Since Endmaster has taken you under his wing, I'll refrain from point docking for now no matter how cringy your comments are. However, if you fail to turn anything in by the end of the contest's deadline, there's a nice surprise waiting for you :) just like when Ace failed to submit anything.
Well, since you've actually written the first page, I'll take a look at it.
The first paragraph is fine, but I'm the second paragraph I already feel a bit pained while reading it. You almost had something like a defining character moment, but then chose to forgo that after the first sentence. I think here you could do a lot more showing than telling. Instead of saying that she thinks they got scared of her because she was nasty to the mortal. Why not show a bit of action by beginning the scene with smiting the mortal to hell? You then could show her most defining character trait and introduce the main conflict she has.
(To add to that, it would feel funnier if you would IMPLY that her servants got scared of her because of her previous actions instead of just telling us in her narration. It would be much more interesting if the goddess was more of an unreliable narrator and thus be unaware of the reasons why they all of a sudden are scared of her now)
With physical descriptions, often less is more. If it doesn't add anything to the character, then don't write it. Things like the colors of her dress, her eye and her hair color; I glanced right over them. Plus, don't try to use things like aqua green eyes or crimson colored cushions; it sounds like it is from a bad fanfic. What often helps, is to sprinkle these physical descriptors whenever they are relevant. In this paragraph where she admitted that she is vain; let her boast only about her best features like her long braided hair.
I spotted several typos. Delt. enjoied.
There are some noticeable formatting issues. It is especially egregious when the characters speak to each other. Like, there should be some form of spacing after a ",". This makes the story very hard to read.
All in all. The scene is fine, but I think you could have structured it in a much more exciting way. Lots of things like them talking about the contestants could have been shown in a more interesting way, like these people coming out of the arena and blasting about their skills or some of them being literally captured by the goddess of Order.
Plus, introducing the main conflict is done way waayyyyy too late. I had barely any sense what was going on till I read almost half of the page. Like I said earlier, the main conflict between the two gods could have been so easily introduced by the goddess smiting the mortal and the God bringing the mortal back to life and announcing the contest. Then they both can have a small banter with each other.
It's honestly a bit unexciting to read in general, but good job writing the first page at least.
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I just noticed that the God of chaos is based on Endmaster and the Goddess of Order on Mizal. (Tip: Mizal is usually portrayed with red hair.)
You sadly didn't get their speech/writing cadences right, Mizal's dialogue was the most far off from the two. It pains me to say that you made her sound like a valley girl.
