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Walking through the park one Saturday evening, you find a whistle lying on the ground.

You pick it up and examine it. It's a regular whistle, one that a sports coach might use to alert their players.

The only thing especially odd about it is the material that the whistle is made of: gold

Engraved into the side of the whistle is a message: "blow me"

Well, this is certainly awkward. How does one go about rejecting to blow a whistle if the whistle explicitly orders you to do so? Who does this whistle think it is? Why should you follow orders written on a golden whistle you found on the ground at a park? Who knows what kind of disease it has on it?

These questions and more will not be answered. However they continue to spiral about your head anyways.



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What is the magic whistle's personality? Is the magic whistle an entitled asshole? Is he a kind, caring, down to earth being? I kind of think of it like the whistle is a lamp for a genie xD

The magic whistle was a sassy drag queen who fell in love with her singing coach, and absolutely hates the reader solely because he/she is not the singing coach. However, the magic whistle eventually bonds with the reader, no matter her thick shell.

Or maybe some angry British dude who vows revenge on humanity, even though his attacks are lame.

Or maybe a Wal-Mart cashier who hates life in general and does no good for the reader.

Or maybe— you know, I think I haven't slept properly in awhile.

I'll just use everything people say in this thread in the story and make art for all of it xD

I do like the first one ... the second could potentially be really funny, though.

The magic whistle is an effeminate homosexual stereotype, and addresses  the player only as "sugar" or "sweetiepie".

The whistle is a stoner, maaaaan.

Updates will now be in image form. For every 3 images I make, I will release 1 so as to not spoil the story.

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3 chapters planned so far
Page count: 5

Goal: 20 pages - 1 chapter done by Saturday, July 4th