These are the first pages of my storygame based on "Hunger Games" . Please try and tell me what do you think !

Hi all,

i'm now busy on writing a short zombie-novel for a literary contest here in Italy  (i'm on super delay!)

But i love this page and its storygames , and i had an idea.... i like to write a storygames based on the "hunger games" movie .

i'm working on the "skeleton" of the story (i use a tree chart on excel - every choice refers at one sheet).

There's someone interested in working on it ?

Really good ,

if i want to search for something wrong..... some pages too long !