Well he never believed he wouldn't get hit by a plane.

Well i suppose but you see if my twist is good you won't have thought of it. Thanks for the input.

Dammit Kiel i cant go back to my thread without needing to cook a steak dinner.

Thank you it wont be ready for a while though.

Ok those are the kind tips i was looking for. That is excellent thank you! I really have good inspiration now. The angel and demons are good with the antichrist i will use them but i wont use the antichrist as my main villain actually something much much better *grins sadistically*. 

well its not going to be ready tomorrow and if i have to i'll use a lot of religious stuff. Thanks for the input.

Just started, it begins at the rapture. Decided to ask for some tips before I got in over my head.

Discount not a religious story. It has been pointed out that this statement makes no sense. It isn't a religion focused story.

Well no. I mean think about it, everybody going crazy and evil would still retain higher brain function allowing for remnants of civilization to remain although evil. Zombies are a horde, a simple mind driven by instinct. I understand the fact that both could have similar results. They would however have different routes. 

I understand. What I am trying to say is that I am not going to fill this with bible references. I am going to use a biblical event as a setting and then go on to my own story. I wanted tips for writing about an apocalypse. The apocalypse actually is not heavily talked about in the bible. It is referenced to. This said I do thank you for the criticism it will help me rethink my plan for the story. I am sorry for not being clearer. The article is very helpful. I have been finding as many writing articles as i can.