Looking for one or two people to give what I'm working on a glance and some feed back. There isn't much there YET. Shoot me a message if you care to help. Thanks in advance.
What kind of story?
Fantasy, sorry I forgot to mention that. currently only 4 pages in with 2-3 choices per page... mostly 'character creation'
I could look through as you make it and comment on it if I see something's unclear or grammar errors and stuff.
I would appreciate it.
Sure, I'll take a look.
