DarkSpawn, The Dramatist

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5/16/2024 9:49 AM

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Can help with translations and proofreading in spanish.

Probably not.

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End Master’s Prompt Contest 3 on 4/3/2024 5:52:17 PM
14k? One word doesn't count as ten just because it's typed by your fat greasy fingers. Fatass.

Gay Nazi Slapfight (Now with Femboys!) on 1/15/2024 8:14:23 AM
All the gay insults that have been thrown around aside, I’m glad to see Cel standing up for his brothers and sisters. Turkey and Palestine stand together.

So who wants to help proofread on 12/23/2023 6:52:37 PM
Mystic has some sound advice, but personally I don’t think most of it is going to help you. Beyond the differences in formats, word count, or anything else, there’s one major problem with what you wrote. It is bad. Very bad, actually. The kind of bad that writing more words is not going to fix, but actually worsen. You seem to be going for some kind of grandiose, epic writing style that simply doesn’t translate with your current writing ability. Honestly, most of the time I had no idea what was happening or how these random pseudo-poetic ramblings fit into whatever was going on, and that’s not even taking into account punctuation errors, of which there are plenty. My recommendation is to read books. Novels all share a general format and a structure because it works, and because people like it and are engaged by it. Read a couple novels and compare to what you wrote. You will immediately notice that the pace of your story is all over the place, and that your characters (arguably the most important part of any story) are just boomboxes for whatever exposition your story wants to put out. They have no personality or development whatsoever. But yeah, I don’t really know what else to tell you other than read novels and try to emulate them I guess.

Secret Hitler! on 12/11/2023 10:22:28 AM
I’ve played this before, not sure how well it translates online when half of the fun is reading people for tells irl. But I’m willing to give it a try.

Sherbet's Guide To Being A Cat on 11/27/2023 3:28:56 PM
You're a very fat cat

Thunderdome 10: Suranna vs Lux vs ??? on 11/23/2023 6:40:26 PM
Thanks to the voters and to Lux and Suranna. For a while there, all three were tied and even after more votes started coming in it looked like it could go to any of us. And yes, winning this made me forget for 3 seconds about my excruciating pain until I breathed too hard and reminded myself. In any case I’m open to dueling anyone whenever Mizal considers it appropriate, and personally I thought twelve people was pretty decent for a non-shitpost thread, though perhaps because there are 3 participants it feels like less.

Let's write a Storygame by committee on 11/19/2023 10:28:52 PM
The grapefruit is the murder weapon, naturally

Let's write a Storygame by committee on 11/19/2023 10:09:22 PM
It should include lesbians

this is for EndMaster. well, for all the goats. on 11/17/2023 11:01:57 AM
Truly an impossible dilemma

this is for EndMaster. well, for all the goats. on 11/16/2023 9:43:45 AM
haven't you already broken the terms by making this thread?