Player Rating5.93/8

"#72 overall, #5 for 2008"
based on 331 ratings since 06/25/2008
played 7,997 times (finished 361)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

This one's for the kids, no really!

Additional Notes:

This story has clear cut win/lose endings. There is nothing excessively unusual about this story, it's just a simple "children's story".

(Yes, you can still die in it)

Player Comments

Well written story as usual EndMaster! Good amount of choices for a children's story.
-- BigRonn77 on 9/6/2016 2:56:57 PM
Awwww... That was sweet! Apparently writing for children is a real challenge. Way to knock it out of the ball park, yet again, End :)
-- Starky on 4/22/2015 6:13:36 PM
Arguably the most unique out of EndMaster's stories, but not in a bad way. You really weren't joking when you said it's appropriate for kids. There's not much I can say other than it's worth a read.
-- 31TeV on 9/11/2014 5:12:08 AM
Good game!
-- Seth Barker on 5/22/2018 11:02:47 AM
I loved it. This is the first story I've read here, so I don't have much to compare it to, but I did like reading the story. There was one part of the story where it looked like you were choosing a path in the crossroad, and I feel like you should've had a choice there. Maybe the other path would end in death or something, but I really felt like there should've been a choice there.
-- Box-o-cookies on 12/23/2017 1:58:23 AM
I'm actually quite surprised that you even write books for children. x'D

This was very well written, and I loved the plot development. Not that many grammatical mistakes which I noticed, and it was amazing.

-- DiniTheWizard on 11/20/2017 5:48:59 PM
The plot and concepts behind the story were very well done. The choices that were presented were realistic, and they were abundant. I wish more had been elaborated upon the ability to create things out of thin air from imagination.
-- Zulutrader on 1/31/2017 10:04:11 AM
Gave me nightmares
-- Mind on 1/15/2017 12:29:45 AM
It's so adorable! I like how he made it happen, not some abstract evil force.
-- apsoy on 10/10/2016 12:31:07 AM
god that was long. i wasted half my afternoon just getting to the zodan military transportation machine!
-- thebigE on 7/2/2016 4:04:05 PM
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