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New CYOA site - Starcatcher.org

6 years ago
I was talking to a writer I found wandering the wasteland of Infinite Story, and they linked me to here.

It's a brand new, nearly pristine CYOA site made by a friend of theirs with just a handful of members. I was moved by this site. Still in its infancy, so innocent and pure, adrift in a world of failed public education and cats. We should take it under our wing and corrupt it utterly mold it in our image.

Seriously, it looks like it might be fun to just kind of mess around with more casual projects on. It's a little like IS in that you just sort of publish pages as you go without worrying about dead ends.

Here's the Disclaimer, which was all I could find by way of rules. Thankfully it seems free of COGisms, I guess it's a new site and the thought police just aren't in the budget yet.

Anyway, there's very few stories so far, so I'm sure any contributions would be appreciated. (The author of the Hamlet one is the one I got the link from. It's unfinished but pretty good so far and he's said he'll probably paste it over to CYS once it's finished.)

e: I already warned them about cats.

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6 years ago
Okay, I actually posted this before I attempted to create a story myself. Seems to be a few rough edges with the editor still, but it's a brand new site of course and still being actively worked on. Earlier I sent the site admin a link to this thread, so might be a good place to compile feedback and suggestions.

The issues with the editor I'm having right now are, 1.) authors appear forced to use a RTE, and 2.) as always, the RTE blows. In particular I'm having word wrapping issues that were such a pain in the ass I went ahead and deleted the story I'd started pasting over. Maybe I'm missing some obvious fix but right now I'm just too tired to mess with it. A way to turn all that off and just use plain text and html would be very, very welcome however.

Part of writing a story includes creating 'levels' which may or not function like chapters? I honestly have no idea.

Anyway it still looks like a fun site to do some scribbling on, I think it'll be cool to be in on the ground floor.

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6 years ago
Well, you failed at deleting your story, or at least it is there again. And wow, that's just crazy word wrap. I can't imagine what you did there.

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6 years ago

Ehehe yeah... prior to this afternoon, stories that have been removed/deleted are still searchable by the search bar. This has been corrected as well.

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6 years ago

Hi! I'm the admin for Starcatcher, and I thought I might as well make myself known so that people know who to yell at :P Thank you very much for trying my website and being so supportive.

I'm sorry about the text editor problem. To be honest, I actually wasn't very well prepared for people to paste text from places other than Microsoft Words (so far I've only been recruiting new writers who would be starting stories from scratch), which was an oversight on my part. The bug has now been fixed, but you might have to clear your cache and paste the story from the original source again. Or copy from the original source into Words and then into Starcatcher.

From what I've seen of CYS, Starcatcher should be pretty similar to CYS in that Chapters = Levels and Pages = Rooms. The way to link pages/rooms is a bit different. I've added an instruction on Starcatcher to explain things more.

New CYOA site - Starcatcher.org

6 years ago
Hiya, glad you made it by here! Welcome.

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6 years ago

Thanks!

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6 years ago
Hmm, welcome, and I wish you all the best for your endeavor. Are stories open for editing from multiple authors (Like Infinite Story) or is it one author account-one story (Like CYS)? While the latter is far better for promoting excellent individual stories (and preventing illusion breaking abrupt unfinished routes), there is something to be said for the former's ability to inspire creativity.

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6 years ago

Thanks. I'm planning to keep stories single-author only (I think the stories are easier to moderate this way if somebody posts something illegal). However, people can still suggest things to the author through reviews as the story is being written. Hopefully that would help with the inspiration aspect.

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6 years ago
Welcome! Fan of hangman?

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6 years ago

Oh lol I just noticed the resemblance!

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6 years ago
Oh hi, glad you dropped in. (And not juuuust because it got me points...) We're some of the most critical and cynical people in the interactive fiction community I'm pretty sure so we will find every problem with your site and describe it to you in detail, don't worry!

I use Scrivener to write with but at some point I did try pasting it to Notepad and then to the site to see if that would strip out whatever was making it weird, no luck though. Have you considered an option for just plain text and html?

Anyhow, that was my guess with levels but honestly I was tired enough that my brain just wasn't really functioning very well last night. I'm headed home in just a bit and will probably mess around with the editor a little more.

A simple FAQ would go a long way though, so just as well to add one sooner rather than later.

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6 years ago

I've discovered that previously the text editor was replacing the spaces with non-breaking spaces when you paste as plain text, and I've since stopped it from doing that :) I don't think it has problems anymore when you paste fresh text in as plain text or from webpages (it didn't when I tried), but whatever you've already pasted in there has already been corrupted by the old editor so copying it out and pasting it back in won't help, unfortunately.

Everything should be fine now though, if you clear your cache and then paste from Scrivener -> Starcatcher

I'll start working on a FAQ page, thanks!

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6 years ago
That was fast, thanks! I'll check it out and see about getting a proper story going when I can.

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6 years ago
so you want to build it up first or just destroy it now and see if it survives in an acceptable way? Fading into nothing is boring but I suppose less bothersome.

they need a forum to attract procrastinators and when it's made I shall suggest a forum-games section and invite wc kids over so I can watch it burn.

Edit: after some time on there I've decided that site burns my eyes worse than cys and will not be using it or going through the trouble of coding css for it.

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6 years ago

Ooh that's unfortunate... Do you mind telling me what's wrong with it?

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6 years ago
it's 95% pure white light

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6 years ago

Thanks! Would a dimmer background colour help?

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6 years ago
Personally (note: I am not the color man here, BradinDvorak does colors in webdev well) I'd prefer a grey but any sort of off-white or dimmer background would be very thoughtful to the comfort of my eyes. As long as it isn't a solid brightness background it would be better.

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6 years ago

I agree with Ford, because I must say that the white really hurts my eyes, I can't look at the website for longer than several minutes.

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6 years ago

It's weird, and it discomforts me to be on there. But, maybe I'll copy some of my work once I'm done working on it over there.

Also, it doesn't make any sense to me how you would formulate a story, like I've made pages but none of them are starting and connecting, etc.

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6 years ago
I was told the editor was more straightforward than the one on IS, which is clearly false but I didn't really give it much of an attempt last night. I'll figure this all out later today and post results.

The site owner has a handy contact form and email address up so you guys could always send her questions and suggestions.

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6 years ago

Hi! I'm the admin for Starcatcher. Thanks for trying my site.

It looks like I need to put some user guides on the site. On Starcatcher, you're supposed to create your choices (i.e. loose ends) when you post the predecessor page, and then select the loose ends to link from when you post the next page. It's a bit different from what I've seen of CYS (I think here you create the next page when you create the loose end?).

Starcatcher's current system is more suitable for people who like to shuffle pages around or write their story out of order (e.g. major scenes first, fill in the gaps later) than for people who write in sequence. However, I'm also developing a second way to write and edit stories that will probably be more similar to here and Infinite-Stories. Should be done in a week

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6 years ago

There are quite a lot of CYOA sites on the net, just check out the Web Originals Section on Tvtropes

On closer inspection, barring the windhammer page the rest are all abandoned/disappointing. If someone here moonlights on tvtropes, please do add more to the CYS content on that page.

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6 years ago
Except for that porn one and that wiki thing End posted awhile back, I'm only aware of us and Infinite Story. (And COG but they're a business thingy and not really very accessible even completely aside from the censorship etc.)

This one appealed to me because it seemed a little like IS, only a cute tiny baby with some one actually in charge of it still instead of shuffling along for years in an undead state.

I'll mess around with it later, but I suspect the editor is really just not going to work for me as is. The lack of word wrap when I paste and the weird double spacing when I try to manually fix it is pretty much a deal breaker unless I can figure out an easy fix.

The site has an admin actively working on it though so it may get some improvements over time, I'll definitely be keeping an eye on it.

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6 years ago
To be practical, small new sites suffer from the Network effect, the way new cellphone companies and small social networking sites do; they need to get big to survive. A new site starts with a fairly committed initial team, which then peters off as other commitments come up (to be fair, the same happened with CYS, the founders are pretty much as rare in their appearances as some deities in the stories in this site). In the meanwhile, in the absence of other people to keep the interest alive, the original site dies off, regrettably. CYS gets by simply because there's volume enough to allow for churn, and enough stable anchors on the community to make sure nothing gets too out of hand. I do not doubt the intentions of any site that starts up, but unless they have something more concrete than good intentions planned out, I question their survivability.

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6 years ago
Is that what happened to IS- the owner/mods stopped turning up? I actually stumbled on there a few years ago as well as quite recently before winding up here and read a few stories, but never made an account.

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6 years ago
Sev disappeared for several years, showed up randomly, said hi and removed the forums without explanation. Might now be dead, who knows.

Despite that it still gets new stories added fairly often, just, mostly poorly written ones and I don't know if any get actually completed.

I actually really do like the editor on IS. You can't do anything very fancy but it's very straightforward and easy to navigate, and I'm a big fan of not having to type in, move, or close an obnoxious pop up window every time I create a new link.

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6 years ago

I feel like the examples section in that particular page hasn't been edited in years; there's no sign of the Telltale games, or Mass Effect, anywhere in the video games section.

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6 years ago

Still don’t know why The Make Believe Sandbox story got listed on our TVTropes page even if it is under the “Other Games” heading on there.

 

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6 years ago
Are you sure the author didn't edit that in themselves?

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6 years ago

Someone named MuskratGorillaBoy added that one and then another person by the name of Aiguille altered it a bit. Don't know who they are.

James was the one who did the most work on that page and the specific story pages though. If he was still around he’d get some points for his patriotism.

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6 years ago
Yeah it really is too bad James decided to go into full terrorist mode because I didn't care enough about sweet gentle Harambe or whatever the fuck happened there.

Hey if anyone is still in contact, maybe link him to the new site so he can never get around to writing anything there!

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6 years ago
https://www.starcatcher.org/index.php/Member/16

Renowned alt-spamming fucktard jeffturtle/darkdoom/nightshade has made himself at home, I see. My condolences.

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6 years ago
I've already ruined the respectability by putting the entire bee movie script as my profile description.

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6 years ago
On the plus side I figured out how levels work. They're boxes you store your pages in.

And since pages are called rooms I feel good about my decision to start converting my parser IF game I was never going to finish, and could never post here because you're all too edgy for fairies.

@B___ (is three the correct number of dashes?) What would be really helpful is a 'back to a previous room' option, because as far as I could tell the only way to do this is to create a brand new room with a copy and paste description of the old one.

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6 years ago
...well I THOUGHT I figured out how to loop back, but nope actually what happened is I fucked up my story and had to delete it and start over again.

More feature requests:

1.) A way to tell the story what room to start on.
2.) A way to publish/unpublish everything at once instead of manually going into each room and selecting the button by hand.
3.) A way to test your story without making it public.

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6 years ago

Hmm it sounds like the linking procedure would be easier to figure out if I make the dropdown to browse the choices separate from the level selector for the room itself. Previously I thought using a single dropdown would make the page simpler, but I guess it's confusing people.

Yup, I'll look into these features sometime next week. Life is a bit busy for me in the next few days, but I'll work on this as soon as possible.

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6 years ago

Actually, the site currently assumes that your story starts at the room on your first level, but there's only supposed to be one room in that level. I'll reorganize the webpage to make that explicit

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6 years ago
What I was attempting to do was have pages containing setting info accessible from the first page, but I ran into difficulty implementing a 'go back' link. When I tried to get around it in what was probably the most convoluted way possible, I broke something in the page order and then didn't feel like going in and unpublishing each individual page to fix it.

I think I resolved that later by putting in a 'cover sheet' level before the first page. Anyway I've been pretty busy this past week too and it would probably be more straightforward to start a story from scratch rather than to keep trying to copy one over, but I'll likely wait on that until I finish my contest story here.

My initial impression though is that levels as they are are too restrictive. What I'd much prefer is being able to use them simply for organization however seems best for each story without getting locked into 'previous level only' when it comes to adding new rooms.

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6 years ago

I've finished coding the updates! Levels are now mostly just for organization, and you can link rooms from whatever level you like. I believe the only restriction left is that your first level must contain the starting room of your story and only that room. You can now also write or edit your story from the "read" screens, which should provide a user interface that's more similar to IS.

It's now also possible to unpublish/publish stories yourself, which hides your story if you're not ready to make it public. (This doesn't change the status of the rooms. When the story is published, rooms that are draft will stay in draft.)

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6 years ago
What are the site specs? Runtime, server type, security, etc.

I figure you wouldn't use legacy asp.net like this site lol

Also what's with the chinese? Testing character encoding or do you source from an asian company?

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6 years ago

Er... do people usually announce those? I'm honestly not sure what the convention is

Haha the website is largely based off of open source code by Chinese developers, so yeah...
 

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6 years ago
Wow. I am legitimately impressed that you've been this willing to listen to feedback and make major changes, and so quickly too.

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6 years ago

Haha it turned out that I had more free time than I thought this week. Took me ~9 hours, but worth it :)

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6 years ago
"you're all too edgy for fairies."

Last I checked we were not all Steve. There's a decent number of young readers that would probably love fairies.

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6 years ago

One of these days I should try to work on that Fairy Glamor romance story I had in mind awhile back.

Anyway signed up.

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6 years ago
I might still copy it over. In fact it's one of the maybes if I get desperate enough about meeting that six storygame goal.

Originally it was going to be a parser IF game so I'll need to figure out how to translate certain aspects over to a CYOA though.

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6 years ago
@B___, it seems your site requires the user to solve a captcha before they can log in. There's nothing wrong with that, but currently there is no audio alternative for users who can't see the picture. If you ever get the chanse, could you please add that in the future? Thank you.

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6 years ago

Oh hmm looks like I'll have to research how that works. Thanks for the feedback!

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6 years ago

I see I already have a fan on the new site. 

More interesting is the "blacklist" option which I guess is similar to an ignore feature.

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6 years ago

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6 years ago

Three minor things.

1. Logging in by email is annoying, at least give the option to log in with your user name instead.

2. The captcha validation number thing is REALLY annoying. As soon as you click the box to type in the number it changes. This should be fixed so it's not constantly changing just by clicking the text box.

3. The Starcatcher symbol is slightly bland in its current form. You should add hands on both sides of the symbol so that they partially cover the blue-green and red-yellow sections but the hands are still not quite touching one another.

This could symbolize how the site is extending friendship between members and building a community.

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6 years ago
I don't really care about the email thing because a lot of sites do that, and I just type the first letter and get the rest as an autofill suggestion anyway.

The captcha is sort of weird and I'm not sure what the point is of having it there everytime you log in anyway. It would make more sense just to prove we're not robots once during the registration process.

That logo suggestion is a really nice idea which I'm going to have to second. Hands on the star might be a cute pun on the 'catcher' name too.

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6 years ago
Can confirm: tiny captcha with clear numbers only vaguely warped will have 0 effect in stopping amateur bots.

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6 years ago

That's interesting... I might see if I can just get rid of the captcha then. Looks like it's more trouble than it's worth

Thanks for the logo recommendation! I haven't given the logo much thought before. The friendship symbolism would be nice to include. The only thing is, the logo might have to be quite a bit more complicated for hands to look good... I'll try to brainstorm some way to make a simpler version of that theme though. Maybe I should put up a poll on the logo later

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6 years ago

I put up a vote between the old logo and a new design.

The new logo is the top view of five friends around a circular table, with their heads and shoulders forming a star. What do you guys think?
 

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6 years ago
The original logo was a bit generic so I'll vote for the new one.

The Stardust feature sounds like a good addition too. I like that you can send it around to others so that you can theoretically tip detailed reviewers etc.

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6 years ago

Glad you liked Stardust! I thought it would make things a little more fun.

To make use of Stardust, I've also posted a new writing challenge for Fairy Tales (can be original light-hearted fantasy stories or adaptations of the classics). Incomplete stories qualify too as long as they're above 2000 words by Sep 30. The winner gets 500 Stardust points :)

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6 years ago

Question; you didn't make it clear, but does it have to be a CYOA or can it be just a normal story?

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6 years ago

Good point! Yeah it should be a CYOA.

Updated requirements: the story should have at least 2000 words and at least two branches (in progress or finished) to qualify
 

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6 years ago

Another question, what would make an original story qualify as a fairy tale? Are you going by the textbook example of a fairy tale? Or would just a fantasy CYOA qualify?

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6 years ago
I was wondering this too when I saw the category. Traditional fairy tales seem like a pretty specific genre.

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6 years ago

Oh hmm... I was imagining that original fairy tales would be fantasy stories with kid-friendly themes.

Do you think that definition's ok? Or would it be better if we make this challenge adaptations of classic fairy tales only (and make fantasy stories the next challenge)?

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6 years ago

Well, most fairy tales were not originally kid-friendly and only gained that reputation after Disney decided to take some fairy tales and turn them into whimsical kid-friendly movies.

Originally, fairy tales were used to scare kids and show a moral such as "never trust strangers", etc.

Such as in one of the old versions of Sleeping Beauty, Sleeping beauty was raped while she was still sleeping, had children while still asleep. And in the same story, the king who'd raped her killed his wife to be with Sleeping beauty - after his wife tried to get him to eat the children he'd borne with Sleeping beauty.

So >.< Fairy Tales used to be *very, very* dark.

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6 years ago
I read a book of the old Grimm's Brother Fairy Tales at a very impressionable age.

Maybe it explains a lot about me.

(Cinderella's evil stepsisters get their eyes pecked out by birds hell yes.)

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6 years ago

Haha I read that too. I believe in a different story the evil stepsisters got shoved into barrels full of spikes and then were allowed to roll down the hill and into the river to drown ... Can't remember the name though

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6 years ago
I definitely remember a barrel full of spikes (how could I forget o.O) but I don't think it was Cinderella. There was a princess who's maid turned on her and replaced her, and something about her having her horse's head nailed to a fence. (It would still talk to her.)

e: The Goose Girl

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6 years ago

Oh! I love The Goose Girl o.o

The maid turned on her to be married to the prince!

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6 years ago

I loved the Grimm's version. The Disney ones are too happy :/

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6 years ago

Yup, but it's still something that's meant to be read to a kid. (Although idk why anybody would want to read their children a story about rape... O.o) So while traditional fairy tales would show some dark elements, it would still be described in a way that a kid would understand. It would not feature, for example, details on the king's promiscuous thoughts as he lusts after Sleeping beauty, or the mental torment of the wife as she begins a slow downward spiral to her doom. That's what I meant by kid-friendly.

So I guess... fantasy stories that focus on the quest/adventure and do not feature overt exploration of sexuality, psychological disorders, torture, & other darker elements would qualify as fairy tales? (i.e. a story can state that a king had children with an unconscious princess, but it wouldn't demand that the reader consider the implications)

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6 years ago
That's not necessarily what first comes to mind for everyone with 'fairy tales' though. Maybe to avoid confusion, Just have them be fantasy with a sub-category of 'Kid Friendly'? (I could think of a lot of sub categories for Fantasy actually. I notice right now you only have a generic 'Misc')

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6 years ago

Yup, I was considering separating fairy tales and fantasy too... I've edited the challenge so that all stories in the "fairy tale" category or the "Fantasy -- children-friendly" category would qualify.

I wasn't sure how to categorize fantasy so I just left it general. I was thinking we could add more subcategories as we go.

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6 years ago
These would make a couple of the existing categories moot, but fantasy is a genre that covers a lot, and what comes first to mind:

Fantasy - Dark Fantasy
Fantasy - Fairy Tale/Fable
Fantasy - Kid Friendly
Fantasy - Low Fantasy
Fantasy - High Fantasy
Fantasy - Mythological/Folklore
Fantasy - Science Fantasy
Fantasy - Urban Fantasy

And aside from fantasy, looking at the other major categories you have so far, I could see room for a few H's: Horror, Humor, and History.

Fanfic is another one you may want to put in.

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6 years ago
Gotta throw in that classic moral of the story, 'don't go to sleep for so long you get raped', for the kids in there somewhere.

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6 years ago

The moral of Sleeping Beauty was probably to beware who you piss off x'D

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6 years ago
That or a warning to kids not to become a twisted, messed up author of children's books!:)

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6 years ago
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sleeping_Beauty

This goes over the earlier versions of Sleeping Beauty. I'm not sure what, if any moral they were trying to convey but clearly the cook is the real hero. Some quick googling for the 'meaning' of it all found me an angry feminist rant by a person whose first exposure to the story was apparently the Maleficent movie. No time to dig deeper than that because omg this contest y'all.

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6 years ago
How devoid of culture or despised by your parents do you have to be to not come across Sleeping Beauty as a kid before seeing the film?

I know, this contest will be the end of me.

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6 years ago
all it takes is being American.

I didn't know there was a sleeping beauty book until I was 10 - I saw the film way before that.

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6 years ago

Some of the best fairy tales are the ones that have no apparent "lesson" or "moral" to them.

A really good example of this is Allerleirauh. Now there are are a lot of sanitized versions of it, but the one I read basically went as follows:

This king's wife dies and he's so grief stricken about it, that he vows never to marry another woman unless she's as beautiful as she was. Meanwhile he's got a daughter that he has to raise alone now. (You already know where this is going)

Well the daughter grows up and wowzers! She's hawt! Just like her hawt mama. So the king is like well "I gotta get me some of that, incest be damned!"

The daughter of course isn't quite as enthused about marrying her dad, so she tries to stall for time saying she wants three beautiful dresses made of some rare material before hand, but the king is a fucking king for a reason and spares no expense in getting these three dresses in the quest to make his little girl happy.

So having completed this task, he gives her three strange little gifts made of gold. (Needle, thimble, and a mini-spinning wheel) and he says the wedding will be happening tomorrow, so she ends up escaping that night.

Of course she doesn't get far before she's covered in dirt and grime and has no fucking wilderness survival skills. She ends up getting found by some soldiers, but they don't recognize her since she's a filthy mess. Instead she makes up a story about being a poor peasant and they take her in to be a kitchen assistant.

Well she lives a meager existence of practical slave labor and sleeping on the kitchen floor, but it's better than a Targaryen style wedding.

Now here's where it gets weird. She starts feeling the compulsion of putting her gold gifts into the king's food as well as cleaning herself up and attending these fancy royal balls, since the king is still looking for a beautiful wife, now that his daughter isn't available so he's throwing a bunch of them in search of available chicks.

To make a long story short, this weird compulsive behavior eventually causes the king to figure out that this dirty kitchen assistant is his daughter and he's of course so happy and marries her.

The end.

Seriously, that's how the story ends. There is no greater message or moral to take away from it other than perhaps "Make daddy work for it." But I doubt that's what they were going for.

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6 years ago
That's sounds like Donkey Skin.

Except in all the version's I've read after she runs away and winds up a kitchen servant in another castle, dressed only in the skin of a magic donkey that used to poop gold that she made her father kill. But the prince apparently makes a habit of peeping through keyholes and sees her in one of the fancy dresses and then I think pretends to be dying or something so he can convince his parents to let him marry her.

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6 years ago

Yeah there's all sorts of versions of it.

Probably the darkest version is similar to the one I mentioned above with the added twisted difference.

The original wife dies in childbirth leaving the king with just a baby daughter. Daughter grows up, the main story takes place, he marries her in the end and impregnates her.

THEN his daughter dies giving birth to...you guessed it, another daughter! Implying the cycle will continue all over again.

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6 years ago
I feel a fairy tale contest run here would wind up with very different results than the Starcatcher one...

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6 years ago
I'm guessing a fairy tale contest here would have at least half the entries with zombies.

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6 years ago
What about something like an archive of short stories that can be browsed with the links? There would definitely be interest in something like that IMO.

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6 years ago

Would that be structured as a landing page leading into multiple rooms, with each room being a short story?

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6 years ago
That's what I was envisioning, yes. Like an intro page with a table of contents linking to each 'room' as a linear or mostly linear story.

That's not actually allowed here but the idea has come up a time or two since a lot of us do post short stories on the forum.

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6 years ago

Oh hmm... I think for the purpose of the challenge it should be CYOA stories only. I'll see about making a separate section/category for posting stories that are not CYOA though, if there's interest

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6 years ago
Well I didn't mean specifically for the contest actually, I was just curious whether a set up like that with short stories would be allowed in general. The way the rooms work would make it possible, it just wouldn't be a traditional CYOA obviously.

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6 years ago

I've made a new category on starcatcher called The Sundry Shelf for knickknacks that aren't the typical CYOA stories. There's a subcategory for non-branching stories, so short story collections can go there

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6 years ago
Ahh I was planning on doing that at some point because I didn't know it wasn't allowed. I'll probably just put Sneak Peak on and leave it unpublished instead.

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6 years ago

Hey guys, just a reminder that the Fairy Tales challenge ends in 10 days.

If you've already written any fairy tale or child-friendly fantasy stories, it would make me super happy if you could move them over!

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6 years ago
"There once was a man from Nantucket..."

Oh wait, sorry, wrong category...

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6 years ago

I'm thinking about writing something for it, though it'll be almost as rushed as my summer slam entry. How child friendly does it have to be?

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6 years ago

Let's say PG-13 :) So violence is ok, but explicit scenes would be too mature

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6 years ago

I like the new one ^-^
Makes me think of a friendly site.

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6 years ago
I still prefer End's suggestion because it made me think of something else, but the new one is nice. :P

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6 years ago

The hands partially covering the logo? I do like that idea too. 

What did it make you think of? 

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6 years ago
I'll be honest: neither suits your objective. They're good looking designs but overwhelmingly generic, they could be the logos of a google app, a sharing software, an OS, or anything really. Nowhere do they suggest that the site is about writing and/or collaboration on CYOAs. I would suggest you look for something with book/crossroads/decision/similar motifs in addition/alternative to just people standing around in formation. The people standing in a star shape is clever, I'll give you that, but they don't convey the essence of the intention of the site.

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6 years ago

Thanks! Yeah it would be really nice to tailor the logo to CYOAs. I'm just afraid that the logo would get too complicated... I'll keep trying to think of something better and put up another vote at a later date if I come up with something. Meanwhile I'll go with whichever of the current logos gets the most votes by the end of the month

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6 years ago
To keep to the star theme, maybe something like shooting stars with their trails as branching lines somehow?

I do not do or know the first thing about art however so take that with a grain of salt.

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6 years ago
Hey this thread reminds me of that time a month ago when Will was looking for newsletter material and I was like 'interview the starcatcher lady' and he was like 'i dont know who that is and also ive already interviewed everyone who matters' so B you might want to see about getting more brand recognition around here.

Have your people call my people I work very cheap.

That goes for the rest of you who dream of mattering one day too, I don't discriminate unless you're too poor.