What I want to Be!

Player Rating3.21/8

"#464 overall, #49 for 2015"
based on 101 ratings since 05/24/2015
played 432 times (finished 105)

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

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A fun poem that you make the outcome of.

It is short people, i got that. So do not say too short or boring. It is supposed to be a small fun little thing you can enjoy and are not tortured with!

Player Comments

I haven't seen anything like this before on the site so you earn some points there. Unfortunately this hardly felt poetic, some of the lines appear to have been added only to make a rhyme and actually add no merit to the verse. I had hoped that when we chose an animal, for example, we would be brought through a nice page about being a frog. Then we would be able to choose what we do as a frog. Instead we get a series of choices as to what we are with no real consequences for choosing them. I want to be told what it would mean to be a green caramel frog. Length is a great thing to have, but I do not want it in this story if it just means more haphazardly connected pages. I want a poem about being a frog dadgummit. I don't want to tell you that I am a frog and then read some nonsensically strung together lines and suddenly be candy.
-- ugilick on 6/13/2015 1:24:54 PM
Boring. Sorry, but that’s the truth.
-- Penny on 4/13/2018 6:06:28 AM
Unique, and kept my interest for the short time that I played it. But I don't really see a point, besides just choosing random options of what you want to be, and the riddles very obvious. 4/8 though, 'cause it was short and entertaining.
-- Troppy on 6/21/2017 11:55:27 AM
I'm not sure what message this was trying to convey. First I'm a wolf, then I'm a lollipop, then I'm some tea.

Also, "defiantly" isn't used in that way. "Definitely" is the word you're looking for.
-- MrMustachio on 2/18/2017 10:22:19 AM
Nice poem.??
-- Ginnyweasleybooklove on 8/10/2016 11:07:51 PM
I liked it, it is amusing. Good job.
-- madmax on 6/12/2016 6:47:36 PM
I don't think "shedded" is a word. :p
-- Briar_Rose on 1/20/2016 6:46:36 AM
Wow, short, but fun.
-- QlhAah123 on 6/5/2015 1:34:33 AM
It's not really a CYOA. As far as I can tell, the choices make no difference.
-- Sethaniel on 5/28/2015 11:40:02 AM
ironically I liked it
-- dragon396 on 5/27/2015 4:54:31 PM
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