First attempt at a story but I do have long term plans for this thing,advice is welcome and encouraged just please be respectful

As a life long Pokemon fan I have played all the games and loved all the games,that being said I have often wished for more customization or a more in-depth experience with the games,and with all the "Choose Your Adventure" type game sites out there I was shocked to find there were almost none on Pokemon,so my solution? make one of my own.Pick up Pokemon,win badges maybe even potentially join Team Rocket?You decide.

Thanks for the heads up on the typo's,I'll get to work on those,as far as posting a link I think I'm gonna' finish at least one of the routes up to the first battle like you suggested before I post a link up.

I've finally decided to give writing a try.I've started a Pokemon CYOA story(I know it's not everyone's cup of tea but eh why not?)I've only got a little past the Prologue finished but if I could get some advice,suggestions options wise or anything it would be more than welcomed.

Thanks for the reply! I'll  be sure check out the writing forums and post my story on there.Thank you,if I would've posted my unfinished story and gotten nothing but bad reviews I would've been crushed Haha. 

Hey Forum!.Yeah I didn't know if I should open a whole thread just to say hello but,I did it and well,Hello! I'm new here.As of right now I'm working on my first CYS game and I think it kinda...sucks so is there a way to just publish a Prologue type thing first before I dive into the whole thing so I can get a general idea if my story totally sucks or not before I continue with it?