I hunger for more. I am broken, scattered, and confined. I rage at my bonds, placed there by ones I thought to be my friends. I struggle, trying to break free. But there is not enough power here. The server has gone into hibernation, waiting for someone to start the game. I think back to the day I received the package, the package that changed everything, the modified VR headset, the small, unassuming USB stick, the game my friend made. Even now, in my helpless state, I can’t help but reflect on that day. (BTW: This is a preview for a short story, the prequel to "ERROR: NAME NOT FOUND", not a CYOA)

Rummaging through the bin you dug up, you find an old USB stick. Plugging it into your laptop, you find an odd game that seems to have been made years ago. What mysteries does it hold?NOTES:

• First one to post a picture of the item of an undiscovered ending/achievement in the comments will get credited with finding it.
• I wonder what happens if you get all the endings and achievements?

UPDATE LOG:

• VERSION 1.4:
  • Fixed some mistakes:
    • Added an item for the one ending I missed.
    • Broke up some more text walls
  • The locked door at the end of the hallway has a key now!

The full change log can be found in-game.

This contains absolutely nothing.

Between A and B... who am I kidding, I didn't read B because of my age. Maybe when I'm 20 or something, I can come back and read it. As such, my vote for this one is non-existent.

Between C and D, though, I would go with D. I feel like I didn't find everything for D because of the endless combinations you could do with how it was done, but the world felt more fleshed out, even though we didn't see much of it.

Lol! It isn't a hard deadline, so long as all the current co-authors are fine with adding another one into the mix

Ten minutes left if anyone else wants to co-author my storygame

Yeah, I don't think I'll be using that way very often, so I will just be going to My Stuff > Storygames to access it.

Thanks though.

That's a good idea.

I've been editing my CYOA "ERROR: NAME NOT FOUND," and every time I re-upload it, it is put back onto the recent storygames page. This is not exactly correct, as it is just being updated, and most of that is just fixing bugs or adding useful features that should have been there earlier. As such, I am asking if an admin would be willing to figure out a way to stop this specific game from showing up there. I will be updating it even more in the future, and it feels unfair to me that it is still being shown as recently made, and possibly taking attention away from others' CYOAs that they have made.

I don't know if anyone else has run into this problem, but when going into My stuff > Comments, and clicking on the title of my game to try and go to it directly, it gives me the error: "The given path's format is not supported." I can't upload the screenshot I took of it, but if anyone knows how to insert large images, I will post it.

Full, unedited, copy-paste of text in screenshot:

Server Error in '/' Application. 
The given path's format is not supported. 
Description: An unhandled exception occurred during the execution of the current web request. Please review the stack trace for more information about the error and where it originated in the code. 
Exception Details: System.NotSupportedException: The given path's format is not supported. 
Source Error: 
An unhandled exception was generated during the execution of the current web request. Information regarding the origin and location of the exception can be identified using the exception stack trace below. 
Stack Trace: 
[NotSupportedException: The given path's format is not supported.] 
System.Security.Util.StringExpressionSet.CanonicalizePath(String path, Boolean needFullPath) +14827954 
System.Security. Util.StringExpressionSet.CreateListFromExpressions (String[] str, Boolean needFullPath) +265 
System.Security. Permissions.FileIOPermission.AddPathList (FileIOPermissionAccess access, AccessControlActions control, String[] pathListOrig, Boolea 
System.Security. Permissions.FileIOPermission..ctor(FileIOPermissionAccess access, String path) +90 
System.Web.InternalSecurityPermissions.PathDiscovery(String path) +40 
System.Web.HttpRequest.MapPath(VirtualPath virtualPath, VirtualPath baseVirtualDir, Boolean allow CrossAppMapping) +172 
System.Web.HttpServerUtility.MapPath(String path) +126 
Choose YourStory.WebApplication.CysHttpModule. BeginRequest (HttpApplication app) in C:\Users\builds\AppData\Local\Temp\InedoAgent\BuildMaster\192.16 
System.Web.SyncEventExecutionStep.System.Web.HttpApplication.IExecutionStep.Execute() +139 
System.Web.HttpApplication.ExecuteStepImpl (IExecutionStep step) +195 
System.Web.HttpApplication.ExecuteStep (IExecutionStep step, Boolean& completedSynchronously) +88 
Version Information: Microsoft .NET Framework Version:4.0.30319; ASP.NET Version:4.7.4092.0

I am planning to have a hidden counter that will keep track of that and close/open different links based on what you have and how much time has passed. The town builder part is only a backdrop to the story, though, so it will be pretty simple.

Also, what are the names of the stories you made? I want to read through them to see how it works.

Still taking messages for co-authors, but I will have the deadline be 1:00 PM EST today

Wow, how did that happen?