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Hi guys!

just letting you know i'm here and any help will be well appreciated as well as getting to know you guys.

i feel a bit silly coming on to the forum just to say that but still... Hi!!!!

Hello! Hope you continue to post on the forums and remain on the site. Hmm..let me see how many points I can milk from you.

Respond to my duel please..

Hey galobtter!

Why do you and everyone keep beating me at a duel!?

Man i suck at this.

Thanx for welcoming me by the way good to meet u! :)

Nah. Its just I have a trick. You can decline the duel though..

Glad to have you with us - good luck with your cool Zombie story  :)

Hi. I uhm, well, I am not sure how to say this but, My name is Aeon Spiral. I have many leather bound books. I also enjoy Earl grey tea and things.

Welcome to the site! And Aeon, where did that come from?

No one knows....

My words are like a mysterious whispering wind moving through the branches and limbs of your cerebellum.... 

Welcome! 

The more you post on the forums, the more likely you are to stay.

:D

Kool!

The reason that i'm doing a zombie story is mostly because i love kicking ass stories and that i don't know what else to write.

Ideas are welcomed. are any of you working on a story right now?

I am but this site is flooded with zombie stories... All zombie stories basicly follow with a guy waking up and seeing that theres zombie on tv blah blah. Guy goes outside sees guy j. Trouble. Tries saving guy, guy may be infected. Go to miltiary for belp. Miltary shoots you ded

Ha!

hmmm... i c your point.

if that's the case i should aim for something more different or more dramatic or something. Well it was in the movies but if there was a movie i could choose that i watched could be zombie land. That was really funny to me and my bro.  =D

The first page I already find quite cheesy IMO.  It's the same zombies as I see every time, but maybe there will be thrills and laughs later on in the story?

/shrug

Also, make sure you clean up the cart-load of grammar errors and make a habit to use proper grammar 24 / 7; it builds up pretty quickly if you don't write comprehensibly for the first time.  A lot of potentially good stories got crapped on because the writers didn't bother to fix any mistakes.

thanx.

i did expect to proof read later but i'm still trying to figure out how i'm going to lay out the story.

Welcome to the site!

Hehe beware of what I do, I just write and write then try to proof read after, I think I was on 150 pages before I did my first edit and realized just how much editing work I had made for myself

That's what I can do sometimes when I'm really into the story or inspired, i just write without knowing what I've exactly written other than what's been written in my mind and when i look again i might have sentences missing or the easiest words wrong, especially grammar.