Dusty Fist 2: Electric Boogaloo

a Sci-Fi by Chris113022

Commended by hetero_malk on 3/8/2021 3:37:39 PM

Player Rating5.63/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 48 ratings since 08/18/2019
played 505 times (finished 61)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

A young martial artist goes on another hilarious romp through post-apocalyptic America.

My entry for Mizal's 2019 Lone Hero Contest.

Authors Notes: This is a sequel to Dusty Fist. You don't actually need to have read the original in order to enjoy this one, as that was more of an elaborate shitpost while this... Is also an elaborate shitpost.

Player Comments

Ending 7 felt like justice.

The Dusty Fist series is still the pinnacle of all the 'lol so random' games I have ever encountered, and the only ones I've actually enjoyed. Some of the humor did fall flat for me or felt a little forced, but with the way it just kept charging ahead joke after joke I would always soon enough encounter one that worked.

Ending 9 btw was a tragic missed opportunity to turn HOLY FUCK A SANDWHALE! into the running gag I'd thought it would be...

Since it was established in game that alternate universes exist and that the wall between them is thin out in the wasteland, I won't question too hard how at one point the tank is full of some weeny Power Rangers knock offs, and then the next time it was the typical raiders dressed in rubber and leather...in a metal tank...in the desert...

You know come to think of it, let's call that missed opportunity #2: I'd have laughed if you'd busted your way in there only to find them all dying of dehydration and heat stroke. Although come to think of it, I don't believe poor Dusty Fist himself ever managed to get that drink of water in any of these...

I laughed out loud at the Shane quote as the story came to the predictable ending that all Westerns do: that of flinging a massive tank away with a giant rubber band.

Ending 6 was fun, it was the one that most specifically gave me the kind of improbable kung fu action promised by the sweet title page. I always love Chris' stylist title pages and need to at some point steal their secrets and use them on my own stories.

Anyhow, all in all another entertaining effort from Chris. Such is the power of a man with a wiener of a perfectly average size!

-- mizal on 8/27/2019 3:15:46 PM with a score of 0
I would recommend this story to anyone who enjoyed the first “Dusty Fist.” If you faggot who reads reviews before stories have not read it, you should, but you don’t have to in order to enjoy this one. There are a few call-backs to it, but nothing depends on having read the first one before.
However, if you don’t like absurd humor, this story might not be for you.

The bright cover art is very exciting and perfect to add HYPE to the story.
Although I had read the first page a few times before I wrote this review, it still made me laugh. It sets the tone for the rest of the story very well.
The link to the elevator music was a very nice touch. In a more serious story it would have been unnecessary and a little weird, but here it works perfectly and was kind of funny.
I also liked the results of the running choice in this one. At first it seemed that it’d be the same as the first Dusty Fist, and that made it funnier when it wasn’t.

The branching style was cave of time, and despite each individual path being very short, there are a fair number of them. So be sure to make use of the back button.
Some of the endings had more detail than others, but all were pretty good. My favorites were the rubber band one, the stone six one, and the wiener one.

Dusty Fist is pretty much what a lot of noob stories try to be, except instead of being unfunny lol random stories, it is actually well-written and funny. I can’t say I enjoyed this more than I did the original, but it’s still pretty awesome in its own right.

Here’s to another hilarious entry in the story of Dusty Fist.
-- Cricket on 8/23/2019 4:47:39 PM with a score of 0
That was a really fun story. Kind of like Mad Max mixed with some Fist of the North Star. I never played God Hand before but this really makes me want to try it.

So the writing was silly, as pretty much anyone who read the original Dusty Fist might guess. Basically we're a goofy hardcore martial artist who makes bad guys explode with his fists and clearly doesn't skip leg day. A lot of the dialogue is funny and some of the plot points are written in a joking way. But this was less "lol random" and more "the world has gone to hell and now leather clad raiders ride scrap tanks around while insulting you. Enjoy". The spelling and grammar were all very good as well.


Basically the whole story is about us trying to stop a giant scrap tank from destroying a town. And thats really it. You can go about it in many different ways (infiltration, giant rubber band, simply running away so fast you change dimensions/time skip). But overall it wasn't very plot heavy. However it did manage to fit the theme of "Lone Hero" rather well. In most endings at least. Heck, in one ending we even save the town and walk off into the sunset (after thoroughly confusing a young boy with our speech).

Overall I felt this was a fun story. You didn't have to think to hard about it, it wasn't overly long, and there was sufficient variation and meaningful choices. Good work Chris.
-- TurnipBandit on 8/19/2019 9:49:04 PM with a score of 0
I laughed way too hard at this.
-- stargirl on 3/4/2021 9:53:05 AM with a score of 0
Having read the first story, this sequel ends up being more of the same. However if you think that to be an insult, it isn’t whatsoever. The first story was genuinely hilarious, and this is no different. It's still coherently written, and there's still quite a generous amount of choices that lead to many different outcomes.

This remains a story-game that was plenty of worth being played through more than once, twice, or even thrice. I would say in regards to the spirit of choose your own adventure games, this stays true to that.

And I feel that's one of the highest compliments that a cyoa can get, in my opinion at least.

Fantastic work as it always seems to be, Chris.
-- TharaApples on 2/8/2021 6:27:47 PM with a score of 0
Got me laughing a lot hahaha
I liked the wheener ending, but there are still secondaries.
-- I lost my account on 2/6/2021 10:49:36 AM with a score of 0
Fun and very engaging. My attention span has been so low lately and I don't typically read Westerns (much less Post-Apocalyptic ones!), but I really enjoyed this. I hope to read more of your writing!
-- Garrison_Bell on 12/22/2020 7:02:06 PM with a score of 0
Bad game. No plot. Way too short. So bad I can't use words to describe it. Sorry to the author, Chris113022.
-- Akary on 5/13/2020 3:02:15 PM with a score of 0
Normally, I would encourage writers to avoid writing sentences in all caps, but it worked with the type of humor present in this story. I like how you included such a wide diversity of endings, again; it felt very interactive. It also made me chuckle a few times. Good job, overall.

I think I'm going to go finally find myself a glass of water.
-- Reader82 on 1/24/2020 10:36:05 AM with a score of 0
My wiener is a perfectly average size!!! This game has plenty of funny little sentences that were funny. The writing quality was much better than the prequel.
-- 3iguy on 1/8/2020 2:25:09 PM with a score of 0
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