Player Comments on Dangerous Memories

As far as storygames go, it's pretty linear, but the story itself more than makes up for a lack of branching choices. In fact, I don't think that's the type of game Dangerous Memories was set out to be, which is perfectly fine. I was immersed in the story all the way through, even in the beginning when I was trying to catch on what was going on. This was one of the better uses of long-term amnesia I've seen. The way the story unfolded little-by-little made it all the more exciting without talking down to the reader. Even the streamlined style of writing was to the story's benefit, keeping a pace that kept the excitement and tension high.

I can easily say reading Dangerous Memories was one of the most enjoyable things I've done on the Storygames portion on the site.
-- TaraGil on 9/17/2014 5:11:46 PM with a score of 45
I loved it! Of all the mystery stories I've read on the site so far, I'd say this is definitely the one with the most mystery. I really liked that you started off not knowing anything and had to figure out for yourself who to trust and who not to. It's a shame, 'cos I'd like to see a sequel, but since the guy's already got his memory back, that wouldn't really work. Great game! ^_^
-- Briar_Rose on 11/26/2012 10:24:38 AM with a score of 45
Wow, great story. Well written, and I love the unreliable narrator style of Memento and The Paradox Factor that you pulled off in this story. Very well done.
-- urnam0 on 7/26/2009 4:57:04 PM with a score of 35
Amazing story! Great action and adventure, very good idea of waking up not remembering who you are etc, very original. Great characters, good length of story before a choice, sometimes a bit long. Excellent vocabulary.
-- Bob Anderson Diaz on 4/30/2020 5:23:24 AM with a score of 45
Okay, I loved this a lot! The mystery with Adonica, the bull, and everyone else was a fun one. The narrator with amnesia is also enjoyable in itself. The story is fairly linear, with a couple of bad ends sprinkled in here and there.
I think this was really good!
A bit on the short side, but enjoyable nonetheless.
-- snailsforsale on 1/31/2020 10:38:03 AM with a score of 20
i really enjoyed the story it was a lot of fun
-- codysayre on 12/20/2019 10:05:49 AM with a score of 40
I really enjoyed playing this. It was very mysterious, and the amnesia from the beginning meant that neither the player nor the main character knew anything that the other didn't. However, I loved how you left just enough clues to begin to piece together what was going on early game.
The main (and basically only) issue I have with the game is that if Adonica is killed, and you visit her and see her body, the game later still comments "what they might have done" to her, even though the main character has already seen her dead.
Other than that, really well-made game.
-- Jangwoo Lee on 11/27/2018 2:07:28 AM with a score of 45
That was too easy man.
-- Dizastorm on 2/12/2018 4:54:29 PM with a score of 40
Damn stuffing diamonds in a bull's head rather than butt of a jackass... Are there even artefacts like that? ;D
-- TestingJest on 12/11/2017 9:22:19 PM with a score of 45
This was an interesting story, not like many that I've seen before. It was a little too linear for me, but content made up for it. I also didn't like the way information was brought on, with random pieces of information being remembered as the story develops, but I think there could be a better way to smooth that out. Overall, good story!
-- ultraoverlord on 12/2/2017 8:24:32 AM with a score of 40
I love this it was just an amazing storyline! But who was he and where did you get this idea?
-- pebble on 12/1/2017 4:11:04 PM with a score of 25
every choice i pick it is inapropate
-- lillyauna on 11/2/2017 7:33:16 PM with a score of 30
I think this was one of the first games I played when I found this site. It's probably still one of my favorites. Great story, though I wished it was more detailed.
-- crazygurl on 6/29/2017 12:34:48 AM with a score of 35
Wow nice story but it will be great if it a bit longer, more pic and item...
-- LOLiHAVEnoFACE on 5/29/2017 12:57:23 AM with a score of 45
I don't like how it would have a long sentence in the titles and then repeat in the storyline.
-- Delilah on 4/7/2017 11:14:29 PM with a score of 35
This game is good I would recommend it and this should be a James Bond plot
-- Alex on 4/5/2017 10:13:15 AM with a score of 35
it was fun but a little too long
-- qwerfgh on 1/18/2017 9:45:03 AM with a score of 5
very good story, the lack of endings i guess is sad, but it was very fun. i liked some of the deaths, and made me laugh a bit, i have no idea why. i like it and the story makes up for the endings, truly great. all throughout i didnt know if i was good or bad, and thats why its so good.
-- joggy135 on 1/4/2017 7:27:09 AM with a score of 40
A good story! I would love for a part two to be made...
-- Chickdove on 12/30/2016 11:34:59 PM with a score of 35
Love it! A little optionless, though.
-- happystory on 12/18/2016 4:50:50 PM with a score of 30
Wow. That was a very good game. At the end, I was like MY LIFE IS COOL!
-- Pony23xmas on 12/18/2016 12:12:32 PM with a score of 25
The story started off pretty well, only to end abruptly and weirdly. The story seemed rushed and frankly, there weren't many real choices either. I liked the writing style though. Have to say you maintained a solid grip on me. All in all a decent read
-- Pushan Pandita on 9/22/2016 4:46:03 PM with a score of 45
Kind of confusing, but overall, an amazing game! I love the ending paradox :D i got 20 points :)
-- JerryIsEpicLi on 9/18/2016 1:58:40 PM with a score of 20
My first story that I actually finished! Loved it!!!
-- DetroitShani313 on 9/8/2016 1:44:51 AM with a score of 45
Fun story. Lots of mystery. Well written with only a few spelling errors.
-- BigRonn77 on 9/1/2016 1:15:34 PM with a score of 35
that was really fun
-- annaisawesome on 8/10/2016 11:16:45 AM with a score of 30
excellent plot, very good writing, and the writer did an awesome job at keeping tension and suspense without leaving the reader completely confused and lost. i had a lot of fun playing it!
-- Cosmomcgee on 8/8/2016 2:43:20 PM with a score of 35
Really good! I new in only about 30 seconds that he was in a car. It took me a while to realize that the cloth was actually a seat belt. It was a very good story! I hope you make more stories in the future!
-- Olivia on 8/6/2016 11:05:50 PM with a score of 15
Wow. Nice game :)
-- Seto on 6/12/2016 6:29:27 PM with a score of 45
Heh, I got 35 pts. It was short but fun when you don't know what'll happen next.
-- 1belQ on 5/26/2016 3:41:29 AM with a score of 35
Poor Adonica..
-- LiquidWolfmans on 3/21/2016 5:31:42 PM with a score of 45
Very well written story liked it a lot!
-- Dang_Turtles on 3/8/2016 1:25:07 PM with a score of 45
Dumb-ass bruno...
-- CurseOfTime on 3/4/2016 8:52:39 PM with a score of 40
A promising author
-- Mommafakename on 1/31/2016 10:34:12 PM with a score of 45
it fun to see what happens
-- lillie on 1/27/2016 4:47:33 PM with a score of 5
I liked it
-- Greenovals on 1/27/2016 12:16:07 AM with a score of 5
Fun experience. Quite simple and short, but fun.
-- aartbastiaan on 1/14/2016 5:50:55 PM with a score of 45
I personally found the mystery rather easy to get through, but maybe that's just me...
-- AllThatIsGold on 1/10/2016 7:15:33 PM with a score of 45
it is well written
-- anabella on 12/22/2015 8:20:32 AM with a score of 40
I really want more, because it's so great!
-- ario on 11/29/2015 10:11:52 AM with a score of 45
Is this Spain?
-- Henri on 11/19/2015 9:32:03 PM with a score of 20
yea.. better than homework
-- twacky on 11/2/2015 10:46:14 AM with a score of 5
40 first go, retrying now.
-- Isshyyyji on 10/14/2015 5:04:31 PM with a score of 40
This story is very intense in such a way that I feel like I must keep playing until I have discovered the whole story. It's really well written and very interesting. I can't waid to read more of this author's work :)
-- Ariane on 10/6/2015 9:49:33 AM with a score of 30
That was pretty darn sweet, with the amnesia and stuff... I think whoever made this is a very good author. I also think you should use items with your story.

Pretty good.

7/8
-- TheMonitor on 7/17/2015 12:11:29 AM with a score of 45
nice story, I loved the action and mystery part of the tale. this should get five stars.
-- Crazywolf9000 on 6/26/2015 8:35:40 AM with a score of 30
6/8 nice story would have given higher score but there really was no reason to really like the characters. I just like feeling connected to the character i am playing and a bit more of a story in between all the scenes would have made it perfect. Overall great job
-- JinDary on 6/24/2015 1:33:15 PM with a score of 40
Yay! Despite the ratings....not hard at all.
-- Cloudflame on 5/31/2015 9:59:46 PM with a score of 30
Very interesting.
-- Traveller on 5/31/2015 8:08:22 PM with a score of 40
Wow! This game was awesome! I loved the story and the writing, both of which were fairly smooth and intrigued me throughout the entire game! Bravo!
-- AgentBunny on 5/3/2015 10:08:30 PM with a score of 45
nice :)
-- AthenaT on 4/17/2015 11:11:36 AM with a score of 30
Everyone said it was hard, but I didn't lose once.
-- Sylaf on 4/9/2015 2:44:51 PM with a score of 45
WAY to hard dude.
-- Ginger on 3/17/2015 4:23:00 PM with a score of 5
This is an amazing story you did an if you ever write a book or continue it I will definitely read it??????
-- Shrdha Lalwani on 3/8/2015 10:33:14 AM with a score of 40
A very good story
-- Shrdha on 3/7/2015 7:25:52 PM with a score of 15
Good and interesting with amnesia.
-- Fableheath on 2/26/2015 3:20:23 PM with a score of 40
It was decent...
-- Silverflame on 2/21/2015 2:10:05 PM with a score of 45
Great story but it lacks of options and it's short
-- ramosariel on 1/19/2015 9:47:25 AM with a score of 45
It was very well written.I ended with a score of 35. I really enjoyed playing this game!
-- Harper on 11/26/2014 3:32:52 PM with a score of 35
That was an entertaining story. I liked the plot twist, although it was slightly predictable. In spite, it was a fun way to spend twenty minutes and I enjoyed it.
-- Brooke P on 11/19/2014 6:26:28 PM with a score of 35
Loved this story
-- Kirby on 9/19/2014 10:33:09 PM with a score of 40
A great read! Lots of intrigue.
-- Shades911 on 9/9/2014 10:03:39 AM with a score of 35
I liked it. It was interesting, had good grammar and was well written. A decent length and a nice plot line. All I can say is that I wish you could add more detail with the slow recollection of memories. It was more, "you regains. Little bit of your memories, but they are useless ones." Then "you regain all your memories of this one person" then at the end suddenly you regain everything just by looking at one person. Maybe you should have tried to lengthen that aspect to a bit more. Other than that, great story and good work.
-- TheSophia on 7/24/2014 8:12:04 AM with a score of 35
Cool game, make moar plz
-- kid on 7/18/2014 7:05:19 PM with a score of 45
I liked it, but it was a little linear. 6/8
-- PortalSpartan on 7/14/2014 8:41:38 PM with a score of 45
This is an almost-perfect example of what I love in mystery - straightforward yet detailed explanations and a short yet developed storyline. Definitely a must-try!
-- namstarjiji on 6/28/2014 6:14:28 AM with a score of 40
I think it's good but could use more detail and quite coolly I finished this in one go.
-- ILoveBeingABookworm on 6/13/2014 5:16:07 AM with a score of 35
its a bit like total recall
-- dfyf on 4/6/2014 7:05:06 AM with a score of 45
Wow! This was an awesome story! Linear but awesome. However it would have been nice if it was more harder for it was eventually cleary what to choose to survive. I was a bit disappointed in the end since the story ended so quickly, however since the choices were meaningful and the setting was amazing, I give you a whooping 7. Thanks for such an awesome work! Also the last choice was clever. Cheers!
-- Negative on 3/25/2014 10:37:11 PM with a score of 40
It was great, but it seemed to end pretty quickly... Loved it, though!
-- Zephyrme2847 on 3/24/2014 9:45:11 AM with a score of 40
It was very good, a little bit short written in every options.
-- Benny on 3/23/2014 2:58:54 PM with a score of 15
well, that was fun! :)
-- vinru on 3/17/2014 1:00:32 PM with a score of 45
Great! Loved it! Could be improved in some aspects, I guess, but other than that, great! :)
-- MagicPencil on 2/11/2014 8:12:36 PM with a score of 40
The writing is very good, I liked the atmosphere, but I wish the story was longer and more twisted :)
-- SnowFlower on 1/23/2014 1:28:40 PM with a score of 45
This is One of those story who will make you happen Some Deja Vu Experience, Very nice storygame.
-- RabbitSeason on 1/2/2014 4:47:28 AM with a score of 45
it was really good i was dying to know what happened next. very well done. It's a shame it wasn't that long, but i can't expect you to write an entire book xP
-- CyberPhantom on 12/9/2013 12:33:46 PM with a score of 40
This story reminds me of when my best friend lost her memory. other tha that, i loved it!
-- Yo Mama on 11/2/2013 2:14:34 AM with a score of 35
Very well done. I really enjoyed it! I think it was well-thought through.
-- JerryAvis on 8/6/2013 9:28:14 PM with a score of 35
Pretty good. Liked the story very much
-- jack10345 on 7/27/2013 4:15:59 PM with a score of 40
I really liked this game! I really took her advice and trusted no one! XD Loved the game, and look forward to playing more of your stories!
-- jamkitty on 7/18/2013 7:19:29 AM with a score of 45
Fun in the "I have no idea what I'm doing" kind of way. Very interesting though.
-- ShipWrecker on 6/22/2013 8:16:22 PM with a score of 35
I liked it, I think your narration was splendid, but I must admit to finding one fault... "you can't outrun a bullet" ... actually, running (in a zigzag pattern) is one of your best options. It's very difficult to hit a moving target, and even if you do, it rarely hits a vital organ.
-- Kiel_Farren on 6/11/2013 3:01:42 AM with a score of 20
Short, Sweet and to the point. My type!
-- Ristar101 on 6/8/2013 6:16:54 AM with a score of 35
Really love amnesia espionage story. Hope that you make another one like this. People said that amnesia story is cheap and overused. I tell that they are wrong. Amnesia story is like sex, you'd never have enough as long as it is great. Thank you for the great work.
-- Mike on 6/1/2013 12:39:37 PM with a score of 45
Awesome game! Loved it!
-- skier4life on 5/24/2013 2:54:50 PM with a score of 35
Awww. I got shot in the antique shop. Still, I'm proud of myself for getting a score of 30! I think I read too many books like this.
-- Christian_Writer on 5/19/2013 10:53:56 AM with a score of 30
How can you get score of 45?!?
-- epiclab on 4/16/2013 8:53:05 PM with a score of 25
Not bad. A neat effect but it felt a little rushed.
-- MagmaArmor0 on 2/21/2013 2:13:27 AM with a score of 40
HAHA i liked this ending better
-- toni on 1/8/2013 12:59:46 AM with a score of 30
Well I got a score of 5 as I don't know what to choose. I gotta play again and try to get a higher score. Btw, I got the "falling off a cliff from my car" ending.
-- toni on 1/8/2013 12:32:27 AM with a score of 5
Fun and interesting!
-- Kotorchix on 12/21/2012 12:33:42 AM with a score of 35
Wow That was a good game. Beat it first try :)
-- MelNIE on 12/12/2012 1:52:13 AM with a score of 45
Seth says MEH! It was kind of annoying not knowing who you are and all of that crap, but still pretty good. 5/8
-- SethIsBeast on 11/4/2012 1:14:36 PM with a score of 35
This story was absolutely great! Although, I found it to be a bit short, I really liked it! Maybe you could make a possible sequel?! By the way, I earned a 45.
Are there any different paths you can take to get the same or a better ending?
-- LivingLife on 10/25/2012 5:47:14 PM with a score of 45
The ending was sort of fast and easy--it all fell into place very, very quickly on the last page. I think you could have easily dragged it out longer. But, all in all, it was a fun play. :)
-- featherhead on 9/21/2012 1:04:09 PM with a score of 35
FABULOUS!!!!
-- Miaomii on 7/18/2012 10:20:18 AM with a score of 35
sweet 6/8. Make a sequel. Also did I get the best score?
-- betaband on 5/26/2012 12:00:53 PM with a score of 45
Love it! Make more soon!
-- Tamara on 4/28/2012 4:00:33 PM with a score of 35
nice story,couldve been longer though
-- storymaster on 3/15/2012 1:21:57 AM with a score of 45
PREEEEEEEEEEEEty good story.
-- Swiftstryker on 3/8/2012 7:57:25 PM with a score of 30
very good! i really liked it
-- DarkentityOni on 11/20/2011 9:57:52 PM with a score of 35
Great story. Wish it had been longer and played out a bit more. The only thing I hate about a good story is when it ends.
-- Kerri on 11/2/2011 10:32:19 PM with a score of 45
Briliant story. I thought I was some criminal or something but it turned out to be totally different.
-- NinaB.R. on 10/19/2011 12:15:47 AM with a score of 45
I got shot! But I expected it. Great game, have to play agin. 8/8
-- bucket on 10/14/2011 7:18:22 AM with a score of 15
I loved it, really good, Especially the beginning, I thought this was gunna be a random story at first. Nicely done! The intrique of it all was splendid!
-- ChaiHai on 9/29/2011 7:12:49 PM with a score of 45
I wonder if you can get better than 40?
-- bradhal on 9/8/2011 11:45:31 AM with a score of 40
Amazing!!!!!!!! Best story I have ever read. Loved the start. Love the mystery. Loved it!
-- bradhal on 9/8/2011 11:32:50 AM with a score of 35
Pretty good, but it needed more indepth, it needed to be more like a bourne identity movie. I noticed alot of spelling errors too.
-- A Guy Named Stan(ovich) on 9/5/2011 10:08:54 PM with a score of 40
Kalun approves
-- kalun on 8/24/2011 5:48:25 PM with a score of 45
Really good story, wish there was a bit more reader involvement or decision making, but all in all it was a very vivid piece and would love to see another.
-- kid on 7/7/2011 10:24:46 AM with a score of 40
Interesting game, but we never really find out what the deal with the beginning is.
-- Killa_Robot on 6/25/2011 9:28:09 PM with a score of 40
A little short, but a good game nonetheless.
-- Magus on 6/9/2011 3:25:38 PM with a score of 40
very well written
-- Killer999 on 5/17/2011 12:08:58 PM with a score of 30
Really grabs your attention, good visuals and first person narrative. I enjoyed it, but felt it to be short.
-- MethodKid on 5/13/2011 2:49:21 PM with a score of 45
Good. Hoping there will be a next one
-- reader56 on 5/13/2011 12:51:59 AM with a score of 40
I liked this! One of the better ones I've seen here! Good job!
-- DRBickham on 4/24/2011 11:39:38 PM with a score of 45
Fun read
-- Ellume on 3/24/2011 7:46:11 AM with a score of 40
I noticed when I was going down every alternate path that you re-used a page when you probably shouldn't have.

If I tell the policeman the woman's name, and then go inside her shop, I am then forced to follow the policeman. When I go to follow him, it tells me that since I know where the woman's shop is, I "can always come back and talk to her later."

Having already seen the inside of the shop, I somehow doubt the main character would be planning to doing that.
-- TsukiNoBara on 3/3/2011 1:12:17 AM with a score of 5
Not bad, though the passport part sounded a bit like the bourne identity.
-- acissejcousi on 12/4/2010 12:12:01 AM with a score of 40
dangerous like choose your own adventure
-- japs panot on 11/30/2010 4:19:39 AM with a score of 40
i always die why?
-- detectiveyaya on 11/14/2010 10:56:36 PM with a score of 5
well written, entertaining... quick ending, though. could use a lot more plot.
-- pomegralice on 10/7/2010 10:08:00 AM with a score of 45
Wow... Great storyline and it was really fun, I won first try!
-- doodoodude on 9/17/2010 11:00:31 AM with a score of 30
Excellent. Sometimes the amnesia thing seems overused, but you did it well here and it works. The reveal does seem a little sudden, but all in all--great work.
-- Trzcina on 1/5/2010 8:21:17 PM with a score of 45
I really enjoyed reading this before bed. I had hoped the character's stories would've gone a bit more into depth, but overall the story was fantastic. I scored a 40.
-- Richard on 12/1/2008 2:01:10 AM with a score of 40
It's an ok story game.
-- koolgai on 10/7/2008 8:15:53 PM with a score of 25
Really good and engaging! Wish it was longer, but that's always the wish when it comes to good stories... :-)
-- MeAndNoOneElse on 8/26/2008 3:44:04 PM with a score of 45
Very descriptive and good story, but has some spelling errors.
-- Conneth on 3/16/2008 12:28:08 AM with a score of 45
Very good! Make it a little longer and it'll be perfect!
-- goosebumpsreader on 1/28/2008 9:32:21 PM with a score of 35
It was great! I was only disappointed that it wasn't longer. Perhaps you could make this a series?
-- Eva on 1/22/2008 5:06:11 PM with a score of 45
6.99/8. Great game. Nothing is better than Reeses Cups though. Otherwise I give it a 7.
-- Expander on 12/8/2007 10:13:16 AM with a score of 35
A very good game for it's kind.
-- Oriol on 10/30/2007 5:53:59 PM with a score of 45
this is a great story/game. a good plot and lots of twists and turns, and some mild humour at the start!
-- elpenguino on 8/23/2007 8:56:07 AM with a score of 35
Weird but great story. Nice job.
-- Anubis on 3/26/2007 6:03:18 PM with a score of 45
NICE!
-- Rommel on 3/10/2007 6:34:35 AM with a score of 45
Amazing game and great job!
-- Cake on 1/10/2007 7:03:46 PM with a score of 40
Cool story. Has a good plot and is very descriptive.
-- Rodney on 11/24/2006 3:00:35 PM with a score of 45
Fantastic story telling! It was exciting and really fun, I have to give a 7/8. Will there be a second one I would love to read it. It had me wondering just who my dude was, so many false things going on I was getting confused but then at the end it all made sence.
-- Leon101 on 11/21/2006 2:16:07 PM with a score of 35
Another excellent story. Not only is your writing extremely good (at times you mess up a tense but it's barely noticeable), you are an amazing storyteller. That was exciting. I'd like more choices, however. I appreciate that it's harder to drive the story forward that way, but still nice to have.
-- madglee on 11/3/2006 1:51:06 PM with a score of 40
That game was so totally awesome!
-- primates_II on 11/2/2006 5:24:34 PM with a score of 35
hehe, i died early, but i like the funniness of the start ^_^ the pizza bit, makes me feel like an idiot, but in a good way :P
-- huruey on 11/1/2006 7:05:52 PM with a score of 5
Not my favourite game, but a good game. I enjoyed it. Well written as well.
-- October on 10/27/2006 2:44:24 AM with a score of 40
Thanks guys! The highest score possible is 45 in this story.
-- tsmpaul on 10/26/2006 7:44:42 PM with a score of 5
Very cool! I like the style, thought it was really simple, but then it got way more complex later on!
What is a good score? (I got 30)
-- Simmuskhan on 10/26/2006 7:17:05 AM with a score of 30
Ok, actually, I changed my mind. This is now my favorite game of all, so I want to change my rating to an 8. So, hmm, about my score, just wanted to finish fast and change the rating.
-- GodsSlayer on 10/25/2006 10:30:44 PM with a score of 20
This is a very good game! I very much like the way you write and though, yes I have to agree with Nate, your choices were simple. But, I like simple games with writing, I like reading them. Plus, you have excellent writing skills, so this game definitely deserves a 6. Please continue making more games!
-- GodsSlayer on 10/25/2006 10:20:03 PM with a score of 40
dang, off a cliff. lol simple choices, but yet solid story and writing. im impressed.
-- Fleshnblood_78 on 10/25/2006 9:51:45 PM with a score of 5
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