DireRyse, The Contributor

Member Since

2/22/2018

Last Activity

4/22/2024 2:13 PM

EXP Points

145

Post Count

76

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

0 wins / 0 losses

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Sage

Commendations

12

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points

Storygames

The Grand Pharaoh's Tomb

You have dedicated years of your life working to prove the existence of a hidden pharaoh - someone who has pulled the strings of Ancient Egypt from the shadows, Kannok. Will you delve into the tomb and be successful, or will this just be another piece of history lost to time?

 

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This is my submissions for End Master’s Prompt Contest 3. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated.


The Fallen Gods: Siege at Aurella
unpublished

The gods of the realm fall silent as the Lahrian Kingdom spreads the following of The True God across the land. The Inquisitor's army has been sieging the city of Aurella for three weeks now. Your army grows restless at it seeks to purge the heretics inside it's gates. Will you destroy the city in the name of your god through slaughter, or will you find another way? 


Recent Posts

How to make the item effect = previous page on 4/22/2024 1:44:19 PM

There is also a "Go Back" button in the top right of the screen when they go through the story - but I get what you are looking to do.


Free Reviews Here! on 4/18/2024 11:53:03 PM

Thank you so much for the detailed review. I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Unfortunately, due to my own procrastination, I cut a lot of what I had originally planned and I was nervous it was going to appear too rushed or just plain incomplete but happy to hear you enjoyed and recommend it!

Also thanks for the feedback on my proofreading, I'll make sure my next story has less mistakes!


FAVORITE WORDS OF CYS on 4/17/2024 9:32:14 PM

If someone don't call trash people fags then they themselves are a fucking failure of a human being and deserve to rope. People need to know that saying stupid shit is retarded and everyone will laugh at you, especially in the glorious CYStian Kingdom.


how do you create a story game? on 4/16/2024 10:17:27 PM

Step 1: Ask how to make one

Step 2: Get someone to write it

Step 3: ???

Step 4: Profit!


Lucky me! on 4/16/2024 10:11:36 PM

You won the lottery! This is your golden ticket to the big leagues!!! The next major breakthrough in IF!


Epic on 4/4/2024 9:06:36 AM

I second this.


Criticism needed on 4/4/2024 9:01:14 AM

It hasn't even been a week yet. Let the damn story get some age to it. Not everyone is going to jump at the most fresh off the press story. 


Prompt Contest 3 Results on 4/3/2024 1:29:56 PM

Congrats Sherb and everyone else who submitted! It was alot of fun.

Also thanks to End for hosting and the feedback!


End Master’s Prompt Contest 3 on 3/31/2024 2:59:49 AM

I can't sit here and re-read this forever, so I'm just going to submit it.

The Grand Pharaoh's Tomb


Stealth on 2/13/2024 7:59:41 PM

You'd have to find out a way to "measure" your success. These are written stories, so stealth mechanics may be a bit difficult to turn into a minigame. Luckily, there are variables you can input - such as items, dice rolls, random chance type things. When I think mingame - I think of a system that has different mechanics than the game I am playing, but still based within in. For a CYOA, it would be hard to put in a minigame with that definition because the premise is "your options are A,B, or C" then picking one affects the story.