the late republic part one

Player Rating1.66/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 62 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty7/8

"wade in shark infested water"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

this takes place a thousand years after the return of the jedi. all of the jedi and sith have fallen, but the war between the republic and sith (troopers of the sith) still rages on. you yourself can save or destroy the universe.

Hope you all understand that this is my first story and i'm not the greatest. and please do not leave negitive comments if anything please rate it 1 to 100 thx

Player Comments

This is a remarkable story game. I haven't seen Star Wars for several years but even I'm fairly sure Sith Lords don't get chewed out by "Sarge", have pals called Johnny who cry if they aren't allowed to join the Sith and regularly use guns and rocks in battle. This game has also introduced me to the word "diddin't" which is a masterpiece of misspelt but phonetically correct language. I don't mean to be harsh but I'm not sure writing is your forte, also I'm not sure if you've ever seen Star Wars.
-- Will11 on 1/15/2015 11:20:47 AM with a score of 0
Wow, umm.. the grammar was not very good. Then again, that in itself is the least glaringly offensive thing in this story, surprisingly.
-- TharaApples on 9/13/2016 1:33:57 AM with a score of 0
terrible 1/8
-- omgitschowhall on 7/1/2016 5:37:59 PM with a score of 0
..what is this....
-- Nazhfa on 6/4/2016 8:11:34 AM with a score of 0
What the hell is this bullcrap. Poorly done with no proper use of grammar.
-- Jimmysutton on 3/31/2016 9:57:15 AM with a score of 0
Toooo short
-- rdawson85 on 9/9/2015 10:58:57 PM with a score of 0
This mess is barely readable. A lot of people on the site make the mistake of writing their dialogue like a script. You actually alternate between proper dialogue and a script-like format.
-- jamescoker1226 on 3/13/2015 1:01:24 AM with a score of 0
waiting for part two to come out
-- person on 7/7/2014 1:02:05 PM with a score of 0
So I purposely killed myself as you completely lost me in the first page after I made my faction choice.

Johnny?....>WTF... Star Wars dude, how about you make up names, instead of useing real world names. Also, the Sith (or how about just enemy Troopers) can't be sith unless they use the darkside. The Sith are not a country or anything like that, they are a school of thought, like the Jedi, in fact the if there are no more Sith anymore as your intro suggests, the majority of there non force useing soldiers would have left...Non force using sith soldiers for the most part were brian washed by the dark side and there sith masters.

If your going to do SW fiction, do a little research first.
-- DarthNelly on 4/22/2013 11:56:18 AM with a score of 0
Too linear and full of punctuation errors. Needs editing
-- Xt1000305 on 2/1/2013 6:30:52 AM with a score of 0
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