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"And Adam dodges the knife, and heads for the win, and... we have a winner!"

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Didn't mean for that to be all stretched out like that, but that's the basic story anyway.

completely linear, short, unengaging, lack of gameplay, lack of plot, lack of meaning, lack of worth, spelling and grammar issues, and blank pages...

WORST STORYGAME EVER!!! AND I MEAN EVER!

wow, the sarcasm has been laid on pretty thick, both with this comment and the one left on the game. yes it was a pretty small attempt by someone, but must we rip it to shreds? it may be 'warranted', but its not needed. March will know to unpublish it just be having some one mention the name.

nate

All of you are so unimaginative.  I could IMAGINE what was happening in the story.  (that's really all I could do...)

okay, unpublished - and 12herda - it cost ya points too.

march

wow, thats way too much analyzing for that story lol. but i still think it needs unpublishing.

good points though End, just wasted on a very bad story.

nate

its definitely a gonner if the author doesnt do it first.

nate

done done and done.

march

Aw man. . .  my stupid slow computer. . .  I only got as far as "hhghjghjgbhjgbjh" before it was gone. . .

Now I'll never know what happens.

haha, i can send you a PM with the ending if you would like. Its a must know.

nate

Fleshy? Do I detect sarcasm? I do seem to recall a post where you specifically mentioned it wasn't needed. Oh wait that was this one. Naw just kiddin'

It was a real cliffhanger.

you are right 3j. it was sarcasm. my bad.

nate

Lol. Guess who's back and republished?

I don't think he's going away or getting the hint unless you outright ban him. Though I suppose you could just keep him around to use as a bad example.

i think i have seen that before somehwhere, probably Redeye, metsrock, or one of those punks that kept causing trouble. though that brings a good question. can you duel with points you dont have? meaning, if you have negative points, can you duel for points? or do you have to gain a positive amount?

nate

http://www.chooseyourstory.com/member/?Username=redeye

here is another member, its Redeye. i thought i had seen it before. he also has negative 3.

nate

you kidding? thats easy points for me every time he makes a story lol. besides, hes not causing an uproar. he just makes stupid stories. just delete the stories and make him keep making new ones.

nate

i tried to find the post where the amount was decided, but couldnt find it. however, 15 to me sounds right. though i still think its a bit low.

nate

You do know he was making these games for your benefit?

He said he would make easy games so you could get a quick free point when you needed one. I half agree with firestorm but I didn't love it. Get to the point, he unpublished it.

He doesn't deserve to be banned, he was trying to be helpful, though the story wasn't fun to any of you. At least it's not:

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The First Page

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Great, you won.

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If that story I just said got featured Id kill myself.

Heh heh anyone watch Robot Chicken?

NUMB CHUCKIN!!!!

Nah we're into pot now...

last i looked 12herda was at -87 haha.

nate

ruin his writing career? im pretty sure it was on its last leg before we got ahold of it. but only because he didnt put enough effort into his work. he didnt take it seriously. he didnt create a story. only jibberish.

nate

I don't care if he's your friend.  Hell, I don't care if he's your fricken boyfriend.  Theres no excuse for publishing the vile pheasant crap that he insisted on publishing MULTIPLE TIMES.

I like things that eat big cats that eat humans that eat cats anywhere across the globe. Maybe on mars too.

PS. Any human who eats cats are going to  die if I find out their address.

If you eat cats I will track you down like a dog to the smell of meat.

PS. I can electrocute you.

I like cats.
I also like any non-human creature that eats cats.
I like animals altogether.
I don't eat them though. I'm a vegetarian.

That doesn't mean I hate meat eaters though, and I don't think there's much difference between killing whales or cats or cows or anything, it's all the same.

Still people who eat them in weird ways to look rich are assholes and must die.
Like Chinese people who eat monkey's brains while the monkeys still alive.
Which is just silly. When monkeys take over the world China is so screwed.

Well thats my two cents for the day.