So I'm working on adding some "fancy" formatting to a story. Does this layout work, or is it too much?
I like it. It can break up the monotony that is the majority of games here. :PIt also seems to reflect the subject matter.
Wow, that looks really cool. I like it a lot.
(I moved it to WW since the Parlor is usually for discussing published stories.)
The only thing you can't have too much of (before your score goes down) are blank spaces. This eliminates a lot of that.
