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Roy's an elder Sabbat Vampire with a boneswordarm (spelled like that). Diarmid is his ghouled cousin, a genius by scottish standards, and a total pushover. Toghether, the two are unstoppable, taking over London with the help of an evil paranoid bastard who doesn't treat Roy with any respect, two sexy nuns who are insanely weird, and the Father, an ancient fleshcrafter who's more interested in his Angels then in the mission. 

But that's all in the past. Now, Roy and Diarmid are facing their greatest challenge yet. Riddles. How will they manage? Can two Scotsman screw in a lightbulb? Or will they fail, and be unable to discover the truth behind the ancient antedevulian? Find out in Boneswordarm and You: An Aztec Adventure !

A fanfiction by Aman. 

Okay yeah, I think WW encouragment threads are nigh worthless, but a) I wanted to write that and b) points so yeah lol. Go me

. . . What happened to the cow?

It's a secret. (Don't worry, all of Roy's ghouls should be showing up mwhahahahahaha)

This hurts me because I just know Adam will be made from epic badass and mildly honourable villain of horrifying proportions (and my greatest played character) into a cartoony villain. I merely beg of you that you keep Fenris' badassitude intact.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Cartoony villain doesnt even begin to desecribe this desecration I am creating. 

I can see your opening scene right now. You'll just copy-paste the fight where Adam leapt from the walls of the hunter stronghold and hit the ground where the werewolves were fighting with a shockwave, his shadow wings and obsidian armour marking him in all his glory, using the power of the cursed sword to provide physical oomph to his terror tactics. Then you'll post the picture Quiller drew depicting the scene, and then the "next" link would be visible. Clicking that leads to a page where "Adam wakes up and thinks to himself, man I wish I was that awesome".

Time to go and beg Roy to help me

Good luck with yourr storygame submission! :)

Oh okay, now your post on the political correctness thread makes sense, hahahaha. Seems like a pretty insane sounding story, so I'll be looking forward to it.

I have no idea what this is, but you had me at 'boneswordarm.'

Boneswordarm is life. I think every single riddle has that as a possible choice.

I expect it to be the only right answer. At every junction. 

 

So far it's a pretty great option in pretty much all cases

I have to admit, I'm pretty excited about this one. I imagine it will be quite 'random', but in a fun, gripping and humourous way.

Hope so! It's certainly not an intricate or intelligent riddle/puzzle game, but I hope that it'll be fun to read ha ha

Currently finished the first riddle, which splits off into three seperate branches depending on your answer. Need to finish the second riddle for each branch tonight, and then I'll be on good footing. Want to finish fast enough to do grammar editing

Alrighty, finished 2 riddles and one puzzle, and wrote an epic swordfight. Tomorrow need to finish 5 more riddles, which hopefully will be shorter then the ones written today, and then I'll be at the finale for each path (which has now branched into 3 majors and 1 minor subpath) 38 pages so far

Fark. There are way too many riddles in this game. I have 3 major paths, and each path was supposed to have only 3 riddles, but now I've already written 8 different riddles and the main path looks like it'll have another 2 before getting to the finale floor. Ugh. This game is just getting bigger and bigger.

68 pages in so far. 

I hear ya, Aman. Isn't it weird how it seems the smaller you want your game, the bigger it seems to get? I just added like 10 riddles to my game and now up 10 more pages... I'm in the 80s? I think. Ugh. I swear the scripts start blurring together after awhile, lol.

Note: Poison is for losers. 

Got about 24 more pages left, though 12 of them should be easier since they are  sub paths. 3 more riddles until it can be transferred over to CYS! (Writing the final battle against the antedevulians)

I will be impressed once you finally have a story on CYS haha!   XD

Screw u bz xD

So close. 18 more pages. Will finish saturday night