I love you Endmaster.
WOOT!!#@#!! G0 EndMaster!!
I for one am going to wait until you finish the whole thing before reading it. It would be appreciated if you would make a forum post when that happens as well.
Will the 2 branches end up being as long and full of choices as the begging path?
Hopefully yes, but we will have to wait and see for Endmaster is Eternal's creator. :)
Will there be any chance of connecting a bit of Eternal to Necromancer? I really liked the small references.
Damn, I thought it was a single world with many different landmasses, Mortos sounded a lot like the world of Necromancer.
That's exactly what I thought! I knew it wasn't called Mortos, but still I kept hoping that the worlds were somehow combined.
Maybe, he'll make a cameo appearance?
Guess there might be a use for those wannabe eternals after all :P Just send them to attack the Necromancers while you lead a huge army against them! lol
Maybe the Necromancer made Mortos... O.o
But I want more NECROMANCER, NECROMANCER, NECROMANCER. lol
and more NECROMANCER.
Like i said above... Maybe he made the City of Morto's...
"I have the mental map set up for both of those stories the Empire's location (Or even the Felkan Kingdom)"
Could you use paint and draw that map along with Ground zero's and Necromancer's map.
Yes i thought it was a little odd, Since when does an Eternal beg for mercy?
Oh also who wanted to kill her afterwards for that?
Me, btw what is your favorite Endmaster story at the moment?
Eternal... If you mean to exclude this story from that list then i would pick Necromancer.
Really, I liked Necromancer more for some reason.
Well Urnam0, the published part of the story is already quite long and it could easily be a story on it's own. But you can wait if you want.
Well to bad Cool74, you hhahave to wait another 3,845 years before you get to read the other storybranches now. MUmuhahahaacckk...*cough cough*.. sorry..
Is it weird if I just wanna kidnap Endmaster and lock him up in my basement with only a computer and force him to write for me?
Well depending on if Endmaster;s personality is anything like his story's... You might just lock a deranged cultist who has his dogs kill mailmen. But he could also be a guy possesed Unicorns. >.>
lol effective trap there Joyless.
What if he's just a normal guy with some weird fantasies and fetishes?
Then he is not normal...
Also what is a normal person anyway? What is an average life? Please define it :o
It's not a definite thing. It is a very broad context, and, just like things like right and wrong or good and evil, it's more of an opinion than something that can be referred to as a fact.
I think Endmaster is just your average person. I mean just because he wrote a slightly awkward novel, doesn't mean hes different from everyone else here, we all have our fantasies about mutilating and torturing mormons don't we?
You wouldn't just be the average person living in suburbia would you, Endmaster?
Why pick on the Mormons? From the one's i've meet they seem to be nice people.
They're very persistant when it comes to trying to get you to change religions. I learned that the hard way (a forty-minute walk from the main street of my town to my aunt's, they didn't get the message that I was agnostic (and my cousin was Christian) for almost the whole trip home).
They were nice people, sure. I don't hold anything against them for being religious, I treat them the same as I do Christians and Scientologists, I just don't like their conversion tactics.
Alright then, just tell them to stop. Usally that works cause thats what i did. They might pop up the question once and a while tho
Enough with the religon stuff tho...
Exactly! so really nobody is normal and every society is weird right? :P
I disagree, I just think it is a very large category.
Being normal means certain things can only have very small changes and everybody must know what these standards for being normal are. If it is such a large category then normal isnt possible...
I know people that are: of various religious backgrounds, originate from different countries, speak different languages, are differently capable of speaking their languages, do different things in their free time, which can vary from playing video-games to picking potatoes (yeah, I know someone who does that for a hobby). I know people of different age, and even someone so old, that I don't know anyone else that has reached that age. I considers everyone I know to be normal, even though none of them are the same. However, if I met someone that had three eyes, or came from a different planet, I would probably consider that to be abnormal. But then again, if it was acknowledges that people had three eyes or sometime came fro Mars, then I would most likely end up considering that to be normal as well.
I remember thinking once that normal didn't mean anything, and no one was normal, but I've changed my mind since then.
I agree that everybody is normal in their own way and yet we are all diffrent. Telling somebody that they are unique is just nicer way of saying your weird. :)
Another masterpiece by Endmaster, Can't wait for the other two main branches to come out. Wonder if you'll be able to save the Empire
I suspect that one of the branchs will allow this and the other branch might have something to do with Necromancer. Just a theory tho
Bane & savior do save the memory of the Eternal guy which was part of the Empire. so that means part of the Empire was saved right?
I think he meant the Original Empire.
Will there be a way to save the original empire in the new branches? I didn't like how you have no way to save or rebuild the empire. You supose to be this huge bad ass but not being able to do anything as your home falls apart makes the chacrter look weak and the impressive things he does after feel unrealistic.
I mean if he can't rebuild when he has a comaned of entrnals how he build a empire from scratch?If Edgar the dumbest of eternals was able to do it why can't you?
Was wondering if the other branches will have more interaction with gnomes,orcs,giants, gnolls or the elves?
I was starting to wonder where all the dwarf's went...
So when do you think you will have both of the other paths finished?
The story is much too long! I can't read it in one sitting and will have to continue later, maybe tomorrow. I even gave up on trying to explore more than one path simultaneously but even when concentrating on just one possible way, I could only make it to age 55 or so before needing a serious break.
What I've seen this far is making me a little angry... The Emperor gave us so much and only asked for our loyalty in return but what do I see? Treason everywhere! PLEASE give me a branch where I can be completely honourable and slay all the traitors and burn down their villages without any mercy ever.
(coughEmpirePuppetcough) Anyway's, I have a question for you. Would you rather have this story super short to fit your likeing? or just to have one of those annoyingly long stories that you can't put down till you have finished because it's just epic?
sorry bout the harsh tone
It's okay, I actually like long stories. I don't mind a "harsh" tone but I think I can hear another tone in your voice that's.... well it's hard to pin down, maybe a little treacherous? My friend, don't forget that The Emperor is Father, The Emperor is Mother. Speaking, even thinking treason is just as bad as commiting it and you certainly know what the only just punishment for such actions is.
I agree with Cool74, the emipire had a good start but it had already started to break down before the Eternal Project. You never see this all powerful Emperor. Even if he is real and is immortal (dosen't age) he does a sucky job at maintaining his empire. Still i'd like to save the empire if i can turn it around to a brighter path. For now i will stick with the EP ending.
I LOVED IT! I'm assuming one of the two story paths you've yet to add includes when he saves the empire? Either that or I somehow missed thast branch...
Umm..... The comments above are already talking about this. Did you read the thread or just post your thoughts?
I wonder if Endmaster has an update for us?
Your not Endmaster so i do not belive this is a spolier. :)
Endmaster, how many pages do you expect the final edition to be?
Besides, any estimates on when it will be finished?
If i ask for an update will my soul be sent to oblivion after my body get's eaten by Wendigo's?
no answer? Alright...
UPDATE PLZ?! ^(O_o)^
(19 day's later) Update?
lol I can't help it, but i promise to stop asking for update's. Alright?
Looking forward to this. A "Save the Empire" and a possible partipication in the ED are two areas I'm keen to explore as a reader.
And a bit more of Alison
Since you used my name Cool74, you must pay me a total sum of $50.000$...
How bout you just give me tha wallet befor i kill you!
Internet dating is always fun until someone gets a virus. That's why you always use Trojan hardware protection.
When somebody uses Trojan Hardware just call for the Arie's Virus. :P
Good job Endmaster,
So do you think you will add on the shadowpath to Eternal or wait until the 3rd path is done?
Also can i ask for update's again?
Can i have the job back?
We should all just kidnap Endmaster and force him to write for us. That way we won't have to ask for an update every week.
And then an army of undead will burst down the door and kill us all... I don't second your opinion.
So how long have you been working on this story now?
So do you have anymore update's for us Endmaster?
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He just gave one a few days ago.
In a life-long war and being bred for combat? That's about as likable as you could get. But to your original question, yes there will be two more storylines with several endings. The "True" Eternal storyline & the ShadowGuard storyline.
CYOA.com NEWS: This just in...
The Emperor in Eternal actually Exists! This is amazing, I mean really who thought that such a person existed? We will keep upda.. uh oh... (sound of a door crashing down and screams/ camera falls to the ground and flickers on... off... on... A swordsman walk up to it and crushs the camera with his boot.)...
Hall of Infinite Doors
I don't know how much random I could stand...
I mean, certainly not a 1000 pages worth...
I am giddy with excitement. :)
So will you add the ShadowGuard path once it's finished or wait and put in the True-Eternal path with it?
Funny, I attended a wedding two days ago...
Hurray! So just 2 more major branchs and countless minor paths for the shadowpath... right? o.o
He just gave one six hours ago, chill out.
Can we ask for an update now? (O,_,o)
i just have a Q and A:
with this much preparation and time, when do you think this branch will be complete?
Can you tell me how many pages are in the new branches?
So when may we recieve an update?
:D Waiting patiently...
I ask for updates too...
Just doing more testing with the new forums, but here's a minor update.
Done with year 55.
Jumping ahead to year 65 and probably adding some more background links.
Estimated time to completion of "Project: Deat.. I mean Eternal"?
Do you have an update for us EndMaster?
Not really, since its only been 5 days.
The only thing of note is I jumped ahead to year 70 instead of 65 and I'm finishing up that year now.
Chapter 3B2 is nearly finished. I have completed the main branch leading to the epilogue.
All I need to do is go back and finish up all the minor branches and I can finally post the Shadow Guard path in its entirety.
Alright I promise i will let 7 people ask for an update before i ask again.
You kind of remind me of the little kid in the back seat that keeps asking "are we there yet?"
I was going to wait an entire week, but I can't help myself.
Is the Shadow Guard path the final section of Eternal, or are there still other parts you have to add to complete the entire story?
I ask because I'm still sticking to my original promise to myself of waiting for the entire story to be published before I read the story. I still haven't read any of it yet. I'm curious to see just how patient I can be.
I've been thinking about waiting until the TE path is completed before i start reading Eternal again.
Lol. After all those update requests you're going to wait even longer?
Anyway, someone named Zeke left a comment saying they tried to do the "right thing" and got punished. I sort of wonder what part they were referring to.
I am sitting on pins and needles waiting for this next branch to come out and now that it's so close it seems almost impossible to wait any longer lol.