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Hey, I'm new here, and I wanted to say, I'm excited to be here cause I finally decided to give this website a try! 

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Thanks! Are there any stories you recommend me starting on? 

If you look at the "featured" games in the boxes on the "Storygames" page, you can pick and choose by whatever genre most appeals to you, and you can be sure you'll get something interesting.

Thanks!

Welcome!

Looks like Gower already covered the basics, so just have fun and let us know if you have any questions.

Thanks! 

Hiya! Welcome to the... OH DEAR GOD! That avatar is terrifying. Kind of tempted to flip every other image horizontally and see what ungodly monsters their faces make combined. ^_^

Lol. I'd love that!

Here you go! Aren't they dreamy? <3

I can't unsee that now.  Why would you do that?

Because I'm EEEEEEEVIL. ^_^

... Kind of cool though that the second guy's hair is an exact mirror image of the first guy's. :p

The second guy is Sans after getting mad lol

P.S I love The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost!

AWHHH! Thank you! <3

No problem, you should do another version of it! Well, in my opinion...

I am working on the sequel, but so far I've only finished the first chapter ^_^

Could I like help, maybe?

Avery needs people to pose in gladiator costumes most of all for inspiration.

Yeah, that'd be awesome! If you want to give the first chapter a read and let me know if you spot any spelling mistakes or anything, that'd be great. Here's the link. ^_^

I just started reading it, but I found one error at the very beginning of chapter 1. When describing about how Zeru joined the adult gladiators, it asks, “How did you react what Zeru left?” I’m not sure if that was on purpose, but it seems like it should be asking, “How did you react when Zeru left?”

Oh, thanks! I'll go fix that. ^_^

I noticed some other things, such as two periods at the end of the sentence, but nothing noticeably annoying other than that one thing.

Will try and find that one too. ^_^

Alright. I finished chapter 1 and I really liked what you had written so far. Looking forward to more! :)

Thank you! I think recently I've been suffering with really bad Magnum Opus Syndrome, where I think that Innocence Lost was the best I could do, and the writing I'm doing for Brother's in Arms just isn't to the same standard... So I'm really glad to hear that you're enjoying it so far. ^_^

So sorry, my school ended, and my computer died, but I'll look at it, and give some recommendations!

Thanks!