Waiting for the (Trump) Train

Player Rating3.63/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 48 ratings since 11/22/2017
played 187 times (finished 47)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Alternate title: WIBN Parodies Annoying Stuff

TRIGGER WARNING: If you personally know Trump, have ever heard of Trump, know anybody who knows Trump, know anybody who has ever heard of Trump, or has political beliefs of any kind, please do not play.

None of your choices have any effect. If you do see a choice having an effect, then you must be clearly wrong. Heck, it isn't like this is a site where you can choose your own story or anything.

The story is told though you own choices. Don't argue with me. Your choices have no meaning, but the entire storygame is told through your choices.

Also, please do not comment or rate my storygame. I published it not to improve my abilities as a writer. My feelings will be hurt if you even think about commenting especially if your comments are not nice. Also, men cannot comment because sexism or something.

Player Comments

A very thought provoking tale as to be expected from one that is a contest winner on this site.

I have received a variety of different endings so far, so I must say that it feels wonderful to know that my choices actually effected which outcome I received towards the conclusion of this piece.

There were some issues that I have seen with the grammar, and I must say that it gives a rushed impression, although the misspellings and issues of grammar were few and far between. The writing for the most part tells and depicts a story of hopelessness that made me feel for the protagonists plight when all was said and done.

Truly less was more in this case.

Bravo, WIBN, bravo. I am still wiping the tears from my eyes as I type out this comment. Thank you for creating this rather ambitious and heartwrenching tale. ^_^
-- TharaApples on 11/21/2017 9:00:42 PM with a score of 0
love this cause the world is fucked up rn
-- s33773 on 12/27/2017 3:10:23 AM with a score of 0
Pretty good. Nice metaphor.
-- Comply on 12/14/2017 7:42:26 PM with a score of 0
... ?
what?
... THIS IS MADDNESS!
very strang and confusing @weirdness.stupiditlyentertaining
-- ohh? on 12/7/2017 2:35:54 AM with a score of 0
Funny little story to help kill 5 minutes of time. 6/8
-- Sharkworld78 on 11/29/2017 3:21:57 PM with a score of 123
Hahaha ok so I guess the Orange train is Trump and the pale one was Hillary? Well the beginning was kinda funny. You might have a hidden skill in comedy writing.
-- Crystal_Inferno on 11/28/2017 8:49:21 AM with a score of 0
all I can say is..... You wasted your opportunity.
-- BigRonn77 on 11/27/2017 3:41:53 PM with a score of 0
Damn it.... not.... Nothern Ireland
-- corgi213 on 11/26/2017 2:56:50 PM with a score of 123
Mad, Mad, Mad, oh and then when I thought I would survive the (Trump) train...I loved it so much, absolutely mad!!!
-- Paul on 11/26/2017 12:34:48 AM with a score of 0
This is hilarious.
"Whatever Steve is"
"Northern Ireland"
xD

I had no idea what was happening, but it was great.
Now I'm in a jovial mood, and I don't know why. :D
-- Crescentstar on 11/25/2017 2:42:21 PM with a score of 123
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