Also a good point, if indirectly Sentinel. Don't over do the sex scenes if you even bother to go beyond them getting a little affectionate. Check out the other Romance/Love stories with high rankings to get some good examples on what to do.
Edit: Completely unrelated but I found this while trying to figure out what your story was about. It was truly beautiful. Sorry for the text wall. lol *Altered to make it smaller, no actual change to text*
Spam Bot: Dont' stop reading this or some thing bad will happen! My name is Summer I am 15 years old. I have blonde hair, scars, no nose or ears. I AM DEAD IF YOU DO NOT COPY THIS JUST LIKE THE RING COPY N POST THIS OR ELSE I WILL APPEAR ONE CREEPY NIGHT WEN YOU LEAST EXPECT IT BY YOUR BED WITH A KNIFE AND KILL YOU!
Random Poster: Ahem, hello, excuse me, if I'm not being rude, may I just ask, how can a ghost type? Not being sarcastic, genuinely curious. I mean, surely you can't type like a normal person, being a ghost and all - unless you're a zombie. Are you a zombie? I suppose you could be a sort of ghost that can become solid - that would certainly make it a lot easier to kill people. But that is kinda cheating - you should just pick one thing: being able to kill people, or being see-through. Oh, and how will you come and kill me anyways? Will you stab me? Turn me inside out? Go all woman in black in me and make me jump out my bedroom window? Or, if you're see-through like I suggested earlier, will you scare me to death? Maybe possess me? I'm curious. Also, I know you said when I least expect it, but could you maybe send me some sort of ten-day warning when you're going to visit and kill me? Because I've been considering buying a new phone, and if you're going to be coming to kill me soon, I'll know not to waste my money on it. I hope you understand! Also Sum - can I call you Sum? I feel like I know you oh so well and we're kinda at that point in our relationship where we can give each other fun nicknames and stuff! You can call me Bell if you want! So anyway Sum, I'm curious - how did you die? I mean, I think that I can safely assume that it was a murder - otherwise the coroner did a pretty nasty job on your face! Or was it just a botched nose job? I have no idea how they got your ears too, but that's what you get for buying on the cheap. You get what you pay for, am I right? Hahaha! You're such a riot, Sum! I feel like I could tell you anything! Ooh! I've got an idea! A scary story! Ahem. 'I am the ghost of Gertrude Westford! I have three legs and half a Pokemon sticking out of my skull! Ooooooh! If you don't send this message to three other people, I will come to your house and STAB YOU WITH A BANANA!' Hahaha! Gotcha! Geese Sum, I didn't realise you were so easily scared! You look as pale as death! And now you just look angry. Hey! Don't you go looking at me like that! I though we were friends! SCREW YOU SUM! *sobs dramatically* I HOPE YOU BECOME A STUPID CHAIN LETTER!
