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Ok so i have an idea about this woman getting a homemade video game from her programmer gf as a birthday present (the game is kind of like a Tamagotchi) and eventually, the game takes sentience and accidentally makes her life worse in the worst ways possible, and her (the player) has the choice to kill the game(and the innocent baby thing who you raised through the story) because of the pain its causing or let it be and continue it raise it with hopes of getting better

Would this be interesting? and does anyone have any feedback on making this investing?

Depends on how you write it.  It could be interesting, or it could totally suck. There is no way for anyone to tell you until you actually write the story.  What has been suggested to others who have asked similar questions as yours in the past, is for you to write the introduction or a couple pages and then post here for others to critique. 

How you handle and craft that idea will determine whether it is interesting or not.

Ok sweet! I'm working on that tonight. Thank you