It's Raining Again
Love & Dating
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played 697 times (finished 91)
"no possible way to lose"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
A short story written and scripted in about four hours.
This isn't meant to be a masterpiece or an attempt at being deep. Hopefully it shows that a competent 20 page + story can be written in a weekend's time.
Contest entrants: there's no reason to garner SHAME when entering a contest on the site. Just sit down and write.
I personally did not like this and I would not recommend this to anything. I feel attacked tbh.
on 2/9/2018 10:52:31 AM with a score of 0
Not really Impactful, but still interesting.
on 1/11/2018 4:36:21 PM with a score of 0
on 12/15/2017 6:38:50 PM with a score of 0
I wish there were more choices. I enjoyed the story though!
on 11/18/2017 3:30:41 PM with a score of 0
Definitely a style of its own, almost poetic. Not my particular cup of tea, but still interesting. Has Mr. Jagger given his critique?
-- Weinerpuppy on 8/9/2017 9:39:11 AM with a score of 0
Ha.... well you seem to like The Rolling Stones. Pretty good.... I guess... I wouldn't call it competent, but it ain't bad. Only people who know The Rolling Stones would understand the measure of humor in this game.
on 5/11/2017 2:32:40 PM with a score of 0
Palepaper are you even a real person? That's a Rolling Stones reference
on 5/3/2017 6:33:31 PM with a score of 0
If you really pay attention to the story it does tug on your heart slightly. What really spoke to me was wanting to rid of the colors. Could use improvement as all things do but enjoyable none the less.
on 5/3/2017 4:40:15 AM with a score of 0
Obviously a little on the short side but well written and works for what it was. You did a nice job establishing the setting and the character's mental state with few words. I've been experimenting around with the idea of 'flash CYOAs' so this is of interest to me for that reason too.
The means of triggering endings was a little too obvious so it may have taken away from the experience to repeatedly hitting restart and going to select a different option just to see all the text, but any coherent story in four hours is impressive. Mission accomplished as far as proving a passable story is not hard to write. The difficulty probably lies more in being able to identify what is and isn't a manageable plot in a short timeframe. Seems like a lot of the last minute entrants bit off more than they could chew, myself included.
on 5/1/2017 10:02:15 PM with a score of 0
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