Randomly Walk II, The epic sequel.

Player Rating4.45/8

"#332 overall, #24 for 2013"
based on 152 ratings since 05/13/2013
played 934 times (finished 170)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

this is a loosely satirical and somewhat more gamey version of the game that isn't really a game. thanks to the creative juices of Bardockwest. The ORIGINAL: http://chooseyourstory.com/story/randomly-walk

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-- Katie Andres on 3/14/2020 2:15:50 PM with a score of 0
Intro: Before getting into this, I would like to mention I know this is a parody, but for the purposes of this review I'm going to be ignoring that fact.

First of all I want to say that even though this is a parody the writing is not that bad. I still kind of enjoyed reading this even if it is just another lolrandom game. The style of your writing is very descriptive, and from this and the bio on your profile page you seem to be very great at describing things. Especially outlandish things I have come to notice. If you were to make a serious attempt I think you could make a story worth featuring. I can't think of many authors on this site that go this far with their outlandish descriptions and would like to see more.

Concept: The concept is pretty good. I like the whole walking this, and the inception thing even if it was repetitive after each path to see the whole inception thing, it was entertaining. At least at first. Besides the fact that this is a lol random game the concept of just walking around is an interesting one. In a story with a plot you could talk to characters and explore places with no reason beside something like I don't know traveling or something? Speaking of plot...

Plot: There isn't much of one. This isn't you fault because this a parody but ignoring that the lack of any rhyme or reason or anything at all is infuriating. Why am I walking? While this story is a lol random there could have at least been a basic plot. A reason or goal to accomplish. In any case, let's move on.

Character: Characters? What's a character?

Structure: The structure is very… weird. So you basically pick a direction and you branch off from there. One direction is a death, one makes you turn into a ball of inferno, one lets you walk in circles until your rotation destroys the earth, and another makes you walk forever until you choose to hang yourself. There are a few diffrent paths so at least it isn't liner, but still. How you reach those paths is pretty basic.

Word count: 3k. Meh. Not long, but the fact you put so much into a parody game let's me excuse this.

Spelling and grammar: Good. Not much else to say. Most games are either good or bad and that's it.

Conclusion: This game was well made. It may not be a good game on account of the lack of plot and characters, it is still very well made. I hope that we get more stories from you because your style of writing is unique and I love it. Also I never got to read the original on account of it being unpublished. 4/8

-- Serpent on 8/2/2019 8:24:53 AM with a score of 0
Wow. The twists, the turns, the drama. This is an inspiring tale of romance, heroism, and sacrifice that complete a winding narrative and leave the player utterly satisfied. You've done it.
-- Nigger on 6/6/2019 8:29:10 PM with a score of 0
As requested, I read this to my chickens.

Henrietta took an angry poop. Scrambled began to growl. Cogburn took a lovely dust bath. Yolko Ono ran off to chase a bug. And my two nameless future dinners sat and clucked happily while listening to the story.

Altogether the chickens gave it a 3/8.
-- simplesabley on 9/9/2018 4:24:52 PM with a score of 0
Sorry sentinel 1/8
-- AurondragonTyr on 5/16/2018 5:00:58 PM with a score of 0
This was a random story my friend, and you know I love randomness here.While you may of copied the original idea you still shaped it into your own little world.I mean how many dreams do you need before you wake The hell up!
It was a kinda funny twist to the story, and I wish you could of dragged your story out a little more, not that I want you to drag it out s much my skins burns in the sun.(Punz)
I also congratulate you on giving credit, some people would just take it as their own and take all the fame.So good job on not being a ‘thieving theif’ if that’s makes any sense.Now like I said I loved the randomness, but I became a bit weird.While YOUR SKIN BURNING OFF wasn’t as dark you would expect it, it still was weird.Not as weird as a guy doing a shit on a desk with man eating worms in it.(Great Profile By The Way)
So as a first storygame 5/8 for randomness and all that other stuff(Keep Up The Mildly Disgusting Work) :)-From Mistery
-- Mistery on 3/9/2018 8:54:02 PM with a score of 0
What the fuck did I just read!? JK XD
-- Some N00B on 11/28/2017 11:36:32 PM with a score of 0
I never did get to read the original masterpiece, but someone brought it up on the forum which reminded me that this existed.

All things considered, way funnier than it had any right to be. I'm going to sort of envision this as a representation of what goes on in your head when you get really fired up about creating a text wall.
-- mizal on 7/5/2017 11:08:52 AM with a score of 0

Apparently, this is what happens when you take a glass of concentrated absinthe-espresso cocktail and drink while watching Inception. A dream where you dream of dreams you are dreaming of and dream dreams where you wake up from a dream and loop a lollapalooza and oh fark haywire dreams while spinning pike a theater couree and spaghetti with chickenheads...

No, I was not drunk when I wrote that part. I was simply dazzled and spun around at all that happened in some simple walk.

Because you spun me, this is not the best story ever. But not the worst, too. 5/8.

-- AgentX on 2/18/2017 8:11:59 PM with a score of 0
greatest game ever
-- Negative on 1/28/2017 3:59:10 AM with a score of 0
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