Player Rating5.90/8

"#72 overall, #5 for 2008"
based on 345 ratings since 06/25/2008
played 8,339 times (finished 372)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

This one's for the kids, no really!

Additional Notes:

This story has clear cut win/lose endings. There is nothing excessively unusual about this story, it's just a simple "children's story".

(Yes, you can still die in it)

Player Comments

Well written story as usual EndMaster! Good amount of choices for a children's story.
-- BigRonn77 on 9/6/2016 2:56:57 PM
Awwww... That was sweet! Apparently writing for children is a real challenge. Way to knock it out of the ball park, yet again, End :)
-- Starky on 4/22/2015 6:13:36 PM
Arguably the most unique out of EndMaster's stories, but not in a bad way. You really weren't joking when you said it's appropriate for kids. There's not much I can say other than it's worth a read.
-- 31TeV on 9/11/2014 5:12:08 AM
but shadows gots to sqare up
-- salil on 8/17/2018 11:53:19 AM
i love roblox then reading :} :) :> :]
-- geust 666 on 8/17/2018 11:45:09 AM
wow this is cool i loved it so much i like wen you fight them
-- james on 8/17/2018 11:38:58 AM
Great story, EndMaster! Pretty good for a kid-friendly read!
-- ILLUMINATI on 6/18/2018 2:10:15 PM
Good game!
-- Seth Barker on 5/22/2018 11:02:47 AM
I loved it. This is the first story I've read here, so I don't have much to compare it to, but I did like reading the story. There was one part of the story where it looked like you were choosing a path in the crossroad, and I feel like you should've had a choice there. Maybe the other path would end in death or something, but I really felt like there should've been a choice there.
-- Box-o-cookies on 12/23/2017 1:58:23 AM
I'm actually quite surprised that you even write books for children. x'D

This was very well written, and I loved the plot development. Not that many grammatical mistakes which I noticed, and it was amazing.

-- DiniTheWizard on 11/20/2017 5:48:59 PM
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