Avery_Moore, The Grandmaster of the Written Word

Member Since

1/8/2019

Last Activity

10/10/2024 7:07 PM

EXP Points

4,195

Post Count

3901

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

222 wins / 98 losses

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Marauder Exemplar of Avon

Commendations

194

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Earning 1,000 Points Earning 2,000 Points Made Price of Freedom. A story-game so good that others can only hope to poorly imitate it. Oh, and being a staple wholesome site member. Has an underrated verbal sharp tongue! Hides it with "^_^" Having 1 Storygame(s) Featured Won 70% of Duels Given by BerkaZerka on 04/07/2019 - ^v^ Given by EndMaster on 04/26/2019 - For defeating the CoGite Tyrant in personal battle to gain your FREEDOM! Given by Will11 on 02/18/2020 - For being such a brilliant author and wonderful presence on the site :D

Storygames

Featured Story The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost

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You are ten years old when you first feel the weight of shackles around your wrists. In a matter of hours, your whole world is turned upside down as you and your brother are dragged away from your home in Greece to work as slaves in the Roman Empire. Now you must struggle for survival. Every decision you make will affect your future. Your life, the life of your brother and the lives of your friends are in your hands.

Begin your journey as a child, and make heartbreaking choices that will shape the adult you will become. But be careful. An act of kindness might come back to haunt you, and a thoughtless word could earn you some powerful enemies. A split second decision will determine who lives and who dies. Will you sell your soul to win your freedom, or sacrifice everything for the people you love? Will you even live long enough to see the sun rise?

Special thanks to all of my beta-testers: TinyOnion, Morgan R, Mewsly, Evan Dean Nathanael, Laha, Cookiemonsta, Jumo, Hannah Minger, Danielle L-S, eXwhYZee, Umbreonpanda, M.S.X.K. Laird, Likho and N1GHTMAR3.

And a really, REALLY special thanks to my patreons: Chanbot, Mizal, Ryan Esher and SpartacustheGreat.

You can also keep up to date on my games by following me on social media at:
https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames
https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore


Gotta Catch Em All
unpublished

Pokemon game for playing around with variables and stuff


Gotta Catch Em All (Original)
unpublished

Pokemon game for playing around with variables and stuff


Murder at the Manor
unpublished

Four mysteries in one. A man has been murdered in his stately home in the country, and you have only four suspects. Can you figure out who the killer is? It could be anyone... Literally. Because the killer is chosen at random at the beginning of every game.

Note: This game was originally made for a competition put together by Morgan R, where writers had to make the best game they could in a day. Unfortunately, I didn't get the game finished in time, so never got around to publishing it, but I stumbled across it a few years later and decided it was worth finishing. So here it is, hope you enjoy ^_^

 

A massive special thanks to all of my patreons:

Chanbot, Mizal, Ryan Esher, Turnip Bandit, Ninjapitka, John Oester, Pyrola and Cjjolly

 

All of my games are free to play, but you can support me on patreon at:

https://www.patreon.com/Avery_Moore

 

You can also keep up to date on my games by following me on social media at:

https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames

https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore


The Lawless Ones
unpublished

This game has lots of stuff.


the mystery man
unpublished , coauthor

you play as a 69 year old (you decide their gender [their name is put with the selected gender] before the story starts) who has a mysterious visitor show up at their door at 5:29 AM every day. YOU and only YOU must find out who (or what) this mysterious visitor is or else...


The Price of Freedom: Brothers in Arms
unpublished

A massive special thanks to all of my patreons:

Chanbot, Mizal, Ryan Esher, Turnip Bandit, Ninjapitka, John Oester, Pyrola and Cjjolly

 

All of my games are free to play, but you can support me on patreon at:

https://www.patreon.com/Avery_Moore

 

You can also keep up to date on my games by following me on social media at:

https://www.facebook.com/AveryMooreGames

https://twitter.com/Avery__Moore


Recent Posts

Going away party for Florida! on 10/10/2024 7:06:17 PM

Been watching footage of the hurricane in Florida... Looks like a normal Tuesday for us here in Bri'ain. ^_^


Help on 10/10/2024 6:46:24 PM

Here's a great Harry Potter themed game to help inspire you! ^_^


Avery's Animations on 10/10/2024 5:03:21 PM

Oh yeah, it will totally be coming out any day now... >.>

But yeah, I really do need to get back to work on Brothers in Arms. At first I completely threw myself into it, then I got really ill and took a step back from writing for awhile. I think, for a long time my brain assosiated writing with being ill, and I was afraid that if I started writing I'd get ill again. Doesn't make any sense but brains are weird like that. Then my confidence started to build and I got more in the mood for writing again, but a whole bunch of life drama kept happening one after another for about three years straight. I got quite a bit of drawing done in that time but very little writing. Now things seem to be calming down a bit. Knowing my life it's probably a "calm before the storm" situation and all hell in going to break loose in a month or two, but I am determined to get as much writing done as I possibly can while I actually have the opportunity. ^_^


Avery's Animations on 10/10/2024 4:56:28 PM

I'll be completely honest, I'm not sure I ever caught on to the difference between showing vs telling. I mean I've heard the phrase "show don't tell" about a million times, but if you asked me to give you an example of showing instead of telling, I'd be at a loss. A lot of the stuff I write (when I'm not writing interactive fiction) is first person, which is literally just a character telling you everything that happened to them. To me, the only difference between showing and telling is that showing is just... Telling but with more emotion? I don't know. I should definitely research the term a bit more until I figure out what the actual difference is.


Avery's Animations on 10/10/2024 4:50:16 PM

I eventually settled on "Hello my little droogies" as my go-to intro. ^_^


Avery's Animations on 10/10/2024 4:49:03 PM

This one's about choosing from different POVs. (Of course I made a point to mention Interactive Fiction when I talked about 2nd person POV.) ^_^

 

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Is mrcrimsonclean gay? on 10/10/2024 6:30:30 AM

... Yes. ^_^


Avery's Animations on 10/9/2024 7:33:46 PM

So this is the last video I made on character building. I wanted to include it as part of the last video, but the last video went on for way too long so I ended up having to split it into two parts.

 

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Am I racist? on 10/9/2024 5:11:06 PM

That was following the tragic CoG saga.


Am I racist? on 10/9/2024 2:06:05 PM

At least we can all agree that Ben is racist. ^_^