This is an awesome story! I love the ending, and I love the intensity!! I rate a 7, however I would have given an 8 if it were less linear. However, if i had not pressed the back button so many times, i would not have noticed that.
-- solostrike on 10/10/2007 7:09:58 PM with a score of 0
Definitely a good short story, with the interesting twists I've come to expect from you Paul. Thanks.
-- madglee on 10/9/2007 5:34:07 PM with a score of 0
Tsmpaul, how dare you?!?!?!!? We have such similar plots for our contest games... This is horrible -- everyone (except madglee and fleshy cuz they knew i was writing it) is going to think I copied you!

Well good luck my friend, this is under 100 pages right?
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 10/9/2007 10:46:00 AM with a score of 0
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